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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG !!! What a update...amazing
Loved viren's naughtiness and jeevika's blushing 😊
finally virika married...:)
Fabulous update
Brilliant
super
Looking forward to see more virika's romance 😉
Thanks for the pm
plzzz continue soonn
updates very soon...plsss
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Posted: 11 years ago
the ending truly truly trulyyy touched my heart!!!!
for me writing wedding sequences is the hardest, but I've never come across someone who put it together as beautifully as you did my love ❤️
fabulous job!!!!
ur writing is worth all the praise in this world!
please update all your other stories soon tooo! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
i know
i dont want to ask this
but i cant wait read more
so please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshiasushma

i know

i dont want to ask this
but i cant wait read more
so please update soon


Maybe Tonight!! 😆 😊
Or May Be Now!! 😕
I Don't Know!!
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Posted: 11 years ago



do fast ya waiting to read more
Edited by arshiasushma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeah yeah
me too want an update!!!!
do fast fast
i m waiting!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter ~ 14

Viren's POV

I Entered The Room To See The Balcony Door Open. I Saw Jeevika Standing There Lost In Thoughts, Staring Far Into The Sky. I Moved Towards Her, Hugging Her From Behind, To Which She Smiled.
V - "Like The Atmosphere, It's So, Uuuhhhmmm, Romantic..." I Said Kissing Her Neck. She Shivered A Bit Smiling. I Rested My Chin On Her Shoulders. "Remember I Told You Yesterday, That Something Was Missing?" She Nodded. "Wanna Know What?" She Remained Silent Guessing The Answer, And Then Giving Up She Again Nodded. I Lifted Her Up In A Bridal Style, And Took Her To The Bed. Placing Her On It, I Adjusted My Self On Top Of Her.
V - "Well The Answer Is, The Mangalsutra That Makes You Mine Forever." She Smiled, And Blushed.
V - "Tonight You'll All Be Mine Wifey, Till The End Of Everything..." I Said As I Kissed Her Tenderly.

Author's POV

Early Morning Sun-rays Hit Jeevika's Face Disturbing Her Sleep. She Squeezed Her Eyes. Turned Towards Viren Who Was Sleeping Peacefully Hugging Her. She Slowly Got Up Without Disturbing Viren. And Left For Shower. Coming Back She Placed Her Towel On The Chair Before The Dressing Table, And DecidedTo Wake Viren Up.
She Bent Low To Kiss His forehead When Viren Pulled Her In Him And Rolled On Top Of Her.
V - "Romancing With Husband When He's Asleep Not A Good Idea Wifey.."
J - "Dramebaaz, Liar, You Weren't Asleep! You Were Wide Awake!!"
V - "Aaahaan...Now Give Me My Morning Kiss..."
J - "Get Up And Get Ready! Leave Me I'll Go Help Mom With Breakfast."
V - "Not Unless You Give Me My Kiss..."
J - "Viren..." It's When They Here A Knock On The Door. "Leave Me, Lemme Check Whose It..."
Viren Rolled His Eyes, And Freed Jeevika.
She Opened The Door To Find Vedika And Virat.
Ve - "Bhabhi What Took You So Long To Open The Door, And Bhai? Why Aren't You Up Yet?" She Said Settling On The Bed Along With Virat Next To Her And Jeevika Behind.
Vi - "Mere Bhai...You Look Really Tired...Kal Raat So Nahi Paye Kya??" To Which Jeevika Blushed And Viren Smiled.
V - "Tu Ruk, Teri Shaadi Ho Jane De...Then We'll See..."
J - "Vedika, Where's Mom?"
Ve - "That's The Reason I Came Here For, Mom Is Calling The Two Of You For Breakfast. And Also, Bhai, I Need To Do Some Shopping Before I Leave For London. So I Want You, Bhabhi And Virat Bhai With Me..."
V - "I've A Meeting With My Client Vedika, I Can't Come, You Three Go Along..."
Ve - "Virat Bhai, I Guess You Should Also Leave For Office Then I'll Go With Bhabhi Only, She Not Like You Two, Work Is Always First For You'll..."
She Left Stamping Her Feet.
V - "Vedu..." Viren Tried Getting Vedika's Attention.
Vi - "Bhai, You Get Ready I'll Make Her Happy..." Virat Said Going Behind Vedika.
J - "Viren, You're So Bad! Made That Poor Girl Sad..."
V - "I Know, Right!? But I've No Idea What Time It Will Take In Court, And Then In Office..."
J - "Whatever, Make It Upto Her First!!" She Said Going Out Of The Room Leaving Viren Inside.
As She Entered The Dining Room She Saw Virat Trying To Make Vedika Happy. Jeevika Joined In, While Viren Came On For Breakfast. Jeevika Served Everyone As Mom And Dad Also Joined. Vedika Just Had A Bit Of It And Left For Her Room. While Jeevika Glared At Viren.

