Mann Ki Lagan(JB/KS)-Prologue

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello to all! This is my first FF here, I have one in the KS forum and as a random idea came to mind I thought I'd post it here. This FF is also about Jai and Bani. Here is the prologue. Please do tell if you like it or not as based on your comments I will continue.

Sobia

Prologue

I wrote our name in the sand and held an umbrella over it so the rain wouldn't wash it away.

He wished he could do just that, but he did not have an umbrella. Looking up at the sunny sky he sighed a sigh of thanks. No rain was going to wash away their names. He bent down and with his finger wrote their names in the sand. He stood up again and admired his work. Something was missing. Instantly he bent down again drew a heart around the names and wrote "forever". Happy with his creation he headed back to his car and headed towards his destination.

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The best things in life are worth waiting for.

She wished that this wait would end but knew that it was far from its ending. Looking up at the sunny sky she sighed a sigh of thanks. No rain was going to wash away her plans. She bent down, picked up her sketchpad and wrote their names on the paper. She held it away from her face and admired her work. Something was missing. Instantly she bought the pad near her face again drew a heart around the names and wrote "forever". Happy with her creation she headed to her car and headed towards her destination.

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You need me and I need you.

He and she thought.

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sobia.k thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I guess no body likes it. Mods please close this topic.

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sobia.k

I guess no body likes it. Mods please close this topic.

Sobia

hey r u gonne nuts...itni achi start hai...how dare u to ask the mod to close dis topic....

mindblowing start👏....do cont soon

nd yes u dare not ask to close dis topic again

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditisilawat

hey r u gonne nuts...itni achi start hai...how dare u to ask the mod to close dis topic....

mindblowing start👏....do cont soon

nd yes u dare not ask to close dis topic again

Thank you so much for the appreciation, lekin sirf ek admi FF ko paraga tho, you get what I'm saying. But just for you I will post up part one and maybe people might like it then.

Sobia

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start!! sounds v. interesting!! Please post the first part soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey, that sounds super! Keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sounds very interesting.
looking forward to it.
plz cont. asap.

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