Intezar AR SS (Prt.13-Pg12) 1/4/2015

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TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

beautiful SS dii..
pure depiction of true love..
they waited for each othr whole 6yrs ..
god knws agar miltey nhi toh aur kitna intezar kartey!!
nd dat all ammy did for his respct to ridz's father..
that's soo respectful..
thinking about others while hurting himslf..
beautiful ss dii..
luvd it soo muchh..😊

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TenTinyBreaths

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

oh forgot to mention..
dii complete d SS soon,na..😊😊

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Nikki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Loving the concept :-)
That's so cute that they waited for each other for so long
Please continue soon

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Fimmy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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megha bansal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

awsume parts nikki...plz post next soon...waiting...n do add me in ur buddy list dear

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Niketa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Part 9

Intezar AR Short Story

Someday passed from the time riddhima visited armaan's house and met his parents if she says its her parents too now then it is not at all false she almost talked everyday to prerna mom and anurang papa they are just awesome parents she do loved them too so much and occasionally went to his house too for dinner too and about her armaan she is so much happy they just spends time with each-other and loved each-other so much they have their little bickering but their love always reached heights and about shashank they decided that armaan and she talked about themselves after anjie's marriage and they are actually awaiting for that day only. And now finally it's time for atul and anjii's marriage, everybody is busy in preparations. armaan and riddhima is more than happy, now they are together, doing work and off course doing romance. After all they had decide to talk shashank about their relation after anjii's marriage.
An:''ridzi armaan ko dekhti rahegi ya jaimala bhi pehnaygi''
Riddhima came out from her dream and she just embarrassed as she caught red-handed looking at love of her life who is now going to be her husband in few seconds.
''taare hai barati, chandni hai barat, saaton phere honge,
ab hongee hathon me lekar haath
jeevan-saathi hum, deeya aur baati hum,
jeevan-saathi hum, deeya aur baati hum,''
And they complete their pheres and armaan ties manglsutra around her neck and put sindoor in by siding her maangtika, as when he places sindoor some fells on riddhima's nose
An:''matlab ridzi armaan tujhe bahut pyaar karega''
Ar:''kyoon anjii tumhe koi doubt hai?''
And after that riddhima suddenly head someone shouting her name and as she opened her eyes rubbing them she is surprised she for a minute is little bit disoriented because she is seeing something else and then she gets out from her dreams as she heard anjie's voice as she is the only one sitting there and calling her as she just speaks seeing her little bit disoriented as
An:''ridzi please uth na aj merii mehndi hai aur tuu abhie tak so rai hai''
Ridzi wakes after anjii shakes her finally shrugging her shoulders and then she finally realize she is seeing dream of her marriage with her armaan and she smiles and blushed remembering that beautiful dream she sent a silent prayer to her god that this dream comes true and her dad agreed on their marriage and finally smiling and hugging anjie she moved and moved towards restroom to gets ready for anjie's marriage and anjii's mehndi go well and ridzi also places mehndi in her hands and just because of everyone's constant saying she placed mehndi on her hands till her arms it's kind off almost Dulhan's marriage and she actually denied saying that it is anjie dii's marriage not hers but she did that because she saw armaan's face as he too pleads her from his eyes as their eyes met and she can see he is so much in this and it is his dream so she agree
and now finally as riddhima after her hands gets soaked and she let out her mehndi slowly and now she is standing inside the kitchen as she looked at her hands, the colour of mehndi is totally black and she hides her face in her hands remembering armaan and his love and right that same moment she feels two hands creeping around her back and she looked at surprisingly though she knows it's him only and yes off course as soon she opened her eyes she finds him holding her tummy and locking his hands at her back
Ar:''jaaan let me see your hands na''
He said making her blush and she just speaks as
Ri:''armaan tum yahan''
Ar:''ab please faltu bat nahin mujhe nahin sunana kuch aur nahin mujhe bas aapni jaan ke haath dekhne hain aur aapna chupa hua nam bhi so let me see naa jaan please abhie yahan koi bhi nahin hain so please jaan ''
Riddhima nodded in disagreement so much blushing her cheeks are red fully and armaan smiled seeing his shy jaan and then he enveloped her more tightly in his arms and pulled her more closer to himself and he makes her closer and leaning towards her and only then atul comes breaking his trance and she immediately pushed him and armaan frowned seeing him and hearing the footsteps and then they heard as
At:''armaan mere bhai mujhe bahut dar lag rahaa hai kal merii shaadi hain''
He said entering inside making a small face and armaan frowned as he actually comes at not right moment
Ar:"'yar terii timing''
And that moment riddhima takes this chance as a escape so she moved away from him and speaks up as
Ri:''mujhe kuch kam hain mai chalti hun''
And armaan looked at her as she leaves giving her a cute pouted look and riddhima smiled at his cute face and then only armaan gets busy as atul busied her.
Marriage day shashank calls riddhima in his room as she is doing preparations in anjie's marriage and same she is thinking about himself and armaan as she knows they are just going to tells her father about themselves in some hours and here shashank himself called her she happily go inside in his room and as shashank heard her
Ri:''papa aapnein mujhe bulaya koi kam tha kya papa''
And shashank just nodded and just he said not thinking twice and just blasted a bomb on her taking earth away under from her feet
