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Posted: 11 years ago
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kd asks rv for his car so that he can take kiya on long drive and lighten her mood . He searched her in collegge and found her in empty classroom . She was sad and upset. Kd came from behind and blindfolded her.
kiya : kd tum ho kya ??? Wats dis???
kd : obvio kiyya aur kon hoga.
kiya: kd plzz aj main boho..
kd : kiya shhh mere sath chalo and yes its an order got it ..
kiya : but kd listen na...
kd: kahan na kiya shhh..
saying this he picks her in his arms and takes her in rvs car . He stops the car at beach and remove blindfold.
kiya: kd hum beach par kyun??
kd: yaad hain kiya jab hum master slave task ke waqt yahaan aye the tab tum kitni khush thi . I wanna relive those moments
main tumhe waise smile karta huva dekhna chahta hun and trust me kiya main tumhari smile ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun
I luv u so very much kiya ..
kiya :kd i luv u too and i am very lucky to hhave u.
kd kisses kiya on her forehead and than on cheeks . They both hug eachother.
kiya : kd mujhe woh 5 Rs wala yummy bhutta khana hai.
kd (leans on her and whispers in her ears): yummy toh main bhi hoon na
kiya catches his collar and kisses him on his lips. He responded passinately but kiya soon pulled away and replies in full attitude
kiya: nah!! Not that yummmy ..
and than she gigglees hard . Seein her laughing kd smiles lovingly looking at her .
kd ( say to the camera ) : finally muujhe meri kiya ki smile mili.
they both enjoyed at beach relivin moments and than settled on sand in eachothers arms seein sunset .
the end
hii guys this is my 1 st os . I know its crap but plzz comment abt it. Negative critisism is welcomed.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear i just loved:D so good you narrated i was thinking what would happen when kisha have their longdrives,but you fulfill my wishes.Do write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hieee... 😃 Welcome 2 d forum dear... 🤗
& plzzz its nt crap... Infact its really gr8 👏
Kisha's beach scene is my most favourite...😳
Thanx 4 making me relive dat moment too 😃
Do write more 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow it was beautiful...
Dont call it a crap...
Do write more...
Welcome to d forum
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow
this is so good dear
plz write more

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice OS...

I loved it...😃😃😃

Beach Kisha scene was the beginning of der relationship😳😳 and i loved u mentioned that 5 rs wala bhutta... wow...and that kiya ka - not that yummy was so typical kiya... hahaha enjoyed it dear

smriti

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey. Its not at all crap. Infact it was really good. A treat for kisha fanz.
Do write more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveukisha

Dear i just loved:D so good you narrated i was thinking what would happen when kisha have their longdrives,but you fulfill my wishes.Do write more.

thanx even i was thinking same so thaught of writing😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Hieee... 😃 Welcome 2 d forum dear... 🤗

& plzzz its nt crap... Infact its really gr8 👏
Kisha's beach scene is my most favourite...😳
Thanx 4 making me relive dat moment too 😃
Do write more 😉

thanx beach trip is such an old and beautiful memory of kisha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KDreamer

Wow it was beautiful...

Dont call it a crap...
Do write more...
Welcome to d forum

thanx i'll definetly write more😊

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