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*A* Boy/Maanu* Can* Do* Everything* For* Girl/geetu






In present scenario the fast forward culture is taking in its place in every field. Our children starting their primary education with

A*B *C*D...


Rather than the way we learnt with our mother language. It is revolutionary period for all generations must sat this is good change only. There is nothing to blame anyone.
Here I am presenting something new with these alphabets

A*B *C*D*E*F*G

PROLOGUE



*A* Boy/Maanu* Can* Do* Everything* For* Girl/geetu




Let's see how the title be justified in maaneet fan fictions world.



"A now say it" asked lakshmi with calm tone not wanting to shout on sweet little angel geet. Geet gave her sweet dimple smile showing her teeth's melting lakshmi's heart. Lakshmi signed defeat she cont even take out her anger on this small kid. oops angry who can get angry on this bundle of joy. Both are sitting in lavishing Khurana mansion study room while Lakshmi amaranth singh khurana trying her best to make her say few words. Yes you heard right this is study room of geet handa 3years old struggling to learn her 1st words in her baby language. Patting geet dimple cheeks with affection Laks started her session again.
Lakshmi (Laks) is in mission to learn geet some words before geet start up with her school. "A for"questioned laks showing geet wrapped cad berry chocolate. Geet face brightened like mercury lamp seeing her favorite chocolate. Without any delay geet shouted with high voice "apple" from her pinkish lips. Laks signed in relief geet snatched chocolate from laks hands making her grin widely.


"God help me now" prayed Laks silently before coming up with next word. "B for" asked laks with terrified expression making geet to chuckle with her facial expression. "Umm B fal B fal" thought geet for some time still numbing her chocolate mercilessly. Her brain forgets what's next after pause of few seconds geer grinned as she remembers what is next.


"B fal maanu" whispered geet with slight blush. Laks hit her head with right hand actually she wants to bang her head somewhere sigh. This is the thing happening when she started there secession."Everyone will say B for ball or boy or balloon but this is my nannu pannu Geet" thought laks chuckled for her own condition.


"Geetu kaun tuje ye sab seekhliya" asked Laks taking geet in her lap. Geet smiled shyly laks felt like her head is spinning. Geet blushing all the while laks waited impatiently to get her answer. She knows it is the result of her best friend Rano pampering geet is saying like this. "bolo na geetu" asked laks nuzzling geet's cheek. "maa guli guli holahe hai muje" said geet laughing her heart out. "mumma ne muje bathaya" said geet in her baby language panting slightly with her laughing secession.



"mumma?? kab ise kyu bolegi tuje you know right B for boy" asked Laks with confused expression. "aley aap ko nai bata" ("arey aap ko nahi patha") asked geet laughing like it is must known fact by all here laks even don't know about that. Laks shakes her head negatively she is desperate to know what makes her say like that.


"aley mumma ne muje bathaya ki B fal boy. Tho maine maanu ko bine kisiko nahi channthi haina. Ischiliye b fal boy my maanu only" said geet revealing her secret laks just laughed at geet's own assumptions.

Geet continued with glowing smile on her face "aap ko patha hai A*B *C*D*E*F*G ka mat lab "asked geet near laks ears.
*A* Boy/Maanu* Can* Do* Everything* For* Girl/geetu




Completed geet with cheeky smile like she completed a big task.
"Geetu mai nahi karungi kuch samji thum. Mai kyu karu sab muje dat raha hai saying meri wajese teri parents yaha nahi hai. Maine kuch nahi kia.ye sab meri waje se horaha hai. Mai tujse nafrat karthi hu geet" shouted maan coming there with tornado speed who is listening to their talk up to now. Left from there with angry face glaring at geet who is looking at him with cute questioning expressions.




Let's see humari cute angel will win or our maan
And ha this story will contain story of all phases. From child hood to maaneet love story how it progressed how they faced all things etc. completely filled with fun, nok-jok, maaneet cute masthi, their passion love care all essence.
So here is the start up for this I am just giving this as New Year gift hope you all like it.
Don't think deeply about this OK. Your questions in part 1.like why maan said like that what happen between them etc. don't forget that this is just fun loving story only.