Sh:''riddhima maine tumhe kahaa tha ki tumhari shaadi tumhari marji se hi hogii, but now you have to marry and the boy is Dr.Siddhant Modi after anjii's marriage u have to marry, no arguments on this ohk''
Hearing that riddhima shattered and she ran to her room and cried bitterly not knowing what she can do as knowing her father and after looking at his stern face and she knows he is not going to hear her as much as she tried and moreover shashank did not even gives her a chance to speaks anything he just moved inside his study after saying his decision before she leaves and she cried and cried in her room latching her door not talking anyone not opening the door of her room thinking how her father can do this not even gives her a single chance to say anything or asked her opinion she
Ri:''kyoon bhagwan aap mere aur armaan ke saath hii aisaa kar rahein ho humne aapk akya bigada hain pehle bhii armaan ne sirff papa ke liyye mujhse itnein sal durii banal ii aur hum log aalag rahein aur ek doosre ka Intejar kiyya humnein aur aab aaj jab hum itnein Intejar baad mille hain tab bhi aap humein dur kar rahein hain fir se papa aise kaise kar sakte hain oonhone ek baar bhii merii marzi nahin poochi bas aapna decision suna diyya oonhone aur armaan oos par kya beetegi jab vo yeh soonega tou kii hum log fir se aalag ho jaayenge iss baar tou main jee bhi nahin paungi ooske bina naa hii mera armaan vo tou sun bhi nahin paayega yeh kii papa merii shaadi kisii aur se kara rahein hain nahin main armaan kii hun aur humesha bas ooski rahungi vo merii jaan hain ooske alawa main kabhie kisii aur kii honein kii soch bhi nahin sakti nahin main aisa nahin honein doongi mujhe armaan ko abhie sab batana hoga kahin aisaa naa ho jaaye kii bahut der ho jaaye nahin aabki baar nahin aabki baar hum aalag nahin honge hum donow mil kar papa se baat karenge main armaan se baat karungi aur hum donow milkar papa se aur oonhein manana padega oonhein humenin hum nahin jee paayenge ek doosre ke bina oonhein samjhna hoga aur fir vo merii khushi hii chahte hain aur aab mom aur dad (prerna and anurag) bhi hain humare saath vo batayenge papa ko aur dii bhi au jeeju bhi hain naa so''
And it's almost in evening she calls armaan as she in all her time not even gets that its almost evening and even Barat is coming it's time to anjie and atul's marriage and she just on call said armaan that she needs to talk him very important and armaan as he already reached Gupta House for anjie's marriage immediately moved towards his jaan's room as he too just wants to met his jaan and as soon she sneaked in her room and latched the door he finds her standing near her bed he goes closer to her as her back is facing him and he hugged her from her behind putting his chin on her shoulder and riddhima just shivered and before she speaks anything armaan smiled and after kissing her on her shoulder he speaks up after inhaling the fragrance of her hairs and nuzzling in her hairs and riddhima just
Ar:''oho itnii jaldi hain mujhse milne ki merii dulhan ko vaise 1 baat bhi hain mujhe bhi merii jaan ko dekhna tha i so love you jaan kash aaj hii tumhe aapnein gharr lekar jaa sakta main merii jaan ko merii pyari jaan''
He said and riddhima just don't even takes it more and holds it to herself she turned and she just hug him and cried her heart out and armaan is shocked he is not at all expected he is just expecting her to be happy after all it's her dii's marriage and seeing him but it's all opposite but seeing her crying like that his heart feels so much pain in his heart as if thousand needles pricked in his heart he can never see her crying and then only he as
Ar:"shhh jaaan kya hua hai,mujhe batao please jaan mujhe dar lag raha haiin jaan please''
He said restlessly his own eyes filled so much tears and riddhima tells him everything as armaan soothed her in his arms and sensing and feeling his love she say everything and then just hearing it armaan tensed gets shocked the years he spent the time without her the life is just lifeless and he cannot stay a second without her she is his heartbeats and he don't knows right now how to react he is too much shocked to react or to say anything and the love of his life is so much broken in his arms crying to him at that moment he feels riddhima actually gives her own life on him and that moment he just knows one thing riddhima is his only and he can not let her away from himself she is just his and he just knows only one way to makes her his own and he holds her wrist and start leaving from her room taking her in shock as he start moving along her after opening her door and riddhima don't knows he is going to do and seeing him leading her to downstairs she is so much shocked he is not talked to her just start leaving as
Ri:''armaan mujhe kahan le jaa rahee ho mujhe tum?''
But armaan keeps on going not replying her and everyone in their house looking at them only shocked faces riddhima too is so much shocked not knowing armaan is going through them and then he reached at man dap, everyone saw them b shockingly as but before that anyone can react on this act shockingly Armaan fill her maang with sindoor, her hair is all covered with sindoor and he took mangalsutra from the thall which is placed beside pandit and places around her neck just like that and everyone is so much shocked with his acts and he next moment holds her duppatta and tied with his own sherwani's duppatta and start taking pheras and he takes four rounds as riddhima is in front of him and then the three he in front of her
'lagan beetne se pehle reet kar len poori
Maang kii sindoor se rahein na koi doori
Vedhi yehi mandap yehi
Yehi hai gharr aanagan
Yehii sindoor laga dun
Mujhe haq hain
Main dulhan tujhko bana lun
Mujhe haq hain''
and doing all this he finally stopped and riddhima is numb from the time he filled her maang with sindoor she don't even react she just do as he is doing and then finally as armaan stopped as his heart finally registered and gets the assurance that she is now his only, no one is going to takes her away from him he sighed and looked at her blankly and everybody is shocked as the sudden turn of events and riddhima just touch her head and her neck as the back beads comes in her hand she has tears in her eyes as they rolled on her cheeks and she looked at armaan and armaan comes forward to wipe away her tears but before he could do that as his hands just reached on her cheeks when he heard someone's booming voice in all around the place and he turned

