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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

Ingenious๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘

Adeptly unique๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thanks bunny ji for sharing such a innovative piece of avocation๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Abhi sir and Purvi. Sounds like cronies๐Ÿ˜›. Though my utmost fav characters๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you Saman for liking it ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Veena..

ok ok ab mje bi milli or mene dhek li... its really nice VM Reshma ๐Ÿ‘


Thank you Veena ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

Finally watched it Reshma! It was so touching and lovely! ๐Ÿ‘


Thank you Shreya ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nsapo

Very Charming Reshma..nice caps and music...๐Ÿ‘


Thank u Apo ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: visrom

Sorry, I have been unable to see this till now. Will see it when my wi fi is back in full swing.


Take your time Vis ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

nice work Raaz..
Lovely attempt.. ๐Ÿ‘


Thank you Jerry ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: misha.as

Lovely VM reshma...good job..


Thank you Misha ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Finally watched it!!!

Lovely VM dear ๐Ÿ‘
Great job!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Thank you Neha ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Soni.

Reshma VM is really lovely. Superb work. Love the caps and music yaar ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ


Thank you Soni. Glad you like it dear ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Was upset beyond words after friday. The only way to bring the pain down for me was this. I do not know how many will like it. But please do read it.


WHERE HAVE YOU GONE?

My visage, that brightens at his sight,
Spellbound by his performance so impeccable,
Eyes vigil and ever ready for anything
An inspiring cop, brave and indefatigable

Mad I was to see, to hurt to believe
My face so red, like every rose
So silly a dance, so annoying a scene,
With this to the grave his character goes

The hands clutched a rose laden bouquet
Instead of that .9 mm weapon, so powerful
The legs danced for a silly song, instead of
Giving the criminals a kick, so dreadful

Tears welling up in my eyes, so hot
Shattered to bits and pieces looking at these
His character ruined and buried deep inside
Will this exasperating thing, never cease?

He no more excited me for the rest of the hour,
For he broke my heart, at its very start
Finally the hour's torture ended, leaving me
To pick up the pieces of my broken heart.

๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ


Edited by Reshma. - 11 years ago

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