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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
nice update...sam jun kidnapped?plan kiya tha??

continue soon..thanks for pm😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
great going girl...Iss Neha toh sayani nikli...& rahul is equally shaatli..
the ETF teasing and gossip section was a treat to read...it was awesome..
& the Jealous Aisha..👍🏼

andSam-Jun-Hul planning of surprize Neha...sound's intersting...
But yeh Neha vi toh Rawte hi hain na??😈
Waiting for it...
Do continue..& thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
one more fight ll get them back Neha! try it!
cont soon dr.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

replied all..

@ pink1 - plz check cs on page 1.

i've added the pics of every character

as story progresses u will find ariya

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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Chapter 3

in next post

it is a long update

n next update after 4-5 days😊

Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Chapter 3

7:20

Neha sits thinking what to do next n then something strikes her mind n she calls on Jun's no.

Neha - hello..bhaiya aap kaha he? Aapke aaspass kya dikhayi de raha he?

Jun - andhera..yahan bahot andhera he


Sam - rawte andhera nahi he hamari aankho par patti bandhi he.


But suddenly someone comes there n says.ye awaz kaha se aa rahi he .are ye dekho is arjun ke haath khul gaye he..are bhai se pitna he kya..jo iske haath itne dhile bandhe..aur ye phone yaha par kaise aaya? Tum log koi kaam thik se nahi karte [he picks the phone n says]koun bol raha he be?

Neha - teri daadi!saale tamiz se baat kar.warna ek ek ko pakad ke aisa pitenge mere bhai ki teri maa bhi teri shakal nahi pehchan payegi..

Goon - aye ladki ..tamiz se baat kar..tu jaanti nahi he ke me koun hu..

Neha - ab tum bataoge nahi ki tum koun ho to me pehchanungi kaise? Hum dono hello koun pehchan koun' to khel nahi rahe..

Goon - aye ladki .. bakwaas bandh kar aur kaam ki baat kar..apun ka bheja satak gaya na to tere dono bhai yo ka bheja nahi rahega..ye bataa phone kyu kiya?

Neha - are chill maar ..apna dimaag khali khoti garam nahi karne ka kya..waise agar tujhe sadu, akdu, khadoos,sir phire, aur garam dimaag wale logo ke saath rehna accha lagta he to mat bata ki wo kaha par he..lekin un dono ko acche se bandh kar rakhna aur ha agar kuch timepass karna ho to un dono se kaan pakad kar utthak baithak karwa lena..chahe to video bhi utar lena me tujhe 20 situps be liye ek hazar de sakti hu lekin ha jyada karwaye na to me tujhse do hazar lungi ..to jaa apna kaam kar..mera waqt barbaad mat kar.[n she cuts the call]

[she had successfully traced the call n to her shock they were in ETF office.]

~

In ETF office..

Sam - Lo sun liya Rawte! Teri bahen ne to kidnappers ko bhi hume punishment dene ke liye keh diya aur upar se itna sab suna bhi diya..ab kya hua tumhare punishment se bachne ke plan ka?

Jun - tum mujhe kyu suna rahe ho? Ye plan to Rahul ka tha..

Sam - mene tumhe pehle hi kaha tha ki ye plan work nahi karega par tumne meri baat nahi suni ab bhugato natijaa..

Jun - lekin hum kyu punish honge?ek kaam karte he ghar chalte he aur thoda sa ek dusre ko mar bhi dete he..

Sam - aur ghar jaakar Neha se ye kahenge ki humne gundo ko maar diya aur waha se bhaag aye..aur wo saahe bacche ki tarah hamari kahani par yakin kar legi..to bhul jao wo aisa nahi karegi.par ek baat samjh nahi aayi ki usne waapis phone kyu kiya tha?

Jun - pata nahi kya chalta rehta he uske dimaag me?

Sri - sir kahi wo call trace to nahi kar rahi thi? Waise aapne jitni de baat ki usse call aaram se trace ho sakta he.

Sam - ab yahi baaki reh gaya tha..ab hum kya karenge Rawte?

Jun - koi baat nahi ..isse pehle ki Neha yaha pahuche hum ghar jaate he.

Sam - to dekh kya rahe ho? Chalo jaldi..

[n they both go n thankx to Rathod's driving skills they reach Rawte mansion in 20 mins. Instead of 30 mins ]

~

Rawte mansion..

8:10

Sam n Jun reach home

Neha - aa gaye aap dono?


Rd comes to save them


Rd - are baby! In dono ko ghar me aane to do zara do saanse lene do aaram karne do phir puchtaach karna..aiye sam bhai, jun bhaiya.

They all go n sit in drawing room


[Neha acts as nothing has happened n she doesn't know anything]

Neha - aap dono scheduled time se 1 hr 10 min late he matlab 70 min late he to is hisaab se aapko 14 situps jyada karni padegi n no concession on this. Rukiye aapne expressions hamare handycam laane ke baad dijiye.