Si:''Dr.Shashank yeh sab kya hai?''
Armaan looked at the person standing beside Dr. Shashank and glaring at him and riddhima he just comes closer to riddhima even protecting her from his gaze and armaan can answer him but Dr. Shashank as
Sh:''sid merii bat sonoo, riddhima ki shaadi tumse hi hogii beta let me clear this mess Dr.Armaan yeh kya behudgi hain aap kaun hotein hain yeh sab karne vale tamasha karne vale merii betii kii shaadi meiin merii raye aapke bare meiin bilkul sahii thi gair zimevar insan hain aap par main aapni betii kii shaadi tumse kabhie nahin honein doonga ooski zindagi barbad nahin karni hain mujhe aapke saath aap itne badtmeez insan ke saath kabhie bhi nahin merii riddhima kii shaadi sirff sid se hogi jo har tarah se ooske laayak hain aapke jaisa nahin badtmeez kahin ke go away jao''
As shashank accused her armaan just heard all this quietly he knows as he gets married to her in such a manner and he just speaks a simple sentence as shashank still is saying that sid and all but he just say
Ar:''sir app bhull rahee hai riddhima ab shadi-shuda hain aur aap ek shaadi shuda ladki ke bare meiin aise''
But he is cut short in between by shashank an angry shashank emerged near armaan and speaks so loud as
Sh:''armaan yeh shaadi ko hum nahin maante hain, vaise phi tumne merii betii se jabrdasti shaadi ki hain,tumhe to mai chodunga nahin merii betii kii life aisee spoil karne ke liyye tum hote kaun ho yeh sab karne vale main tumhe kabhie bhi maf nahin karunga merii betii kii zindagi se khilwad karne ke liyye tum chalo yahan se niklo abhie ke abhie tumhe tou main jao''
He said as and Dr.Shashank comes and caught armaan's wrist in order to get him out from house in all this his sherwani's duppatta fell from his neck but before it gets untied from riddhima's one her heart makes her hands towards it and holds it and then she
An:''ridzi tu kahan khoii hai dekhh sab armaan ko doshi man rahee hain ridzi tuu sun bhi rahii hain naa''
She said as she shakes riddhima a bit as she saw riddhima is not at all reacting as Dr.Shashank takes armaan near the house's door and he is just looking at riddhima not resisting her father just she can see the pain and love for her in his deep blue eyes and they keeps on looking in each-other's eyes as the pain is visible in their eyes as they looked in each-other's eyes as if saying
'Bechani kya hain kyoon yeh uljhan hain
Gam aur khushiyon ka kaisa yeh bandhan hain
Peecha gayya chut koi aage naya mod koi
Sapne dikhata hain mujhko bulata hain''