TAAREY HORROR FF : SSSHHHHH... RAAZ HAI! *PART 11*Pg 51* - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
SUPER UPDATE
CONTINUE SOON DEAR
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
luvd d CS ..! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Awsum concept
The way u gave CS was brilliant
Start was wonderful
Taani missing sharon..aww
I think rey is having headache
Bcoz taani winced in pain
Dis is sum where interesting
Plz updt soon n PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
awesum update .. 👏
taani missing sharon ..! 😃

who's dat guy ..? 😕

i guess some connection is btw taani's cut on her wrist n rey's wound on his head .. ! 😕

luvly update .. 👍🏼

super excited 4 d nxt update .. 😃

update soon ..
thank u 4 d pm .. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
first chapter was superb

but it was too short

next tym give long update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
fab concept really amazing!!
its veryy interesting!! the first chapter was really scary nd made me soo curious!!
plzz update soon nd keep sending me pm!!
i loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Somewhere a girl was shouting or screaming...
" AAAHHH !!!"

Boy : (just as the scream ended so did his head-ache) DAMN IT !!! (pressing his forehead) FIR SE NAHI...
Sw : Dude seriously tu ja ke kisi doctor ko kyu nahi dikhata?
Boy : Jaa ke kya bolu doctor ko - "Doc mujhe sudden head-aches hote hai and within 5 mins thik ho jate hai." He'll just say I am crazy. Thats it !
Sw : But Rey ye tu bhi janta hai ki ye normal nahi hai...
R : Dekh agar tujhe kuch abnormal lag raha hai, then I can't help. Ho sakta sudden stress ke wajah se ho...
Sw : But Rey... ( his phone starts ringing. He notices the caller and knows that he can never ignore this call)

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Sharon had finished all the paper works with her clients. She was very happy that her company had got the deal. She wanted her sister to be the first one to know but that was not possible.

Sh : (to herself) Yahan agar dopahar ke 4:30 ho rahe hai matlab LA me to subah ke 3 baj rahe honge. She must be sleeping. Swayam ko batati hu...

Sharon dials Swayam's number, knowing very well that her sweet hubby won't make her wait for more than three rings.

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The pain had stopped after a few seconds, but those few seconds had felt no less than eternity. She tied her hair in a messy bun and splashed cold water on her face. She leaned on the edge of the basin, thinking about the mark on her wrist - the mark that had some link with her nightmares.

FLASHBACK

A cute, little, 5 year old girl ran to mother, with her left hand in the air. She was too eager to know about the mark on her wrist.
Baby girl : Mom, see I've a weird mark here... (raising her wrist)... look...
Mom : Darling that's your birth mark.
Baby girl : What's a birth mark?
Mom : Hmmm... When you were a small baby...
Baby girl : (pointing towards her mom's stomach) You mean when I was sleeping there?
Mom : (ruffling her hair lovingly) Yes... when you were here... (pointing towards the baby girl's stomach) an angel came and kissed you on your wrist...
Baby girl : (innocently) Is this the angel's lipstick mark?
Mom : (laughing at her daughter's innocence and childish antics) Yes darling.

FLASHBACK ENDS

A small smile was there on her lips. Thinking about those innocent and carefree days of her childhood days with Sharon. While lying down on her bed, she had a small glimpse out of the window. She hated this time of the day when it was neither night nor morning. It was in between. It always reminded her of something people say paranormal - in between life and death. Pushing off these freaky thoughts and imaginations, she tried to again think about her childhood, and was quite successful, except...

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Girl : (giggles) PAKDIYE HUME...
Boy : TAHANI RUKIYE BHI...
Girl : REHAN AAP HUMSE FIR SE HAAR GAYE...
Boy : TAHANI HUME AAP SE HARNA BHI PASAND HAI...
Girl : (holds the boy's hand) CHALIYE NA AB...
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...Except it wasn't her and Sharon's childhood.

She woke up to the sound of her alarm. Still not wanting to get up, she rubs her eyes and slowly opens her eyes. Welcoming the morning, she picked up the photo frame having the pic of her and Sharon, she kissed it good morning, placed it near the window and went to get fresh.



Taking a hot shower, she had a feeling that it was going to be a long day. She dressed up in a full sleeve top, leggings put on a coat and boots. She now had a big job to do - remove the blanket of snow in front of her house. She put on her ear-phones, switched on her i-pod and set to work.

We were both young when I first saw you
I close my eyes
And the flashback starts
I'm standing there
On a balcony in summer air
*STATIC*

Jadu teree najar
khushbu teraa badan
Tu haan kar ya naa kar
Tu haan kar ya naa kar
tu hai meree...

She took out her i-pod and checked if anything was wrong with it. It still showed "LOVE STORY- TAYLOR SWIFT PLAYING". Now that was something unusual for her.
*STATIC*

That you were Romeo, you were throwing pebbles
And my daddy said stay away from Juliet
And I was crying on the staircase
Begging you

*STATIC*

HUM AAP KA INTEZAAR KAR RAHE HAI TAHANI...
She dropped her i-pod out of fear. Even though the wind was chilly outside, her forehead was covered with beads of perspiration. She was too shocked to move.

"Hey you dropped your i-pod." her neighbour said, picking it up.

Somehow, she managed to mutter "THANKS". She was about to take it when her eyes fell on it's screen. It showed "LOVE STORY - TAHANI AUR HUMARI PLAYING". She froze on her spot.


"LOVE STORY - TAYLOR SWIFT... nice song." her neighbour continued.

She again glanced at the screen. It was "TAYLOR SWIFT". Her mind was full of questions. What was going on? Was that an illusion or ...
OR WAS SOMETHING REALLY WRONG? 😕




NOTE : Hope you guys like it. Suggestions and criticism is always welcomed. Plz do hit like and comment. I know it's not creepy but then you never get the horror or main theme in the beginning itself. Plz Plz do like and comment. Love you all...


Edited by Vrindaroxz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
awesome going and scaring too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Awesome update
little scary
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
nice update
why does rey have headache sometimes?
scared wen the scene of taani's i-pod
hey its a shart update. next time give long update

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