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# 1 *A* Boy/Maanu* Can* Do* Everything* For* Girl/geetu


11 life long promise


12 Cute innocent teacher


13 New bonding's


14 Akshrabhyasam


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Laks is fully busy in maaneet to notice them but Vidya saw them. "Mamma papa" shouted geet breaking both of her patents trance. Maan let her go to her parents as he knows she is missing her maa from night. With high difficulty geet reached her parents keeping bunch of her lehenga in her fist smiling big.


"Gudia" whispered rano hugging her close to her heart Mohinder also hugged both of them leaving his inhibitions not bothering about anyone.

"Sorry for interference but this is school remember" mohinder heard amar saying giving his back to them. They parted away from the hug rano blushed slightly looking away.

"Had hothi hai amar bas bhi karo ab" chided Dadi with stern look. Amar dismissed her look by giving his famous grin dadi looked at him in disbelief thinking "I wonder is he the same amar who is roaring on staff few minutes back".
Maan pocked on mohinder hands hinting him to take him in his arms which mohinder agreed willingly for his wish. Maan grabbed his geetu hands in his making rano stand beside mohinder very closely.
"Maanu mumma" geet grinned big showing his mumma to her maanu.
"Geetu ki mumma mera bhi mumma hai haina na mumma" asked maan looking at rano stealing glances at laks for her permission as well.

"Ha beta tera bhi mumma hai in front of what you did today for geet if we say thank you it is not enough bless you beta. You can call me whatever you wished for" Rano completed her emotional speech to witness two pair of confusing eyes looking at her like she is some alien.
"Mumma ye kisa speech hai" questioned maan with most adorable confusing eyes not understanding depth of her words making all chuckle.
"Maanu kya" Geet whispered in maan's ears as he is busy in talking with her mumma.
Maan grinned at her like stupid not knowing what to answer pointed at rano. Amar and dadi also looked at her for an explanation from rano.
"Kuch nahi maanu forget this and tell me what you want to do today" mohinder tried distract maan as he know little boy mind won't be able to understand what big thing he did for his gudia.
His attempts were worth enough maan instantly smiled at him thinking what to and discussing with his geetu in their baby language making all chuckle for there antics.
"Maa I will tell you what happened" laks said started narrating what exactly happened few minutes back showing pics in cam.
"Oh I missed such a blissful moment" amar said with sad expression carrying pics in cam with his calm.
"But I can imagine everything with my eyes amar" dadi said in trance feeling bit emotional for the revelation geet first time entered in to the school. Laks placed her hand on dadi shoulder to give comfort who is her maa more than of MIL.
"Maan I am really proud of you my son" amar mouthed taking maan in his arms kissed him on his forehead. Maan copied his papa's act not knowing they all praising him.
"Mohinder ji kya ye sach hai geet peheli bar school aaye kya?" questioned amar still unable to believe the truth he heard from laks.

"Ji ye sach hai aur hume is bare mai bad mai bath karlengi. I have many things to discuss with you" answered mohinder with discomfort feeling ashamed for having family like his. Amar sensed matter is serious so her let it go much to mohinder's happiness.
"Maa first tell me why school is in this condition?" questions laks changing the topic.


"HM saying they are not getting any funds lakshmi. Every year we are sending them na we should know who is behind all these." Answered dadi feeling disgusted for doing such a thing whoever they are.
"Maa as far I know this village surpunch handling all these things. Don't worry I will see that matter" announced amar making his maa shoulders free from any burden. Dadi maa nodded at him ones amar decided something means that task is completed. Laks eyed at him saying not to get hyper showing kids presence.
Mohinder got hint of what they were talking he thought to tell them what he know when they are at home. "I hope she didn't give any discomfort to anyone" rano asked meekly knowing about her daughter.

