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Posted: 10 years ago
gr8 part..
cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..
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Originally posted by: priya_21

Part 25




She hugged him tightly... In this moment she forgets her promise...

He hugged her and congrates her...

 

 previous part 24 on page 107

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Priya!
I just read the parts that I've missed..sorry for the much delay. 
I hope you didn't mind and as always I really loved the way you described the scenes , it is very well written. Keep it up the great work!
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Part 26

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I shocked see meera in dehradun, but happy too, I met with him after so much time... I know about meera marriage ...

Geet : meera ki shaadi

Kisse

Maan : dev se

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(DEV)


He is nice guy...

Both are so much happy in own life...

Mujhe bhut khushi hoti thi meera ko khush dekhke

Jb bhi un dono ko sath dekhta tha

Bs ek hi khawaish mann me aati thi

Kash tum mere sath hoti

Toh sayad hum bhi utne happy couple hote

He turns to see geet face, she not sees in his eyes, she not getting words to convey or share own boundaries/limits... somewhere she don't want share with him, she know it's only give pain...

But she forgets one thing, sharing reduces the pain ...

Par geet tum kyun nhi thi mere sath

She tries to avoid his gaze & turn around, not want to face him...

Before her take step forward, he held her dupatta and pull her, her back collided with his chest, she held dupatta tightly, fearing loose own self in his close proximity...

Geet : maan

He placed one hand on her belly and from other he tucked her hair one side of shoulder & placed his chin on her shoulder...

Maan : sia bikul meera jaisi hai

Ussi ki perchai hai woh

Ussi ki tarah mujhe datati hai

Ussi ki tarah gussa

Geet not liking him is telling about meera habits...

She tries to remove his hand but he held her more tightly...

Maan : meera aur dev ki life achi chl rhi thi

Aur ab toh unki life mein sia aane waali thi

.

Par har baar jo bahar se dekhe wo sch ho jaroori nhi hota

Geet : matlab

Maan : dev ek police officer tha

Ek imaandar police officer

Both never tell me about own problem...somewhere my mistake too... I lost my own works so much...

Jo mujhe dev ki pareshaani dekhi hi nhi

Geet : dev ji ko kya pareshaani thi

Maan : dev arrested some goons which related to politicians

He killed by those people...

Meera dev ki maut ka sadma bardaast nhi kr paayi

Pre-mature delivery me sia toh bch gyi...par meera lost the life...

Geet : aapne unhe saza nhi di

He felt sobs in her voice; he turned her and sees tears in her eyes...

Maan cupped her face & wipes her tears...

Maan : stop crying

Tum kyon ro rhi ho

Geet : ye wrong tha na

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He felt her heart soft like kid...

Maan : par kuch logo ke liye kuch galat shi nhi hota

Wo sirf apna profit dekhte hai

Aur rhi un logo ki baat

Wo puri umar jail mein rahenge ab

Geet : ye sb aapne apne ghar walo ko kyun nhi bataya

Maan removed the hand...

Geet : kissi news channel mein kyon nhi aaya

Ki aap ne dev ko insaaf dilaya tha

Maan : kyon ki mein nhi chahata tha

Kuch bhi bahar aata toh sayad sia ke baare mein bhi pata lag jaata

Mein meera aur dev ko toh nhi bcha saka

Par sia ki zindagi khatre mein nhi dalni thi mujhe

Waha ke logo ke liye dev ka pura pariwaar khtm ho chukka hai

Geet : dev ji ke ghar mein aur koi nhi tha

Maan : nhi

He lost the parents few years back...

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Sia ko maine apna naam diya

Aur wo duniya ke liye Maan Singh khurana ki beti hai

Geet : aap sbse ye baat chupa sakte the

Par daadi se , karan se chupane ki kya jaroorat thi

Maan : uski wajah tum thi geet

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see  3rd post too specially for #jasmine dear for you & my all friends u see too

upcoming soon

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(geet marriage)

previous part 25 on page 110 & boomark theupdate thread... for pm...

see this updates too 


MG FF - Be-intaah...Mohabbat ya Junoon - part 5 on page 68


MG FF- Kaisa ye pyaar hai - maaneet last convo (13 feb) & part 90 on page 36 (14feb) & part 91 on page 41 (16 feb)

MG FF- Vivaah..Adhura Bandhan - part 2 on page 23 (18 feb)

Ff discussion thread 

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#jasmine dear you have some confusion
see this
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thats pic for story

original pic is below
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here meera played by another girl..so i blur her face
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now confusion solved

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

thanks dear
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so sia is meera n devs child
nice part
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it's superb part dear. i loved it so much. finally maan is telling her whole truth about sia. geet doesn't felt good when maan was describing meera's habit. waiting for next dear.