[she brings a handycam from shelf above tv.]ab aap shuru kijiye.

She starts her running commentary..

To ladies n gentlemen pesh he sheher ke sabse kaabil police officers ki taraf se aapko ek chota sa nazrana..hamare saath he sheher ke naami industrialist Mr. Rahul Rawte jo aaj ki Shaam ke chief guest he aur ACP Sameer Damsingh Rathod aur ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte jo aapke liye ek khas peshkash denge aur hum aapki host cum dost Neha!

To shuru karte he aaj ke pehli peshkash..to dil thaam ke baithiye deviyo aur sajjano ACP Sameer abhi karenge aapke saamne 10 utthak-baithak.

To shuru ho jaiye..10..9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1 very good ACP Sameer.[in counts sam n jun do situps]

Ab baari he ACP Arjun ki..10..9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1 well done ACP Arjun!

To first round khatam hone par dono ke score -10 points he..

Aur jo -44 points par pehle pahuchega wo hamara winner hoga!

Ab baari he dusre charan yaani second round ki..

To is baar pehle aayenge ACP Arjun..10..9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1 u have good stamina ACP!

Ab ayenge ACP Sameer..10..9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1 good!

Dusre charan ki samapti par dano ke ank -20 guun he..

Teesre charan me dono ko ek dusre ke kaan pakad kar utthak-baithak karni he..aise ghooriye mat! Ghoorne se aapko koi concession nahi milega..

To chaliye shuru karte he hamara teesra charan

..14..13..12..11..10..9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1

Waah kya baat he..bahot acche..

Ab hum apne mukhya atithi se vinanti karte he ki ve kripaya in dono ke ank hame bataye..

Rd - dono ke scores he -34 points..

Neha - dhanyavad atithi vishesh! Hum aapse ye jaana chahte he ki aapko ye sab dekhkar kaisa mehsoos ho raha he?

Rd - mujhe bahot mazaa aa raha he.

Neha - shukriya! Ab hum apne chouthe aur aakhri padaav par pahuch chuke he. Ab dekhte he ki koun sbse pehle baaki bache dus ank prapt karta he..

Iss baar dono ek saath shuru karenge aur dekhte he ki koun jeet ta he..

10..9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1 and the winner is ACP Sameer unhone -44 points pehle haasil kar liye..ACP Arjun ne to shuru hi nahi kiya..aapne aisa kyu kiya ACP Arjun?

Jun - mujhe sirf 34 situps karni thi..20 tumne pehle boli thi aur 14 abhi..to me 10 jyada kyu karu?

Neha - lekin Sameer bhaisa ne aapse 10 jyada ki he

Sam - tumne mujhe bhulne ke liye 10 jyada karne ko kaha tha na isliye mene kiye..

Neha - accha ab aap dono fresh ho jaiye hum khana garam karte he.

[Sam n Jun go to freshen up Rd joins them]

Jun - tujhe bahut mazaa aa raha tha na hume aise dekh ke?

Sam - aur tumhara wo complete flop plan! Jiski wajah se hume 14 situps jyada karni padi..

[they start pillow fight in the room Neha comes to call them but she is hit by a pillow thrown by jun so she shouts at all of them n goes to the drawing room]

But Rd comes running there n sam n jun r chasing him with their pillows..

This time Sam's pillow hits Neha as Rd stood behind Neha. Then Sam started shouting at Neha n throwing pillows after every dialogue

Sam - kya kaha tha tumne hum bacche he?[throws a pillow]

Jun - hume sadu akdu boss kaha tha na to ye uske liye[throws a pillow]

Neha - aapne humari banayi huyi Coffee ko peene layak nahi samjha na [throws a pillow]

Sam - tumne hume Phone par sadu, akdu, khadoos,sir phire, aur garam dimaag wale kah tha na to ye uske liye [throws many pillows one by one]

Now the whole drawing room is messed n pillows everywhere n all four of them r sitting on the sofa n laughing their heart out..their laughter echoed in the whole house..

Neha - ab bas bahot hua aap logo ko bhukh nahi lagi kya? Hamare pet me to chuhe kabaddi khel rahe he..ab isse pehle ki khana phir se thanda ho jaye kha lete he.. chaliye

All have their dinner cracking jokes n sharing funny experiences.

After dinner all sat for a while then Neha showed them the footage of their situps n all of them laughed for sometime

Sam - ab mujhe ghar jaana chahiye kal subah office bhi to jaana he..

Neha - thik he kal milte he ..good night.

[Sam leaves]

Jun - ab mujhe bhi jaana chahiye..