"Mumma milky gi.." Maan's voice faded away as amar pressed his palm on his mouth shutting him.
"Bilkul nahi ye thufan bahut achi hai" laks said giving appreciating look to amar.
Rano and mohinder muffled there laugh listening "Thufan" name for geet. Duo knows handling their daughter in not cake walk when it comes at nights.

"Maan if you say them she is crying at night then they won't send her geetu to our house again." Warned amar making maan to look at him who is wriggling in his hold.
Maan's eyes widened for this he hurriedly whispered in amar ears "Kuch nahi bathavungi promise" in fear of losing his new found friend.

"Hello vidya madam I am sorry I didn't saw you before how are you" vida heard amar wishing her with high respect. "Its ok sir don't say sorry to me. How are you all" replied vidya politely.
"You said you want to discuss something with us?" dadi asked vidya after initial talks remembering there last encounter.
"Like god heard my words it is done already" thought Vidya then explained for what purpose she wants to meet them.

"I really appreciate your thoughts Vidya I will help you in everything" assured dadi feeling proud vida ideologies and thoughts to do something for village.


"mam one more thing about geet's school" Vidya started but stopped when laks given word she don't have to worry about geet's education.
"Mumma buk lagi" all heard geet complaining to her maa making a face. Maan also nodded his head agreeing for her words.
"Ab agaye dono line pe" murmured laks winking at maaneet.
"Ha badi aaye complain karnekeliya. Kuch khathi nahi agar kuch diya tho" taunted rano making all chuckle at her words.

"Humari ghar chalo amar we will celebrate today in my house" mohinder invited feeling so happy today.
With constant pestering of rano all agreed to go handa haveli. Laks and amar sat in front seat with maaneet while dadi, rano and mohinder sat at back seats all headed to haveli.
"Gudia you are looking so beautiful today. Lakshmi ji you are giving so much to her" rano said with hesitant look. She haven't given thought her gudia wearing expensive orments in her happiness up to now.

"Rano first of all cut that ji and secondly it's my gift for her so be silent in that matter" laks answered glancing at back seat showing her big eyes to rano.

"Wow laks geetu see I love lakes so much" excited maan shouted watching view of big lake on their way.

"Maanu hum kheli kheli" Geet asked remembering there last play at Temple Lake.


Maan said yes for her demand how he can say no for her geetu.
"Sukanya see someone came at outside" sukanya heard her MIL shouting from hall. Cursing all under her breathe she came out side from kitchen to see rano and mohinder stepping down from expensive car. Her eyes landed on geet who is looking so pretty in that dress and her eyes popped out watching accessories she is wearing.
Her expressions changed when she saw mohinder calling her "Babhi see Khurana's came to our home welcome them" mohinder introduced all of them to Handa parivar.
Niranjala devi (ND) warmly welcomed all of them while sukanya as usual faked her smile hiding her J look. ND is impressed with their down to earth nature when amar and laks taken blessings from her along with maan.
"Maanu aavo" Geet dragged maan with her when all settled in the hall.
Maan admired that small house his heart liked that beautiful haveli. "Geetu is it your room" maan questioned maan thinking she toll will have separate room like him.
"Maanu ye ye" geet showed her broken toys to maan which is kept in basket securely not answering his question.


"Geetu you did this right" maan questioned looking almost all toys are with half life's.

Geet grinned at him showing her teeth they both started playing with those toys.
In hall ND got busy in talking with all while sukanya and rano got bust in preparing lunch.

"Ji where is he we haven't met him at" dadi enquired about darji. "He went for some work will be back soon. Come first have lunch he will be back any time" ND answered leading them to dining area.
"Wow you both are here already" surprised laks asked looking at maaneet sitting at one plate waiting for them.

"I know you all don't have habit of having food by sitting on floor but sorry in villages those facilities won't be available. " ND said feeling sad as they all settled on stools on floor while plates arranged in front of them neatly above another small stool.


"Oh don't say like that at starting we used of all these. Comfort we had now come after amar came in to our lives only." Dadi answered dismissing her talk. Amar raised his invisible color looking at his lucky she rolled her eyes smiling at him.
"Arey maan let her eat peacefully come here" ordered laks as both eating from one plate sitting on two stools. Like obedient kid maan tried to stand on his feet geet grabbed his hand with her messy hand making maan frown.
"Geetu" maan growled making yucky face looking at his left hand which had curry distributed all around.

