ArHi ThreeShot |Castle of Glass| Part2, p7 (1/09)

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lostintheashes

@lostintheashes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Hey I just read both the chapters in one go.
I am delighted that you manged to bring the essence of the story so eloquently.
I have a Defense background and I am very much sensitive to such aspects that you focused upon.
I LOVED it 😊
I hope you update us with the 3rd and the final part of this OS soon. 😳

With Love
Pritha

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Hey you have forgotten this one!!

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dprover

@dprover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Loving the story, nice update. Used watch MASH long time ago...

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

That was beautiful.

You write so well.

The way you have written about Arnav and Khushi and their pent up emotions, is beautiful.

YOu touched my heart.

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Sona

@mistyrains

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

With every piece you write Nafisa, I feel immensely glad and thankful that you are sharing your work with us. I think I have told you this before, but you are one of the very few authors on the forum who use extreme detailing in their work - be it the emotions, or an action or something inanimate. Khushi's inability to operate on Arnav - her reasons, her admission to them, is so heartrending. Then the physical pain you've shown Arnav's character in, it feels so very real when I was reading it - simultaneously conjuring up an image of him lying on a stretcher in my mind. And that part about the grapes and the starving man - sheer poetry there. Amazing, amazing work as always! I hope you continue soon :)

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Pas_love

@Pas_love

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

came across this story today...and i really really LOVE this story!!! Khushi's feelings towards Arnav making her question her own skills...
Oh i wanna know the end...please update the last part!!! :)