Neha - aap kaha jaa rahe he bhaiya? Ye ghar to aapka bhi he na. aap kahi nahi jaa rahe. Hum aapko kahi nahi jaane denge

Rd - ha bhaiya ruk jaiye na kitne saal ho gaye aap se mile..bahot saari baate karni he aapse

Neha - ab baate nahi ha..dehkiye to bhaiya ki aankhe kaisi soojh gayi he abhi aap aaram kijiye..humne aapka room taiyaar karwa diya he.

Jun - lekin..

Neha - humne aapko option nahi diya he. Aap nahi jaa rahe bas.

[she takes Jun to his room ]

Neha - Hum abhi aapke sar me tel laga dete he..aapko acchi neend ayegi.

Hume gaana gaane ka man har raha he..hum aapko sunate he...

[she brings oil n slowly massages his hair n sings a song]

She slowly caresses his hair n sings..

Swapna Lok Se Aaa
Pankh Lagake
Aajari nindiya
Aari Aaja
Mamta Ki Anchal Ke Chaiya Tale
Raj Dulhare Hai unko Sulaja

Swapna lok se aa pankh lagaake..

After many years Arjun was having a peaceful sleep. Neha slowly puts his head on the pillow caresses his hair for some time n leaves from there very silently. She sees a faint smile on Jun's face. She smiles n goes to her room.

She writes her diary n goes off to sleep.

~ ~

Next morning..

5:30 am

Neha got up n went to Jun's room..

Neha - bhaiya..good morning..

[Jun had just got up. He saw Neha in track suit.he looks at clock]

Jun - are baby! Tum itni jaldi uth gayi? Kaha jane ke liye ready ho?

Neha - ab tracksuit pehenke koi swimming karne to jayega nahi na..hum jogging karne jaa rahe the..socha aapko puch le gar chalna ho to?

Jun - me 5 min me ready hokar aata.

Neha - ok.

[she goes out n calls Sam]

Sam - [sleepy tone] kya hua baby! Itni subah kyu call kiya?

Neha - Bhaisa aap so rahe the?

Sam - Subah sadhe paanch baje log sote he Neha.

Neha - humne to bas isliye call kiya tha ki aap se puch le aapko jogging karne aana he?

Sam - thik he tum jao me 10 min me tumhe join karta hu.

Neha - ok.

[now Neha goes to Rd's room]

Neha - dada! Aap aa rahe he na?

Rd - ha me ready hu. Chalo.

Jun - me bhi ready hu chalo.

[Jun,Rd n Neha go on the beach for jogging]

They have just started n run for few min. n Sam joins them.

Jun - Rathod ! tum yaha?

Sam - kyu? Nahi aa sakta?

Neha - ab plz aap dono sabere-sabere jhagda mat shuru kijiye.

Hum yaha jogging karne aaye he jhagda karne nahi.

[all 4 jog for half an hour]

Neha - chaliye ab ek-ek cutting ho jaaye?

Jun - me abhi laata hu.

Sam - me bhi chalta hu tumhare saath.

[they bath go]

Rd - so ur plan's working. Sam bhai aur Jun bhai ki dosti phirse ho rahi he.

Neha - ha to! Plan kaam karega hi na.Neha ka plan jo he! Aap ki tarah flop plan nahi deti khud ko kidnap karwane ka.

Rd - tumhe kaise pata chala?

Neha tells him how she came to know.

Rd - sorry! Wo ye mera hi plan tha par plz sam bhai aur jun bhai ko mat daatna unhone to mere kehne par wo sab kiya tha.

Neha - thik he nahi daatenge par agli baar aisa creep plan mat banana.

Sam n Jun come with cutting chai n all of them have it n go back home.

~

At Rawte mansion

Neha - bhaiya! Aaj hum aapke saath ETF office chalenge.

Jun - ETF ? par kyu?

Neha - wo hume kuch kaam he. Aapki kidnapping ke silsile me. Aur aap manaa nahi karenge.

Jun - thik he. Lekin waha jyada baate mat karna.

Neha - Nahi karenge.ab chaliye naashta karte he.

[all three have breakfast n get ready o go to their respective offices

Jun n Neha to ETF n Rd to his company's office. ]

~ ~

At ETF Office..

Sam, Jun n Neha reached etf together.

Sam - Neha! Tum yaha?

Neha - ha bhaisa wo kuch kaam tha.

In Conference room..

Neha -Bhaiya! Aapka interrogation room kaha he?

Jun takes her to interrogation room n Sam n team follows.

Neha - interrogation room me sirf aapke boss jayenge..aap sab bahar rahenge.

[team looks at Sam n Jun, they both nod +vely]

[team is in the room next to interrogatin room watching them on monitor]

Inside interrogation room..

Neha - baithiye.