In Virika's Room

Jeevika Was Placing Viren's Stuffs On The Bed.
Viren Pulled Her Towards Him. V - "Angry!?" He Questioned Resting His Chin On Her Shoulder And Glancing At Her.
J - "Very Much! That Poor Girl Is All Sad Because Of You Viren!"
V - "What Do I Do Now!?"
J - "I Don't Know, You Figure It Out!" She Said While Moving Out Of The Room, When Viren Pulled Her Close Again Making Her Face Him This Time.
J - "Now What?" She Said Resting Her Both Hands On His Shoulders While He Smirked.
V - "I'm Going To Office, And I Need My Kiss! And Also My Morning Kiss I Didn't Get It..." He Said Making A Sad Face.
J - "How About A Deal?" He Shot A Questioning Look. "I'll Give You You're Kisses, Only If You Make Vedika Happy!"
V - "Soch Lo, If I'll Succeed In This Deal, You'll Have To Do Whatever I'll Say..." He Said Smirking.
J - "We'll See..." She Pulled His Hand, "For Now Mr. Lawyer You're Getting Late!" She Said Tapping Her Finger On It.
V - "Okay, Bye. I'll Meet You Guys At The Mall, Just Text Me The Place.."
J - "Hmmm.."
He Hurriedly Picked Up His Stuffs, And Before Leaving; He Placed A Soft Kiss On Jeevika's Lips. She Stood There Blushing, "Take Care" And He Replied With A Genuine Smile And Left.

So Here You Guys Go With The Next Update!! 😆 LOL! I Know It Might Be Disappointing! 😕 😆
Sorry For That!
And A Big Thanks To All Of You!
Thank You Keany, Sammy, Aayu, Arushi And Every Single Person, Kind Enough To Drop A Like And Comment! Means A Lot; Lot More To Me! Thank You!!! ❤️
Edited by RiddhiTacker - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres 😊
yipeee u updated that too so early😊😃
love u lots❤️
keep updating like this😆
but that was short 😔
dont u think
i want long update next time😳
the update was too awesome👏⭐️
the morning romance
the missing thing"mangalsutra"🤗❤️
eeekkksss...😳☺️
i loved it to bits❤️
u r perfect riddhi👍🏼
just love u🤗
i love virika😳
the simplicity in ur story is awesome👍🏼
awww hope viren pacify vedika😆
i love most of the lines😊😳
beautifully written👏
but plz make it bigg😆
u know what i love this story so much😊
whenever there is nothing to do here i read ur story from starting!!!😊😃😃
just love it❤️
keep continuing 😃

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update!!!
aww...virika's romance😳
too cute
Vedika is upset coz of viren😭
bt i'm sure viren will make it upto her..
Thanks for d pm
Do update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww so cute update
Loved it
Was so lost in ur update
It was superb
Loved every part of it
It was just amazing
I am really in love with ur story
Love to read it
Waiting for the next update
Wanna see how viren will make vedika happy and about virika deal !
Do continue soon
Thanks for the PM
Keep thinking like this and giving e sweet updates like this !
Edited by cuty_piee - 11 years ago

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