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Posted: 11 years ago
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here I am again with my poem but this is a love poem
dedicated to pansh fans I love them a lot
important note:
if u don't like pansh don't read it
it is kd's feeling for panchi
my secret love
I want to share my feelings
and I don't know how to start
but every single word I say
is coming from my heart


the 1st time I meet u
all u said was"hey"
it was really a simple word
but it took my breath away


u were very fun to talk with
u were extremely sweet and kind
I was in love with every thing u said
u were amazing in my mind


u fill my day with brightness
u lift me up when I feel blue
u make me feel like I'm some special
so l'd anything for u

for u I'd walk across the desert
so, hot without a breeze
for u I'd driver into the ocean
and be swallowed by the seas

I barley even know u
so this may be surprising
there is nothing u can do wrong
because ur flawless is my eyes

I always wonder were r u
and wish I would be there
u r probably so far away
but I can feel u everywhere

u r the constant beating in my heart
u r the blood rushing through my veins
u r the light glowing from a moon beam
u r the crystal droplets in the rain


I care for u each hour
I dream of u all week
u r the last person running through my mind
before I drift to sleep

I am so grateful that u r in my life
maybe some day we r together
I love u and only u
and I will always will-forever

I hop so u like
and I even wanna u guys to delicate some thing for kd, rv, kiya, panchi u can post here 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow yaar 👏
Mast poem hai... Lovely... ⭐️
I think humme ek poem section bhi start karna chahiye...
Whatz say guys...😉
U toh r just amazing...
Plzzz write more 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dear
Its awesome
too good
thanks for sharing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyy Shruthi.
Wow...kya too good poem hai...
Mera pansh heart toh garden garden ho gaya...thank u...😃..
Simple yet deep emotions..
N u r good with words..
Loved it...

Neha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The poem was adorable n cute jst like our pansh...
Lovd it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are very talented surthi
Kitney din hogaye
mere pansh ko kitna miss kiya mene
But thanks to you for this
its awesome
loved it
keep writing more poems dear


Luv u
Ishita
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey sruthi. You are a very good poet. This was so beautiful and pure.
Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Wow yaar 👏
Mast poem hai... Lovely... ⭐️
I think humme ek poem section bhi start karna chahiye...
Whatz say guys...😉
U toh r just amazing...
Plzzz write more 😃



thanks yaar.u know I love to write things on my own.but studying the books a writing exactly like wat was in the book make me crazy.i am gonna continue my os on the buddies tomorrow do read .I was not able to write because I was having exam tomorrow is a study holiday so I will continue it on that day.

and thanks for commenting 😊
love u a lot 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneha02

<font size="2">Heyyy Shruthi.</font>

<font size="2">Wow...kya too good poem hai...</font>
<font size="2">Mera pansh heart toh garden garden ho gaya...thank u...😃..</font>
Simple yet deep emotions..
N u r good with words..
Loved it...

Neha




thanks.I am glad to know that u loved it.
pansh... 😳 😳 😳 (they r my sweet hearts)

love u dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MyLifeMyRulz

You are very talented surthi
Kitney din hogaye
mere pansh ko kitna miss kiya mene
But thanks to you for this
its awesome
loved it
keep writing more poems dear


Luv u
Ishita





thank u so much ishita.this poem is nothing compared to yours, geet,anjali, tina writing skill u people all r so awesome
I love u all for that 😳


love u to dear 😳

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