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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anshfever

omg...one more ss😲...bt nvr got pm of ds ff😭 so i vl have to read frm chapter 1 ...m lil bsy now a days so vl read nd cmnt later.

m so sry di...

heya i dint send PM for this SS to any old readers of my FF...
as wanted the members to like this SS by themselves before i send SS...

i remembered u and sent as once said u would like to read my works if anything other 😆

i hope u like this modern era SS
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Wwwoaaoo Supeerrbb update👍🏼
waiting for next update😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Unres

wow bhavya read it .. and it so amazing piece you have written.. totally fab..
Its interesting as well as suspense is making it more interesting...
please update soon.. curious to know.. was she his first wife or gf.. 😉

Update soon😃
Love you🤗
Edited by roshaeldsouza91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Amazing and interesting concept Bhavya! Great going! Update soon!👏😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
That was awesome update dear 😃 waiting for the next one already to know what would be Akdha's past life .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Plz plz update soon!!... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
wow..
nyc chapter..
plzz update soon and pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
wow awesome ss👏
read all the chapters in one go 😆
plz pm me when u update
Edited by sw123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
CHAPTER 4:
"What type of man he is, no humanity in him, he cheated me, and he is happily living with his family... how can that man be so mean, when i wanted to speak to him, he avoided me as if i have committed some big mistake, he should be ashamed of himself...he dont deserve to be called as human..."

Jodha tossed and turned on the bed...

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Jodha heard some noise outside her room, she felt pranay must be outside her room... she got up to see him... he was awake and was working in his laptop..

"Pranay, why are you awake still?"

"Jodha as new management is gonna take over our company, so i need to update all the financial transactions of the old management within this week so the pressure is more on us..."

"Okie, i will make tea for you than..."

"Jodha, no need, my work is almost done, even you go and sleep, you too need to go for work tomorrow right..."

"Pranay i was thinking of adi, he feels lonely till we reach back...so why dont we make him join some music classes..."

"Oh thats great, okie than find out some good teacher for him..."

Jodha reached back to her room...but Jalals thought dint get over her head... she spend sleepless nights turning and tossing...
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Pranay left before jodha in the morning... ...

after the breakfast she and adi, were ready for school, Jodha dropped Adi near his school, than was riding towards her office,...

she reached office on time... she was working as HR of the small firm...

Jodha enquired about some good music classes in near by locality for Adi...

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Pranay reached his office and no sooner an announcement was made that all the employees need to be gathered in conference room...

all the employees reached there, and PA of new boss announced that as per the new management some of the old employees are terminated from job...

and pranay was shocked to hear his name in that list, he was shocked how could be a efficient employee like him can be removed without any prior notice...

Pranays world came crashing down...

all the other colleagues were relieved that they are not terminated...

Pranay cursed his luck... and wanted to speak to the PA but he avoided speaking to him...

Later PA asks pranay to meet his new boss tomorrow in the office, and asks him to leave the office premises now...

Pranay seems shattered...
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Jodha leaves the office and will be on the way to pick up Adi... she reaches on time but dont find Adi near the gate, and she enquires about Adi with the watchmen, but they say he dont know anything about Adi...

Jodha feels tensed and calls up pranay, but pranay wont pick up the call as he was already tensed about his job...

Jodha hears Adis sound and turns back to see him with some little girl...

Jodha immediately runs towards Adi and hugs him..

"Adi, where you have gone, could not you wait for few minutes if i am late.."

She hugs him tightly...

Adi wipes her tears...

"mom, i was with pari, we wanted to have ice cream so Paris dad took us..."

"But Adi, how could you go without even informing, i have told you right not to take any eatables from strangers..."

Jodha looks at pari, she could recognise her...

"Aunty, my dad is very good person, i am new friend of Adi, so i took him along with me..."

Jodha looks puzzled when she hears someone speak...

"Dont worry, your son was with me, and i am not any stranger in your life..."

its Jalal who is smirking at her with attitude walks towards her and stands next to Pari...

Adi smiles seeing him...

Jodha gets confused at seeing him here in school with pari ...

before Jodha could speak...

"Jodha, your son is very smart and sweet like yourself...he has your eyes..."

Jodha looks at him questioningly...

Jalal smirks at her...

"By the way, this is pari, my one and only daughter, mine and Ruquaiyyas..."

Jodha smiles at him and with little sadness...

"yes, i have seen her with you, by the way, i could not wish you on your wedding... "

"Yes, i was waiting for your presence in my big day, but you never turned up after all you are one of the person who thought me what is life..."

"Jalal by the way, he is Adi, my son,,, mine and pranays son..."

Jalal seems not happy to hear that...

Pari and Adi seems happy that their parents know each other well...

Pari speaks up..

"Oh thats nice to know that you are dads friend..."

Adi seems happy...

"uncle i am so happy mom has got best friend like you,...i felt mom is a loner..."

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"Adi, lets go home your dad will be waiting for you.."
Jodha pulls adi harshly away from jalal...

"Jodha, dont worry, pranay wont be waiting for you today..."

As soon as she hears this from jalals mouth she feels something is not right and turns towards him... he just smirks and takes pari towards his car...

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Jalal will be driving...

"Dad, adis mom looks so beautiful na...was my mom was also beautiful like her..."

"Pari, your mom was beautiful than her, and she was beautiful women from heart too..."

"Dad, how do you know Jodha aunty..."

"Pari, she was your moms friend, and her husband was my friend..."

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Jodha reaches home, and sees pranay is back already... he seems tensed...

Jodha asks adi to change his clothes and go to play...

Pranay shares what happend in office and could not control his tears... he hugs her tightly...

Jodha could not believe that pranay lost his job...

"pranay speak to your boss tomorrow, you are a good employee how can they terminate you, we have so many debts, and loans on this flat, how can we manage the finance"

"yes Jodha, i hope everything will be alright tomorrow..."

Jodha makes him drink water and they both wait for the night to vanish so that they can see new morning...
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----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Precap:pranay holds jalals collar😡

Edited by Parijatrocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Amazing update
Adi and pari are so cute
So jodha is married to pranay
No Akdha together 😭
Plz plz continue soon
Edited by SUMESHNI - 11 years ago

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