FF: HUM TUM - manthan and nisha

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi, this fanfic is about manthan and his love to be Nisha. I will be a similar story oh HUM TUM but not very similar. This is the second time i am writing a fan fic and i hope all of you will like it.

The charcters are:

Nisha - played by tina parekh

and Manthan played by Amit tandon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1
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Manthan was walking to the mall, he had a very pleasent time in SN today. He was now proven innocent. He would no longer be known as a criminal. And best of all, Karan Virani, Manthan's father had shouted at Tulsi maiya. Everything was how it should have been. Now Manthan had the support of all the members of the family and had a reason to get revenge from KT, Laksh,Nakul and Damini.

Manthan decided to splash out all the money he had in his pocket and buy whatever he fancied. he suddenly, while he was thinking, bumped into a girl. He turned to look at the girl. She was wearing a orange/red top and blue jeans. her lips were a tint of orange. her eyes were big and had orange eyeshadow on them. The girl turned around too. She had a very angry look on her face. She stared at Manthan then at the floor. Manthan followed her gaze and on the floor he saw 5 shopping bags with dresses fallen out on the floor. he looked back up at her.

girl: what the hell did you do?
look! she pointed at the clothes. All my clothes are dirty on the floor. These are brand new! and... O God

she paused for a second waiting for Manthan's reply but Manthan reached to his pocket. He took out a 1000 rupee note and gave it to her
manthan: with this money, go and buy new ones.
manthan was about to turn but the girl caught his had and turned him around. She looked even more angry.
girl: how dare you. she thumped the money in manthan's hands. Do you think i am a bhikari? you ruined such expensive clothes and......
before she could continue, manthan reached out for more money
manthan: how much do you want? 10 000 should be the maximum these clothes would cost.
girl: huh! i dont want your money bu the way if you want to know the real cost of this, its 80 000! tell me, can you give that?
manthan reached out for his check book....
wrote a check and gave it to her

the girl riped the check in front of him and saud: i said i dont want money. Agar mai chahati, i could buy the whole store they had the clothes in.. mujhe paise ki koi kami nahin hai. All i want is your sorry!

manthan: it was not my fault but i decided to give you money... but a sorry is going too far. i won't say sorry
now manthan was begining to get annoyed.

girl: everybody! come here gather in a circle!
people in the street gathered round manthan and the girl.
girl: sunno sunno, mr. richie rich here is givig me a chek to pay for the clothes he has ruined but he is not willing to say sorry. What value do i have of money? all i want is for him to be well mannered and say sorry!

the crowd started to say: sorry bolo sorry bolo!
manthan was really angry now.
manthan: i will not say sorry and he broke past the crowd and went into his car that was near by.

just then the girl got a phone call and she told the crowd to clear off... but in a nice way....

girl on the phone: hello.... ya i'm comming, do u know, i met this total idiot, sara moo kaheeka on the road. he dropped all mine and your shopping and did not even say sorry. on top of that he waved a 80 000 check at me! who does he think he is.....she said this as she was picking up her bags

girl: ok im comming dont worry. bye BHoomi!
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i hope you all like this part i will try and update as soon as possible tommorrow
pls reply! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool.. good job

just curious... why did u choose Tina as lead
Edited by tvchick2006 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks i thik tina is this amazing actress and she can play this character's roll well as it is ladaku and sort of like MUkti, but with darker shades. 😃
infact this character is supposed to be a girl version of manthan in the ego part, but a positive character 😆

and soon this will be posted in the ff index
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ahhh combo of Shruti and Mukti.. I have seen her as Shruti but never as Mukti..

Keep it up.. but make it short and not like Ekta's (forever going..) 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice n creartive, carry on, lot better than, ektas scripts!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 2
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a car is parking outside SN, i girl is shown comming out.... its NIsha.
she enters SN and sees TUlsi first.
nisha: tulsi dadi!

tulsi: nisha! i haven't seen you in a long time. How are you beta?

nisha: im fine dadi. acctually i was in boarding since the past 5 years. i still somehow mannaged to keep in touch with BHoomi. speaking of her... where is she?
tulsi: she's upstairs in her room

nisha went up to Bhoomi's room but acctually went into manthan's room thinking it was bhoomi's. she waited there sitting on the bed.
manthan just came out of the bathroom and was surprised to see a girl in his room in broad daylight. NIsha got up but still her back turned, she had not noticed manthan.
manthan moved closer to her and touched her shoulder. nisha turned around and for a second just stared at Manthan not knowing who he was and what he was doing her. then she realized who he was.... the same guy who showed so much arrogance towards her on the street. She put a nasty frown on her face and said
nisha: tum! what are you doing here
manthan too realized who she was M:you! i should be asking you that question! oooo, so you have followed me here and you want me to say sory?
nisha: idiot! how comes you are here i know your type, following girls around just because you're rich!
manthan: shut up! this is my house and i live here
nisha: really? then who is BHoomi virani and Tulsi Virani?
is bhoomi youre behen? nisha said sarcastically

manthan: yes acctually!
nisha just realized who the man standing in front of her could be
nisha: youre manthan?
manthan: yes! and who are you?
nisha: im bhoomi's friend and i came herre to see her.
just then bhoomi came in

bhoomi: bro, meet my best friend Nisha
manthan: huh! couldn't you find a friend better that her!
nisha: huh? look...
but before nisha could finish bhoomi interfered.
look you two i know both of you had a massive fight as nisha and you, manthan told me the same street story twice but with different perspectives and so i guessed you two met! but 1 thing you both have in common is me!
so, pls manthan don't fight with nisha and nisha dont fight with manthan!

nisha went out of manthan's room in a huff.
-------------------Dinner----------------------------------- ---
down at the dining table, everybody was present, nisha was there too as tulsi had asked her to stay.

tulsi: so nisha what brings you here to SN after so long?
nisha: well, i had to meet bhoomi. I have just finished boarding school and am going to join bhoomi's college.
tulsi: where do you live?

nisha: acctually tulsi dadi, in a hotel! After mom dad passed away, i lived with my uncle but had to go to boarding as he travelled quite a lot. my uncle too passed away 5 months ago and i got his property. for me to get mom and dads property i have to be 21, which i'll be in 6 months and till then i'll pretty much have to survive with allotments i get from my uncle's property.

tulsi: nisha i'm verry upset! you call me dadi but never share your troubles with me? when we are here, how can you live in a hotel. i won't allow that. stay here with us for however long you want.

nisha smiles but says: i dont want to be a booj to your family.
tulsi: of course you aren't ok ok ok if you really feel like that then at least stay here till you can get mom dad's property.
nisha agrees to stay in SN for 6 months.
manthan rolls his eyes to this and gets up from the table.
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im trying to speed things up but you'll have to wait till manthan and nisha romance 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Cool fanfic , i love manthanssss fanficssssss
anyway great i like tinaa parekh she is perfect for the role , anyway cont soon its superb
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thats gudd..enjoyed reading it..keep up the good wrk
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow so far so good, cant wait da next part. 😊

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