Trust Once Broken Is Hard To Regain ~ KriYaansh FF part 3 pg 21

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -spongy-

the prologue was quite different and really amazing
kind of suits the current situation.
eagerly waiting for this FF to start.
thanks for the PM 😳

well its not related to the current situation infact its not related to d3

well no need to thnks me..infact i should thnk u for the comment thnk u soo much

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Aanchal_Kreya
pkk when i read the title i thought oh great another Kr story
but as soon as i read Asha and ritvik i was like what its ashvik's story
but hen i read the whole prologue
its amazing
update soon

omg kr to ashvik to kr..😆😆

anywys thnk u..

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: arsha-rupanshi
Nice concept.. 👍🏼
Readng ur wrk fr d frst time..
Lukng frwrd to it..
Shuruwat badia hai..
🤗

thnk u..

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: lovely7010
interesting start...continue soon

thnk u dii..

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: kreya204
Wow!! Apke paas ese ideas aate kahaan se hai???

Kriyansh ki story from kriya's pov! Hmmm...sounds nyc!
Matlab real story will unfold in dis. Cz wid rey's pov it wud b nt even near d truth! Dats wat i think!
Ye new york me hai matlab? Kya ye sad ending hai?! Kroya sab ku6 6od ke chali gai?!!! Matlab chances hai ki happy ending na ho!!!
Yaar plz...rulana nai! To happy wala ending dena...kyunki sad ending hua to mere tears mere control me nahi honge!
Jaldi se part 1 update kardo..plz! N mujhe pm bhi karna! Plz!!

dear 1st thing its not at all related to d3

so d3 is different and ya its different all together

well its sad or not u will knw in end..

yup updating

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: kreya204
Wow!! Apke paas ese ideas aate kahaan se hai???

Kriyansh ki story from kriya's pov! Hmmm...sounds nyc!
Matlab real story will unfold in dis. Cz wid rey's pov it wud b nt even near d truth! Dats wat i think!
Ye new york me hai matlab? Kya ye sad ending hai?! Kroya sab ku6 6od ke chali gai?!!! Matlab chances hai ki happy ending na ho!!!
Yaar plz...rulana nai! To happy wala ending dena...kyunki sad ending hua to mere tears mere control me nahi honge!
Jaldi se part 1 update kardo..plz! N mujhe pm bhi karna! Plz!
N ye ashwik wala part dalne ke liye thnx a lot!! May b ashwik can play cupid to d sad ending...if u give it dat way...
K update soon! Waiting...

well i can only say wait till the end u never knw😳

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: krarshanaval
interest and fabulous concept... do continue soon and pm me

thnk u..😳

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: keetha...
awesome start loved it update d chappy 1 waiting...egarly...

thnk u..😳

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Welldone Abhi great start!!!!
Continue soon n do pm me!!!!!

omg dii..

u r back haye...

aww dii i missed u soo much..

wana talk with u soon nd wana eat ur brain too..

haye anyways thnk u dii..

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Abhilasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Credit : Khushboo dii

Chapter : 1

Two peoples were arranging their stuff in their new house.

"Err rithvik can't u do one thing also properly...??"

Asha scold on top of her voice glaring at rithvik as if she will kill him at any movement.

"Baby now what..?? What did I do now..??"

Rithvik asked her looking confuse yet cute.

This was going on from last 1 hour every time Asha was shouting on top of her voice on rithvik as he was ding again and again same mistake.

"I told u nah that this thing will not be kept here but still u kept"

Asha said him helplessly. From last 1 hour whenever Asha use to open her mouth she used to say the same thing and that's it.

"Sorry Asha I forgot"

Saying this again both of them got to their work their work of arranging the stuff. Asha was in the bed room arranging the stuff and rithvik was in drawing room. When Asha opened the drawer of the bed side table she found a dairy.

"Rithvik.."

She shouted and looked at the door of the room. And over out Rithvik thought "now what did I do..??" thinking this he went inside the room before Asha could speak anything rithvik spoke.

"Sorry Asha but what did I do now..??"

He said going towards her. Asha looked at him and chuckle a little. Rithvik looked at her in confusion and asked

"Why are u laughing..?? Did I cracked any joke..??"

"no nope u didn't"

Asha spoke and show him the dairy. Rithvik looked at the dairy in her hand and raised his eye asking what it..??

"I found this dairy in that drawer"

Asha spoke indicating the drawer were she found it.