[sam n jun sit]

Neha continues

Neha - waise gundo ne jyada tang to nahi kiya na aapko? ab bataiye ki aap dono kidnap kaise huye? Kisme itni himmat he jo sheher ke best officers ko kidnap kar sake?aap mujhe ek-ek baat detail me bataiye..

Sam - wo tumhe sab kuch Rawte batayega..mujhe to chloroform sungha ke behosh kar diya tha..

Jun - to mujhe kya lemon juice dekar kidnap kiya tha? wo hum yaha ke liye nikal rahe the tabhi piche se kisine humare mu par chloroform wala napkin rakh ke hume behosh kar diya

Neha - humne aapse detail me pucha. aap kahan par the jab aapko chloroform diya gaya?

[Sam n Jun together]

Sam - suv me

Jun - parking me

Neha - pehle confirm kar lijiye ki parking me ya Suv me.

Jun - matlab hum parking me the aur Rathod suv nikaal raha tha to wo suv me tha.

Neha - pehle hamla kis par hua?

Sam-Jun[together] - mujh pe.

Neha - dono pe ek saath hua tha?

Sam-Jun[together] - ha.

Neha - aap logo ke parking me cctvs to honge na to hum ye pata kar sakte he ki kidnapers koun the.

Jun- uski chinta tum mat karo hum dekh lenge.

Neha - aap logo ko unki shakal to yaad hogi na?

Jun - ha

Sam - nahi

Neha - ha ya nahi? hum ye jaankar hi rahenge ki aap dono ko kisne kidnap kiya tha. Bataiye ha ya nahi?

Sam - ha.. nahi.. wo .. wo..

Neha - ye ha nahi wo kya laga rakha he? Saaf-saaf bataiye na.

Sam - wo shakal..

Jun - Rathod hume shakal kaise pata hogi? Hamari aankho pe patti bandh hui thi na?

Sam - me wahi to keh raha tha..

Neha - aap dono waha se bach ke kaise aa gaye?

Sam - ye tum Rawte se pucho

Jun - wo hum logo ne ek dusre ke haath khole..

Neha - aapko ek dusre ke haath dikhayi diye? Par aapke aankho par patti bandhi huyi thi na?

Jun - wo un logo ne hamari aankho ki patti khol di thi.

Neha - kis khushi me? Ya unhe mera plan pasnd aa gaya tha?

Jun - wo..

Neha -bas kijiye bahot hua. [to Sri] mr.Sen! aap hume kal raat ki parking lot ki cctv footage dikhayiye.

Sri - k..kal raat ki f..footage? kyu dekhni he?

Neha - are! mr.Sen aap itna darr kyu rahe he? Jaise wo kidnapper aap ho?

Sri - are aisi koi baat nahi he..wo to bas aise hi [looks at Sam]

Sam - Sri footage dikha do [glares at jun]

[Sri shows the footage on big screen]

Neha - rewind..forward..ok stop.

Neha [clapping]- to aapke kidnappers n aapko parking lot me kidnap kiya tha..apki aankho par patti bandhi aur use khol bhi diya.. waah kya baat he! Kya story banayi he.. Aap logo ko na apni duty chodke story writer ban jaana chahiye...aisi story agar me 5 saal ke bacche ko bhi sunaungi to use bhi pata chal jayega ki ye sab jhooth he. Aap dono ne kya sochkar ye plan ko execute kiya tha?

Sam - tumhe kaise pata ki ye plan humne execute kiya tha?

Neha -humne dada aur bhaiya ki baate sun li thi phone par. aapne iss plan ke baare me socha bhi kaise?

Sam - mene to manaa kiya tha lekin Rawte ko laga ki ye plan work karega. Lekin jab tumhe pata tha to hum se pucha kyu?

Neha - Hume laga tha ki aap dono hume sach batayenge ki ye plan apne hi banaya tha. Bhaiya aapne meri punishment se bachne ke liye itna ghatiya plan socha! Disgusting..😡

N she leaves from there..

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That's it.my work's done..now its ur turn...give ur reviews.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Wow neha is just rocking

Poor samjun...


I enjoyed it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Really nice Neha too good
So ACPS ke sit ups n interrogation was wonderful
Loved it
So neha is bringing samjun closer 👏
Loved the family moments too
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Awesome update...
Neha's talk with Shree...🤣🤣🤣
LOL...Bechare ACPs punishment se bachne ke liye kya kya kiya par fir bhi punishment toh puri karni hi padi...😆😆😆
The whole situps scene was 🤣🤣🤣
Pillow fight...😆😆😆
Neha interrogating ACPs...😆😆😆
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Fantastic update dr...!!!!!
Neha is superb yaar...!!!!!
Loved how he punished Samjun...!!!!!
Their interrogation in the end was mind blowing...!!!!
Loved it...!!! Thanks for pm dr...!!!! continue soon...!!!

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