"Maan she won't leave you now let it be sit there only." Rano intervened looking at geet who is looking at maan with complaining eyes.
Without any option maan sat there rano also joined with them to fed geet.


"Mumma maanu" rano heard geet saying closing her mouth when she tried to fed her. Rano rolled her eyes how he can fed her when he is so small "Agar mana kiya tho Thufan meri jaan lelegi" thought rano with helplessness.
Maan taking some food in his hands adding lots of curry not knowing how to mix with rise properly. "Haaa" Geet screamed on top of her voice when she ate first morsel of food from maan hands.

"Ye le pani peevo" Rano given water wiping away her eyes which were red due to chillness. "Oh geetu sorry "maan apologized feeling sad for that. His mumma will give his food after mixing with curry in his hurry to fed his geetu he forget that.
"Maan its ok beta she won't eat any curries will eat dal all ways ab thum apni food katam karo" Rano makes him understand it's not his mistake. Maan nodded his head but still feeling sad rano left them when laks asked for something.
"Maanu achi hai ab" all heard geet saying numbling her food which is fed by maan with dal.

"He is the Juniour Khurana" murmured amar looking at maan's glowing face for his success of feeding geetu this time.
"Mumma ye dekh roj ise hi khathi hain kya geetu" maan asked looking at the amount of food fell from plate at geet's side. Only small amount is there all most all food lying on the stool only.
"Mat pucho maan she won't eat anything but will drink milk only" Sukanya answered like taunt for geet. "Mera matlab kitni bhi koshih karo she is like that only. If it goes like this how she will be big girl" explained sukanya sensing Khurana's eyes roaming on her.
"Ammu I really don't like her" Muttered laks in amar ears giving annoying look to sukanya who escaped from their view going in to the kitchen.

"Lucky we are here only for geetu and for them" amar said eyeing mohinder and rano.
"I cont believe it you gals still flowing these rules pati parameswar types" laks asked sitting beside rano who is taking her food while others left from there.
Rano chuckled for her choice of words "Ji we will follow them and they both didn't taken food up to now also" rano said showing Nd and Sukanya.

"I really don't think she didn't taken her food still" murmured laks giving suspicious look to sukanya who is coming from kitchen wiping her hands with her duppata. "Kuch kaha aap" rquestioned rano as but laks is busy in staring at sukanya.
Laks shrugged saying nothing "Mumma ye achi hai" geet said sitting on laks lap taking her saree pallu in her tiny palms. Maan also joined them "Mumma geetu saree kyu pehenliya kal?" maan asked out of curiosity as geet wears saree yesterday.


Laks cursed him for his detective brain "Ohh your geetu is like that only no one can tell with what demand she will come daily" rano answered while taking her lunch.
"Milky lo peevo milk" laks heard maan saying winking at geet when rano given big glass of milk to geet. Rano raised her eye brow before laks can answer maan said "Ye milky girl hai meri milky girl haina geetu."
"Haha he is so cute lakshmi" rano said pulling maan cheeks when laks said why maan calling geet as milky girl. Laks smiled happily as she haven't used ji like last time.
They all went to hall when ND informed darji reached home. Laks casually interacted with darji as she don't like him at first place itself. Same with maan while dadi and amar talking with him about village matters much to darji's annoyance.
At Handa haveli in evening
"Papa we will take them to fields now they want to spend time there" mohinder asked permission from darji to talk with Khurana's as he needs privacy.

Amar sensed mohinder wants to talk with them privately "Ha yes mohinder let's go it is pleasant evening today" amar also joined with mohinder words.

They all are feeling fresh after good lunch took ample of rest adding maaneet masthi around. Darji thought for a while then said "Ji Amar beta can you come again tomorrow we will go for site seeing around the village also. It will be good if you a have look at your fields and meeting people who are taking care of them"
Amar not feeling this advice is for his good only he can see something cooking in darji's brain. In his next plan those things are there and he wants to select site for collage building even. Shrugging his thoughts amar agreed for darji's words.

