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Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sajada tere pyaar main
Hi,Everyone

In this story there is nothing like team an all Aisha who had never visited Mumbai far from the crime,investigation,murder
all living a happy life in Chandigarh with her family from head to toe total Pataka Kudi mom and dad's ladli,Veerji's (brother) and didu ki jaan.Loves her bebe(grandma) a lot.Taiji and Tayaji's favorite and cute sis of their big cousins son of her uncle and aunt.A collageu bhooto ke siva kisi se dar nhi lagta

Sam sam sam this he is not having attitude like senior and arjun too his best buddy they r in police force frm 9 months.He is a cool guy too but a duty time never only duty honest ,charming,thora stern.Mom dad whole family is living in Jaipur.A dare man not afraid of anyone.

What she is doing in Mumbai how they met,and wish to met again questions r many answer is only one wait for story and read too

Edited by SweetSheru - 10 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

hey...
i loved d prologue...
plz continue soon...
n do pm me... phhhuuullleaaassee

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Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 1
Story starts from a quit road like we say Sunsaan Sadak.A girl is walking on the road with the suitcase.Guess who she is?Without any doubt Aisha in Mumbai with nervous eyes.

Aisha walking: aaj tak toh suna tha Mumbai mein traffic 24 hours hota hai sadak pein chalene ki bhi jagah nhi hoti aur ithe toh ek pata bhi nhi hil raha.

After that a boy came kept calling: Annu annu wait yaar yeh kiya bewakuffi hai annu annu ruk jaa( he is neither sam nor arjun.Seeing this Aisha starts waliking very fast.Afterwards she hide behind a tree)

Boy: oh god ab yeh annu kha chali gai (I forget to tell annu is petname of Aisha) itne vade sherher mein kha dhoudu aur annu thi bhi toh ek bacchi sirf 20 years ki hai ab mumbai jaisa sheher oh god ab kiya karu (then he walked ahead)

Annu bhahar aa ke :aapaki fikar galat nhi hai par mainu je kha ae toh mein kar ke hi rahungi aur jab tak mein naa chaun mein kisi ke hath nhi aane wali.Dhoudte reh jaoge(she smiles)

New Character- Lavy Singh: Annu's Best Friend Belong frm north India good at drawing.She loves Lavender colours so aisha call her Lavender.

Then Lavy cames turning aisha frm her arm she starts:Annu tera dimaag toh thikane pein hai koi kabhi ghar se iss tarah bhaag ke aata hai woh itne durr aapni wish manawane ke liye tu itni durr ghar se bhag ke aai hai

Annu happily: lavender tu ithe mein kitni khush hoon tujhe pata bhi hai

Lavy: chal wapass chalte hai

Annu: nhi

Lavy: accha thik tu Mumbai mein jab tak rehna chahati hai tu reh par mein rahungi

Annu: ok

Lavy: accha toh hum rahenge kha

Annu:Papaji ne mere wasate mumbai mein ek ghar kharida tha investement ke liye waha pein i have keys.

Lavy: ok

(then they start walking)

Annu: mera hath pakad ke kha le jaa rahi hai mein chhoti bacchi nhi hoon mein na tujhe ghar le jaunge tujh se kaam kar waungi

Lavy:tu mujhese aapana H.W kar waigi

Annu: nhi nhi tu toh meri Best Friend hai tujhse toh mein ghar ka kaam karwaungi.

Lavy:haan haan mein toh naukarani hoon n aur tu

Annu:Maharani

They both were laughing and making fun

Annu kuch dekh ke: tu yahi ruk mein abhi aati hoon

Lavy: aare sun toh

Annu: tu jaa ghar mein aa jaungi thori hi durr hai

(then she goes away)

Then Sam came from Jungle both side of road was surrounded by forest woh lavy ke facepein torch rakhta hai

Lavy: yeh light band karo

( One important work came its urgent so i will
cont soon)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome Prologue & start...

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Continue soon...Plzzz plzzz plzzz PM me

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Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 2

Sam torch neeche rakhta hai and then says:tum itni raat gaye iss lonesome area mein kiya kar rahi ho

Lavy:yeh sab meri friend ne kiya hai itna pareshan kiya btw tum kone ho aur yaha kiya kar rahe ho

Sam:I am a police inspector investigation

Lavy ke mobile pe message aata hai

Message-yaar iss lonesome road pein toh kuch milne se raha isliye road ke tusare side aa jaa aur mein network dhudhne gai thi

(lavy wahan se chali jati hai aisha and lavy dono ek dusare ko dhud rhe hai samaur arjun ko waha kuch nhi mila isliye woh wapas apni bike pein baith kar batein kar rahe hote hai)

Arjun:bhai tu shadi kab karega

Sam:kaal

Arjun: watt???yaar tab toh mujhe choose karna padega ki teri shadi mein aapani kone si gf ko le ke aau