"may be this must be for the owner of the house. The land lord told me will giving this house that there will be many things of the owner as she left her stuff and went"

Rithvik said to Asha as he took the dairy from her hand and sat on the bed with Asha

"Rithvik this dairy cover page its awesome nah I mean look at it. How beautifully that two letters KR are craved in it."

Asha spoke will admiring the two letters.

"Rithvik what do u think what must be the full form of this two letters..??"

Asha asked rithvik like a small 5 year old girl.

"Umm landlord had told me the owners name was umm her named started from K only umm what was her name..?? Umm... Yaa Kriya... Kriya Ghai."

Rithvik told Asha the name of the owner.

"But rithvik K must be standing for Kriya but what does this R means..??"

Asha asked rithvik as it was oblivious question as Kriya surname was Ghai so she must have written KG but it was KR.

"Sweetheart to know what does this R means we will have to read this book"

Rithvik spoke will opening the dairy but Asha closed it.

"its bad manners to read someone else dairy that to personal dairy"

Asha spoke and took the dairy from rithvik's hand

"baby I know u well then yourself. I know u too want to read it its just that u are thinking would it will be nice to read or not right..??"

Rithvik asked Asha and Asha looked at rithvik little surprise then she remember its rithvik who can read her mind and heart and understand her and that's the reason she fell for him.

"Umm okay let's ready it"

Saying this both settle themselves comfortable on the bed beside each other and opened the dairy.

On the front page of the dairy there was a photo of a cute girl in her teens who was cute and beautiful looking girl.

"Rithvik think so she must be the owner. Aww she looks so cute na..??"

Asha asked rithvik will looking at the picture.

"Not more than you sweetie"

Rithvik spoke in husky voice and Asha glare at him.

"Rithvik stop being so cheesy please and let's read the dairy"

"Ya so start.."

Rithvik said and turned the page. And begin reading.

'Today is the start of a new adventure. New challenges to face, new memories to make, and new obstacles to overcome'

Tomorrow, yes tomorrow is my life's new beginning. Beginning of a new chapter in my life. You know I have full filled my half dream and m very-very happy. What..?? so soon you forgot my dream..??

Well don't worry m not going to be a angry young girl type anything on you as you're my best-friend nah. Well so coming to my dream guess what..?? Where I m..?? Yep you are right my friend m in the city of dream - Mumbai.

I always dreamed to come over here and now m there. I still can't believe it. You know what all I had heard about Mumbai is true. Over here people don't sleep, and over here the roads are always busy unlike my Dehradun. But still m loving the feeling of living in Mumbai.

And my new house..!! Well it's sweet and cute of-course like me *wink*. You know my flat is very near to my college and m happy for it. So tomorrow m going to join St. Louis to complete my 2^nd half of my dream. I always dream to study and I got the chance to yeah..!! m very much happy. M very much excited to make new friend over here and new memories too. I hope as Mumbai make's other people her own, like that over here people will also accept me with a big smile.

U know friend the main reason why I always dreamed to come Mumbai..?? it's because I want to dance a lot. And of-course I will dance my life over here with all my heart. M now already to dance. I just can't wait for tomorrow's sun to rise and to start my life with new style, with Mumbai's style.

Okay, friend now I got to go it's late and I don't want any black circle on my face tomorrow and ya I don't even want to get late on my first day. So good night.

I hope for a happy tomorrow.

Rithvik read all and looked at Asha. Asha was having a very cute smile on her face and Rithvik was admiring her.

"Rithvik she is so full of life nah..?? I so admire her"

Asha said once again seeing the photo. Rithvik smile at her and said

"Yep she is. So Asha come on lets read more"

Rithvik was going to turn the page but Asha snatch away the dairy and kept back in the same drawer.

"Baby why did you do that..?? I wanted to read it."

Rithvik said with confusion on his face.

"Rithvik did you saw the watch..?? it's late and we need to sleep we have to go for the shooting tomorrow morning. So it's better if we sleep now"

Asha said making Rithvik understand.

"And I too want to read but next we will read tomorrow okay..??"

Asha continued. Rithvik looked at her with a look like do-I-have-any-other-choice. Rithvik kissed her fore-head. And said good night. And both sleep with thinking about the dairy.

~*~*~

so here is the 1st chappy

hope as u like the prologue u will like this also

plzz plzz hit like tab and review me back..

have great life.

lots of love,

Abhilasha (abhi)

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Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago