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jeevitha.m

@jeevitha.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

sweety supero super..each day very eagerly waiting for your update..serial kadhaiya vida ungha story supera irukku..seriala ippo namma miss panra magic ungha story la kidaikudhu.

love,romance,friendship,family,office work everything is included in the story its really good..i always use to wonder y they dont show our fantastic four family still now they have not shown vishnu's parents bt ungha story la avangha eppayo entry kuduthutaangha..expecting more from you..next updates ku eagera waiting..

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kkasvn9

@kkasvn9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Sweety:

Roma nala erunthugku ungalaudiaya story. You have narrated the pure closeness between KR in sweet way which i liked it a lot, I was visualizing each every scene while i was reading the latest chapter. I read this chapter couples of times in my lunch break. It is awesome. I always felt that love in your story is the pure and healthy love.

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sweety

@sweety16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: Devino
Next update yeppo sweety...

tomorrow devi...

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ammukuty

@ammukuty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

when is the update sweety waiting

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sweety

@sweety16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Chapter 73

Karthik and Raji finish dinner and the resort staff clean the stuff there.
Karthik: Raji... polaamaa?
Raji: innum konja neram irukkalaam Karthik... please...
Karthik: OK... aanaa oru condition...
Raji: enna?
Karthik: enakku un madiyila thalai vachi paduthukkanum...
Raji: idhukku edhukku permission? unakku illaatha urimaiyaa?
Karthik: appadingare?
Raji: mmm... aamaangaren...
Raji stretches her legs and Karthik lies down on the sand keeping his
head on her lap. He holds her hand and caresses her fingers and kisses them
Karthik: unnoda kai viral evvalo azhagaa irukku theriyumaa?
Raji smiles...

Raji: Karthik... un kitta onnu kekkanum...
Karthik: enna?
Raji: illa... nee thappaa eduthukka koodaadhu...
Karthik: edhukku build up? point ku vaa...
Raji: Ashvin ennai pathi edhaavadhu sonnaanaa?
Karthik: illaiye... en kekkura?
Raji: illa... veetla ennai pidikkalai nnu sollunga nnu sonnadhukku... unnai parthadhukku appuram thaan enna solradhu nnu decide pannuven nu sonnaan...
Karthik: appadiyaa?
Raji: mmm... edhuvume pesaliyaa?
Karthik: illa Raji... personal aah oru vaarthai kooda pesalai... romba
professional aah decent aah nadanthukittaan... edhuvum prachanai
panna maattaan nu thaan thonudhu...
Raji: sari...
Karthik: kandadhaiyum yosichu... mandaiya pottu kozhappikkaadhe..
free ya iru...
Raji: mmm...
Karthik: enna mmm?
Raji: sari nnu artham ...
Karthik: enna sari?
Raji: nee edhu sonnaalum sari nnu artham...
Karthik: edhu sonnaalumaa?
Raji: aamaa... en maaman sonnaa sariyaa thaan irukkum...
Karthik: unakkirukkara nakkal irukkku paaru...
Raji: ellaam unga training thaan... maamoy...
Karthik laughs and Raji also joins him.

Finishing dinner, Vishnu and Lakshmi start walking towards the sea.
Lakshmi : Vishnu... Karthik , Raji innum ange thaan irukkaangalaa?
Vishnu: appadi thaan nenaikkiren...
Lakshmi: call panriyaa?
Vishnu: venaa.. poyi parkalaam vaa...
After ten minutes , they reach Karthik and Raji...
Lakshmi: enna panreenga love birds rendu perum?
Listening this, Raji turns and Karthik gets up from her lap...
Vishnu and Lakshmi sit beside them.
Raji: Lakshmi... innaikkum pournami... paaren...
Lakshmi: aamaa... en birthday ku vandhappovum pournami thaane?
Raji: mmm...
Lakshmi: adhukulla oru maasam aayiduchi...
Karthik: neenga pesitte irunga... naanga ippove vandhidarom...
Lakshmi: intha raathiri la engala thaniyaa vittuttu enga poreenga?
Vishnu: engayum pogalai Lakshmi. inga thaan oru dum podalaamnu..
Lakshmi: Ok...
Both Karthik and Vishnu go aside..

Raji: enna Lakshmi? valentine's day celebration ellaam eppadi irundhuchi?
Lakshmi: mmm... fun it was...
Lakshmi explains what they did as Raji hears anxiously...

At a little distance, Vishnu and Karthik...
Vishnu: enna daa... ippove kilambaromaa?
Karthik: adhaan naan unnai kekkanum nu nenachen...
Vishnu: enakkonnum illa daa... rendu perum maathi maathi thaane drive panrom... kilambalaam naa kilambidalaam...
Karthik: konjam rest eduthittu early morning kilambittaa nnu yosikkaren...
Vishnu: dei... kaalai le irundhu semma tired .. innaikku... paduthom
kashtam daa... inga kaalaile 6 manikku kilambanaalum... madhiyam
aayidum... day time traffic aah irukkum...
Karthik: oru rendu manikku kilambinaa?? konjam slow vaa... anganga
niruthi ponaalum... kaalaile 10 manikku poyidalaam illaa?
Vishnu: mmm...
Karthik: naalaiku Ashvin parents varathukulla ... Raji appa kitta pesidanum...
Vishnu: mmm. ... tension aavaadha daa... parthukkalaam...
Karthik: theriyalai daa... ennamo padapadappaaa irukku...
Vishnu hugs Karthik and pats on his back and says..." free yaa vidu
machaan... Raji namma pakkam strong aah irukkum bodhu... oru
prachnaiyum illa..."
Karthik: hope so... touchwood... and touches Vishnu's head...
Vishnu: dei... appo ennai mara mandai nnu solriyaa?
Karthik: cha ... cha...
Vishnu: sari vaa polaam...
Both of them come to Raji and Lakshmi and sit beside them.

Raji: Lakshmi... edhaavadhu game vilaiyaadalaamaa?
Lakshmi: Oh ... yes... naan ready... enna vilaiyaadalaam?
Karthik: intha iruttu la enna vilaiyaada mudiyum?
Vishnu: ivvalo neram vilaiyaadinadhu pathalaiyaa Lakshmi?
Lakshmi: unakku pidikkalai nnaa nee cottage ku poyi thoongu...
Vishnu: kochikkadhe Lakshmi...
Raji: kannaa moochi vilaiyaadalaamaa?
Vishnu: haiiyaa.. naanum varen...
Karthik & Lakshmi: (together) Raajiii...
Raji: ennaachu? mosamaa irukkaa ?
Karthik: Chance eh illa Raji... asathitte po...
Lakshmi: first unakku thaan... vaa...
Lakshmi takes her scarf , folds it and blindfolds Raji... rotates her and moves away...
all three of them say... Raji... intha pakkam... appadi illa... intha pakkam... and Raji moves trying to reach one of them...
Karthik gets behind her and tickles her ... and moves farther...
Raji: Kaar..thik... paaru Lakshmi...
Lakshmi: Karthik... no touching... touch pannaa nee out...
Karthik smiles and shrugs his shoulders.
In a few minutes , Raji gets hold of Lakshmi's hand and now...
Lakshmi is blindfolded...
Lakshmi tries to chase Vishnu in particular... but he smartly escapes...
But Lakshmi tries to follow his voice and chases in those directions ,
finally catches his hand and unfolds the scarf only to find Karthik...
Now Karthik is blindfolded and they continue...
Almost one hour passes by and everyone feels immensely tired having run enough...

They return to the cottage and settle on the couch. Karthik orders room service for coffee... And by the time coffee arrives... Raji and Lakshmi fell asleep on the couch itself.
Karthik and Vishnu try to wake them up but in vain.
Vishnu: machaan... rendu manikkellaam ivanga ezhundhuppaanga nnnu nenaikkare? kashtam daa...
Karthik: mmm... parkalaam... atleast 4 manikkaavadhu kilamba
mudiyumaa nnu...
Vishnu: sari naan padukkaren daa...
And he settles on the other couch.
Karthik feels tired and restless but couldn't sleep. He kept changing
channels on the TV in mute without disturbing others...

It's around 3 a.m. and Raji wakes up. She finds herself on the couch
and looks around. Lakshmi was sleeping beside her and Vishnu flat on the opposite couch. Her eyes search for Karthik and find him sitting at the dining table and surfing the TV channels...
She gets up without making any noise, comes near him ... puts her
arms around his neck from behind and kisses on his cheek and says
..."Good Morning..." .
Karthik: Good morning... Chellam..
Raji: thoongalaiyaa nee?
Karthik holds her hand and makes her sit beside him.
Karthik: thookkam varalai daa...
Raji gets up, comes to him and sits on his lap. She holds his face in her palms, looks into his eyes and says " I LOVE YOU..."
Karthik hugs her and replies " I LOVE YOU TOO..."
Raji kisses on his forehead , gently runs her fingers through his hair
and caresses and tries to pacify him. Karthik is surprised to see Raji in a totally different aspect but enjoys her closeness.
Raji: appa kitta pesumbodhu amaidhiyaa iru... avar enna pesuvaaru
nnu ennala guess panna mudiyalai... aanaa nee kova padaathe... oru
vishayam nyaabagam vachikko... enna nadanthaalum... yaaar enna
sonnaalum... naan unnai vittu poga maatten... mudinja varaikkum appa vai convince panna try pannalaam... sariyaa...
Karthik: yes boss...
Raji: sari... naan fresh ayittu varen...
She tries to get up but Karthik pulls her back and kisses her.
Few seconds later, he lets her go.

Fifteen minutes later, Karthik gets ready and wakes Vishnu up.
In an hour's time, all four of them get ready and start to Kovilpatti.

Around 6.30 a.m. they reach Perambalur and stop for a coffee break.
Ten minutes later, they again start off and Karthik drives now. They
reach Trichy around 8 a.m.
Lakshmi: amma oorla irundhirundhaa ... veettukku poyirukkalaam...
Raji: oorla illaiyaa?
Lakshmi: amma oda colleague ponnukku kalyaanam ... bangalore
poyirukkaanga...
Raji: Oh... appadiyaa...
Vishnu: machaan ... pasikkudhu daa... breakfast pannidalaam...
Karthik: sari... Lakshmi... enga poganum sollunga...
Lakshmi gives directions and Karthik drives along, they stop at a hotel and have breakfast and continue...

They reach Madurai around 10.30 a.m. They take a ten minute break
and then start off as Vishnu drives...
Vishnu: Raji... inge irundhu innoru two hours aagumaa?
Raji: illa Vishnu... one and half hours la reach aayidalaam...
Vishnu: Ok... intha pattaasu ellaam seivaangale Sivakasi on the way la
varuma?
Raji: on the way thaan... aanaa virudhu nagar la irundhu vera route la
poganum...
Vishnu: OK...
All the friends keep discussing stuff happily and around 12 noon they
reach kovilpatti.
Vishnu: machaan... un maamanaar veedu vandhachu daa...
everyone smiles...
Raji: ooru thaan vandaachu... veedu innum varalai...
Vishnu: neenga thaan vazhi sollanum...
Raji: sari... ok... neraa poyittu last right...
and in ten minutes time they reach Raji's house.

All of them get down.
Lakshmi: evvalo amaidhiyaa irukku...
Raji: ellaam ulle iruppaanga... vaanga polaam...
Vishnu: machaan ... intha amaithi ippo mattum thaan daa... next time la irundhu mela thaalathoda five ladies paattu paadi, aarathi eduthu thaan ulla viduvaanga... enna Raji?
Karthik: dei... summa iru daa..
Lakshmi: Karthik ... marakkaama valadhu kaalai eduthu vachu vaa...
Karthik: neengalumaa Lakshmi??
Lakshmi: nee engalai sollumbodhu??
Vishnu: machaan... vekka padaathe daa... vaa...
Karthik: dei... summma irunga rendu perum... yerkanave tension la
mandai kaayuthu... neenga vera ...
Vishnu: adhai thaan daa ... koraikka try panrom... enna Lakshmi?
LAkshmi: aamaa Karthik...
Raji: enna neenga ... enga maamavai kindal pannikittu...
Vishnu: ennadhu ? maamaa vaa???
Raji: aamaa... maamaa thaan...
Raji comes to Karthik, holds his hand and says "neenga vaanga
maamaa.. ennoda..." and takes him to the house...
Vishnu laughs and says "silly village girl" ...
Raji smiles and holding her hand Karthik steps into the house... ofcourse with his right foot forward...

Chapter 74... tomorrow... definitely... coz its meesai vs Karthik

CHAPTER 74

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

sorry for the delay friends...😔

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anithu

@amrithatec

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Thanks for the nice and cool update..

I just cant wait for karthik vs messai...😳

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kkasvn9

@kkasvn9

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: sweety16
sorry for the delay friends...😔

i believe 100% buddy- that you post the next chapter- encounter between messai & Karthik😊 by tomorrow that is March 2, 2014 - let my Sunday be a happy Sunday...👏

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kkasvn9

@kkasvn9

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#619

Sweety,

entha chapter roma cuteya erunthdu.. you have narrated the expression, plus fear in karthik & raji's mind in a very realistic manner, i liked it a lot. raji's query about ashwin to karthik is also xpressed in a suberpway. Really it was awesome the entire chapter... As usual my saturday night went well with your story... Thank you😊

Edited by kkasvn9 - 12 years ago