THE CAGE BIRD ---completed---sultan & madhu - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice v nice
Need 4 th part soon pls
Good job
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jojo1986

Loved it update soon



thank u will soon do it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaana123

Nice v nice

Need 4 th part soon pls
Good job



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful..wonderful...both hugs qre just...awesome ...n the precap...omg i m dead...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelinasingh

Beautiful..wonderful...both hugs qre just...awesome ...n the precap...omg i m dead...



thank u so much dear😛😛😛😛😛. That white kurta was shown in his 1st show😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its really nice. Pls cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Madhu who was hearing his words without lifting her head was again shocked by the question which rose in her mind "how he knows i don't like dogs". The party ended well and the entire guest gave their blessing to the couple.

Part 4:

In the 9t madhu couldn't sleep until she knows the answer. She stood up from the bed and was thinking how to reach his room. Suddenly she heard the door knock but before she could answer it she saw the same magical eyes entering the room. But now his costume is changed he is in white kurta. "OMG, y he is here. Madhu don't look at him pls particularly those magnetic eyes". She closed her eyes and heard the door closing and the foot step nearing her. Wen the foot step was no more heard she opened her eyes slowly and she saw the broad chest which was shown by the opened buttons. She feared whether he wantedly opened those buttons. She again closed her eyes tightly and asked the question in the jet speed "how u know my name is chiky? And how u knows i don't like dogs? And wat ur doing here?" she didn't stop ter she also continued to say"until u give me the answer i will not...ahhh...i will not...huh...i will not liy in the bed".After finishing her jet she slowly opened her one eyes and lifted her head to look at him, after seeing those eyes automatically she opened her other eyes wide open. He slowly came close to her and by lifting his right leg little forward to pull her both legs bcz of that she lost the balance and landed in the bed. "Now ur lying in the bed. Mom is sitting outside so i can't go out, shut ur mouth and sleep and i will join u in a mint"by telling that he turned his back to her side in the search of pillows. Actually he thought of sleeping in the balcony chairs but he was shocked by the questions asked by her so in the anger he left some words which have double meaning. Madhu sat up in the bed in the fear and was shocked to hear his words "sleep in the bed i will also join u, OMG wat he is thinking" she stated to sweet by thinking some fire. She automatically stood up on the bed and shouted "wat did u say "i will also join u in the bed", wat ur thinking i will not sleep with u, get out" she was standing on the bed like a doll. After hearing the last word "get out and i will not sleep with u" his anger rose to the high level. He turned his head to face her but he was facing her stomach, he lifted his head to face her. Wen he saw the childish doll standing in front of him his anger was gone in the wind and lost in the thoughts of his love but he remembered those words he looked aside. He tightly clutched her both hips in his rough hand and lifted her from the bed to land her in the floor. She opened her eyes widely by the touch of his hand and the next moment closed it tightly. She felt liking flying in the air a strong wind crossed her body which made her to shiver. "For how many hours ur going to stand like this? And remember one more think tis is MY BED and i am going to sleep her till ur here. If u wish to move out u can do it but before that gives back 10 lacks which u accepted as a pay for acting?" by telling that he turned and went straight to the bed bcz he know if he sees the tears in her eyes then everything will be changed. She stood ter till she can, her body lost all the strength and then ever thinking was black for her and she collapsed in the floor. By hearing some sound sultan looks at the place where she was standing and then he saw her body lying in the ground as if no life. He gently lifted her from the floor and places her in the bed, he thought from the morning she didn't eat anything so oly her body like a feather. He took the juice from the mini fridge and poured in the glass. Slowly lifted her head and made her to drink the juice after drinking completely he place her head in the pillow and covered her body with the bead sheet. The soft and velvet rosy petal lips were shining in front of him it invited him to wipe the juice drop in them he closed her eyes and wiped her lip with his finger. The sudden change in his body made him to move away from her the very next moment. He straight away went to balcony and rested himself in the chair. He slowly closed his eyes and remembered the moment wen he saw her first.


Next Coming: For the 1st time in my life i am smiling that to but seeing one girl in the tree and its totally strange. I felt i saw my life in the form of girl. I saw the fear in her eyes, than oly i understood even the eyes can be more beauty full wen in shows the fear.



Message: Wat we try to hide our love from tem, it cant get succesed bcz in some situation it will automatically come out with out our knowledge.😳


NOTE: pls hit the like button and do the comment also. dont forget to tell which part or the line u loved the most. Ur comments is the Energy drink to me😃 so pls do comments...


Part 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102732233




Edited by prabha.abha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: sandiab

lovely chapter update soon



thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaana123

Nice update soon pls



sure and thank u

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