Sam:aapani bakwas band kar

Arjun: accha mein tujhe ek challenge deta hoon par usse pehle agar tujh dar war lagta hai toh bata de don't be shy

Sam:mujhe kisi se darr nhi lgta challenge acepted

Arjun: wah sune se pehle

Sam:zyada bhav mat kha jaldi bata

I know very short post but i will cont soon very soon and i will edit in this only

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(fir wahaan aisha aati hai puri tarah aapane phone mein dubhi hoi usseke paas ek suitcase hai woh thora aage chali jati hai aur arjun ki nazar usspein padti hai usse ek idea aata hai)

Aisha in mind: yeh lavy ko kha tha aane ke liye aur pta nhi kha reh gai phone bhi nhi udha rhi ab kha dhoudu

Arjun: sam tu love mein vishwas karta hai

Sam: bilkul nhi mere khiyal se pyaar time ka wast hota hai

Arjun: tujhe woh ladki dhik rhi hai

Sam mudta hai par aisha ki back hoti hai:woh ladki

Arjun:tera challenge wo hai jake naam puch ke aa

Sam: ismein kone si badi baat hai

Arjun: ladkiya bahar se jitni seedhi dikhti hai utni hi andar se tedhi bhi hai itna aasan nhi hai ab jaa warana woh chali jayengi jaa

Sam jata hai usse kuch samaj nhi aa raha ki kiya bole:oo hey listen gal

Aisha peeche mudhti hai aisha ko dhekh ke sam ke tote udd jate hai

Yeh padho...

Teri Aankhon Se Huyi Yariyan
Chalte Chalte Yun Hi
Meri Aankhon Ne Teri Aankhon Se
Aap Beeti Kahi
Teri Aankhon Ke Peeche Peeche
Hum Pagle Se Chal Pade
Meri Aankhein Ab Dil Ke Chakkar Mein
Kuchh Bhi Na Sunti Hain
Dil Yeh Dhokha Dhadi Kar Dega Socha Na Tha
Itni Yeh Gadbadi Kar Dega Socha Na Tha
Aisi Mushqil Khadi Kar Dega Socha Na Tha..

Ud Gaye Tote Re
Tere Toh Ud Gaye Tote Re La La La
Ud Gaye Tote Re
Tere Toh Ud Gaye Tote Re La..La..La..

plzz tell me how to pm link taki mein karsaku aur tum sab ko baar baar check karne na aana pade update hoa hai ya nhi sab ko frnd request bhej rhi hoon

Edited by SweetShreu - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

BTW me first...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Awesome update..

Continue soon...

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Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 3

maine socha ki edit karun fir socha new part mein post kr deti hoon

(fir wahaan aisha aati hai puri tarah aapane phone mein dubhi hoi usseke paas ek suitcase hai woh thora aage chali jati hai aur arjun ki nazar usspein padti hai usse ek idea aata hai)

Aisha in mind: yeh lavy ko kha tha aane ke liye aur pta nhi kha reh gai phone bhi nhi udha rhi ab kha dhoudu

Arjun: sam tu love mein vishwas karta hai

Sam: bilkul nhi mere khiyal se pyaar time ka wast hota hai

Arjun: tujhe woh ladki dhik rhi hai

Sam mudta hai par aisha ki back hoti hai:woh ladki

Arjun:tera challenge wo hai jake naam puch ke aa

Sam: ismein kone si badi baat hai

Arjun: ladkiya bahar se jitni seedhi dikhti hai utni hi andar se tedhi bhi hai itna aasan nhi hai ab jaa warana woh chali jayengi jaa

Sam jata hai usse kuch samaj nhi aa raha ki kiya bole:oo hey listen gal

Aisha peeche mudhti hai aisha ko dhekh ke sam ke tote udd jate hai

Yeh padho...

plzz tell me how to pm link taki mein karsaku aur tum sab ko baar baar check karne na aana pade update hoa hai ya nhi sab ko frnd request bhej rhi hoon

Sam: hmmm(usse phele woh usse stare kar rha hota hai) woh mein

Aisha: tum toh aise shocked ho gaye jaise chan ko dharti pr dekh liya ho

Sam puri tarah se khoya hoa tha: tum kisi chand se kam thore na ho

Aisha: jiii

Sam: kuch nhi (hand aage padhate hoi) hi I'm Sam

Aisha handshake karti hai : nice name

Sam dono ne hath chor diya : tumhara naam kiya hai

Aisha: Sorry u will not like words of mine but... mein strangers ko aapana naam nhi batati

Sam: tell na yaar maine bhi toh bataya

Aisha: woh tumne khud bataya maine pucha thore na tha

(suddenly wahaan firing start ho jati hai fire back krne ke liye aapani position le leta hai sam aisha ka hath pakad leta hai aur woh log tree ke behind hide ho jate hai sam fire back kr raha hota hai arjun too aisha full confuse)

Edited by SweetShreu - 11 years ago