"I love this smell so much mohinder" amar said taking deep breathe inhaling smell of wet land standing beside fields.

"Maa pakalo maanu ko" requested geet standing beside laks panting heavily due to constant chase. Maan showed his tongue jumping on his feet "Pakado geetu pakado" Maan teased geet annoying her.
Rano eyed laks and both ladies chased him caught him easily after few minutes handled him to geet. "Pakal liya maanu" geet jumped in joy smiling big taking rounds around him.
"Maa cheating hai ye" maan said making a baby angry face. Seeing his geetu cute smiling face maan also joined with him started taking rounds following geet.

"Geetu come we will make house for us today" maan said taking her few feet's away from all. "Ghal maanu geetu ghal haina" questioned geet cutely making maan grin at her words.

"Ha vahi ghal banayenge hum" answered maan muffling his laugh for her splicing words.


"You love them so much right" mohinder trance was broken by amar voice. Amar also admired all bonding while dadi also joined with maaneet "ghal" along with laks and rano.

"Yes amar I want to give proper education for my daughter can you help me in that" amar saw helplessness in mohinder words while he is saying those words.


"I will just tell me what is bothering you first. You don't have to worry about geet she is like daughter to me also." Mohinder felt immense happiness surrounding his heart with amar's words. From the day he started his fight for his daughter no one said like amar.

"Now you forget these entire things just wait and watch how your dad himself will join geet in school" Amar announced after listening happening mohinder told to him.

Mohinder hugged amar for agreeing to help him the determination in his voice given new hope to his heart. "Don't pretend like you are not hearing anything" laks glared at amar for his comment.
"This is about my geetu then how can I miss it haina maa" shot back laks for embarrassing her in front of mohinder.


"ji thank you so much for agreeing to help us you all are only hope to us. We cont go against our family not cont sit without fighting back. Thanks you so much" rano said folding her hands in front of Khurana's.

"Behena Kush raho but don't do this again and don't use these big big words also" warned amar keeping rano folded and below.

Rano blinking her eyes to digest his "Behana" word properly tears gathered in her eyes when she understands amar words.
"Oh no see you sister is big cry baby" teased laks to lighten the atmosphere.

"Oyy dare to tease her" laks looked at dadi and Amar one by one and there raised hands at her both said same words un knowingly. The atmosphere lightened with nonstop laughs they got disturbed by maaneet shriek.

"Maanu ghal" geetu shouted placing her messy hands on her hips with baby angry face.

"Nahi geetu ghar" maan also shouted with same high pitch voice like geet.
All looked at each other then busted off for their cute fight. "Maaneet ghal ok" dadi asked kneeled down in between them.

"Wow this ghal is so beautiful like both of you" rano praised watching the sand castle.
Laks helped them in doing that using her all architecture skills in her won way by ideas of maan. As result it is looking better and not at all looking like kids normal sand castle.



MAANEET GHAL 😆
JUST MY IMAGINATION FOR FUTURE USE 😉


"Maaneet ghal wow" maan read the letters written by amar on side of castle feeling so happy. "Geetu maaneet ghal dekho achi haina" asked maan showing the sand castle.

"Bahut achi hai maanu muje bada ghal chahiye" asked geet placing her long hair which is irritating from so long. She remembers Khurana's house she visited last night maanu will be there if she have big ghal like this.

"Ha I will make ghal like this big ghal ok" his words make her happy she nodded excitedly.

"You will be with me right in that house?" questioned maan as he wants his friend with him in his house when he build that.

"Ha she will be with you only ab kush" mohinder interfered as their talks not taking any end. Maan looked at geet for her yes she grinned at him nodding her head agreeing mohinder words.

They took pictures of maaneet with "maaneet ghal" in different angles. At end they started taking pictures of all including rano celebrating their happy moment.

i hope all liked this part as well sorry if you guys got bored of it

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