One Shot....After Friday Freeze..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nattamai leaves

Karthik stares at Angel... then at Vishnu and Madhan..

Vishnu mind voice "Idhellam enakku nadakkumnu eppadi da theriyum... Ayyo.. thaniya matikitta adipaane!"

Vishnu does his usual laughter and says "Idha neenga ethir parakala illaiya"... All of them stare at him...

Karthik looks at the mama.. "Periyavare.. Oru nimisham"
The old man says... "Ennapa... "
Karthik says, "Neenga nalla theerpa solluveengannu Edhirparthen.. Ivanga veetla innum sollala.. Enakku indhaa nadu rathirila kalyanam pannikka vendam"

Sumathi's brother says "Dei.. Nee enga mamava ye edhirthu pesariya.. Iru da unna enna pannarren..."
K,"Mudijadha pannuda"
Mama: "Thambi... Naan eppadi namburadhu iva Rajinnu"

K:" Iva Raji illai"

Mama: "Ennadu??"

K:" Amam ga.. Iva Raji illai.. Iva peru Angel... Iva ennoda friend.. Ennoda Raji indha artha raathirila vara maruthutta... En friends, chumma indha kalyanatha nirutharathukkaga, ivala kootittu vandhanga"

Sumathi's bro comes charging...

Mama: "Dei.. Nilluda.. Karthi thambi.. ippo puriyudha naan en unna katta sonnenu... Indha maadhiri edavadhu irundha veliya varumnu thaan"

K:" Naan onnu sollatuma?"

Sumathi's dad: " Enga veetla yaarum avar varthaikku edhir vaarthai sonnadhu kedayadhu"

K:"Please.. Enna solla vidunga"

Sumathi's bro: "Edho avar irukkarennu nee ninukitu irukka... Avar mattum oru varthai sollatum.. Unna enna panrennu paru"

Mama: "Ellarum summa irunga.. Indha edathula, andha paiyan unmai sollanumnu avasiyam illai.. Avalo siluvaya pottukittu irukka... Ivan thali kattinaalum ava kayatalam.. Irundhalum.. avan katta thayanguran... sollu pa"

K:" Ungalukku enna theriyanum... Oru ponna kalyanan panni kudukaradhu edhukku... Andha ponnu innoru veetukku poyi.. kundru mela irukkara vilakka maranumnu... Andha ponnu andha veetla ellathulayum kalandhu kittu.. kozhandhai pethukittu nalla irukka... Aana.. naan sollaren.. Enakku unga ponna pidikalainniu... Naan Arun pathi sonnadhu poi ne vechukunga.. Raji yum poi ne vechukunga..."

"Yen poinu sollanum?"

Everyone turns... Raji is at the door... and with him is another guy...
K:"Raji?!!"

Raji:"Cha... Pesadha Karthik... Nee idhu First-ay Rajinu sollarathukku munnadi, avar kitta idhellam pesi irukkanum.. Ippo pesara??"
K:"Raji... adhu vandhu..."

Raji:"Ippo idhu vendam... First avar kitta pesaren"... Ivar dhaan andha Arun.. Arun.. Neenga Sumathiya kadhalicheengala illaya"

Arun"..."

Sumathi is shocked..

Raji.. To Vishnu and Madhan..." Enga veetu vasalla ninnathukku.. Neenga vera yosichu irundheenganna.. Indha Angel vetukku poyirukka vendam"

K:"Eppadi Raji.."

R:" Nee sonna illa... Avan 20 days leave pottirukkannu company-la phone panni kettennu... adhu thaan starting point... Andha number vechu.. avan companyla kandu pidichen... Shakthivel andha company-la thaan velai seyyararu... Avaru... Nethi Arun vandhuttan.. Idhu thaan India number nu kudutharu... Naan Arun numberukku phone panninen.. Avan aludhuttu irundhan...

Onnum kudi muzhigi pogala... Ippa kooda.. Anga panjayathu thaan nadakudhu.. Neenga poneenganna.. Ennoda Karthikka save pannalam.. Ungaloda kadhala kapathalam.. Inga azhudhuttu irundeenganna.. Naanum serndhu azha vendiyadhu thaan.. appadinnu sonnen..."

Enga appa ennanu kettaru.. Avar kittaka... Karthikku naalai kalyanam.. Ana andha ponnu inda Arun-a thaan kadhalikkara.. Avaloda kadhala kapathanunu sonnnen...

Enga appa.. Seri.. po ma.. Yenna ... Kalyanam garadhu aayiram kaala payir.. Pidikadha vangala kattikka mudiyadhunnaru...

Poyi Arun-appa amma kitta pesi, Arun-a kootittu varathukkulla.. Neenga Angela kootikittu.. inga drama pannureenga "'


Mama: Yamma Sumathi.. Innoru dhadava kekkuren.. Nee Arun-a kaadhalikkariya?

Sumathi: "Amam"

Sumath's bro & dad:"Unna..."

Mama:" Andha kaalathula swayamvaram thaan nadakkum.. Enna ponnunga karuthu sudhandhiram irundhuchu.. Ippo illai.. Adhu naala thaan.. Indha kattaya thirumanam nadakudhu.. Karthi thambi...Raji.. ungalukku Satyavan.. savithiri maadhiri.. Ungala vandhu kapathina...Ini naan pesa edhuvum illa"


And leaves...

The entire crowd talk to themselves and disburse..

Karthi comes to Raji and says "Asathitta Raji"

Raji:"Naan thaan sonnene... Unna naan vandhu oru kudhirailla vandhu kapathuvennu... ippo multiple horse power irukkura carla vandhu kapathinen... Seri seri.. oru thanks sollittu nee usuall podara coolers pottukittu.. oru chocolate-a kudu..."

K:"Nee irukkukiye..."



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Ramya05 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Friends.. My first try with a one shot FF.. Feedback is most welcome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Asathitaaa ramyaa..love you for this short one😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Eppadi idhelam thaana varuda ramya😆

1st FFye best FFva koduthirukkenga 👍🏼

keep it up👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot friends.. Oru vidha bayathoda thaan ezhudhinen...
Edho Exam ezhudhina tension madhiri irundhadhu...


Ippo.. Unga comments-ala paasagitta sandhosham.. Thanks :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ramya, excellent os... raji's dialogues ellaam super & the way you incorporated the kuthurai part. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Ramyaa...👍🏼
Good JOB...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super Ramya 👍🏼

a bit late comment from me 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super ramya 👏

Keep rocking...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super Ramya...A good try..👏👏

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