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Posted: 11 years ago
I knew whats gonna happen...still I couldnt hold my tears back...dil ko chhoon liya...so amazingly written...waiting for the epilogue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
My 10 year old is falling in love with Romeo and Juliet as she is getting into Shakespeare. So your story brings back all the tragical lovers in stories: heer Ranjha, Laila Majnu, Romeo Juliet, etc. . .i knew she was going to die but still it was quite sad to read this all over again. Poor Arnav, nothing but pain and negativity in his life as a maharajah. The media always projects the glamorous life of the royals but not so much the chains that hold them back or the choices they have to make due to their status. His mother bound by traditions could not see her son being happy for once with a commoner and took away the only happiness he has known in his life. He avenges his sweetheart's death by making the hardest decision a son can make with his mother's death. In between these 2, an innocent gave all her love and life for a man who truly loved her and would have done anything to be with her. Nothing but memories remain till they are reunited again in after life.
On a side note, I am glad you went in more details behind the initial story as you truly did justice to their love story instead of it being taken as an infatuation of a monarch with his mistress. Can't wait to start reading Saffron Fields.
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Posted: 11 years ago
last chapter was heartwrenching...this chapter made me cry...the way u have written with sad emotions was awful as always...each and every line was intens...arnav and mohi separation was so painful...thinking of those era wonder how much cud they hav been longing for each other...and arnav's mother no doubt she was just a stubborn silent cat masterpiece..in those era women were the worst enemies to each other...rich women had vengeance,jealous,royalty,status that were running in their blood..they show no pity on innocent low level women regardless of the broughtup...while arnav was so impatient to comebaack to mohi the poor gal was so heartbroken after arnav's mother sent her back to Bhopal..and she was pregnant...while arnav was heartbroken and immediately arrived to Bhopal to take back her the poor gal was full of pain with her lost child and suffering with health problem..😭was mohi's aunt responsible for her abortion?!seems lyk she was evil too...after knowing everything from mohi,arnav had immediately planned to marry her that wud be a big blow to his mother and also for his own benefit...he cudnt lose her again..poor man he didnt know it that tym that he was going to lose his love forever..as expected mohi was given poisoned milk and somehow what she feared before had come true to her that she wud lose her arnav as her husband..she cudnt give him his kushi...only she knew him well...atlast she ended her life hoping that in the next generation they wud be together...arnav was hellbroken again...glad that he had punished his mother nevertheless with what relation he had with her..that was a lesson he had taught the Rewar ppl...with the restless night with the absence of his newly wed wife his ears pierced with the beautiful and the fateful song of his love, he entered his mohi's chamber Moti Mahal for paying his last visit and with reaching the parapet he looked at the sky praying for his love to comeback chanting her words...omg THAT WAS REALLY SOULBREAKING...
Edited by gail-ipk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Epilogue..

80 years later...


A gleaming, dirt road meandered through the face of the moonlit plain, gently sloping from the rocky foothills of Vindyas Mountains down to the sea of twinkling orbs of lights, that signaled the presence of human habitation. A lone figure, barefoot and wearing tattered clothes walked uphill with weary, heavy steps. His overgrown hair caught the night breeze and flapped wildly even as drops of blood trickled from his weather beaten, leathery forehead and ran down his face, unchecked.

A smile played on his lips as he talked to himself, with an incongruent air of unconcern that perhaps only a mad man can manage. Ridiculed, stoned and banished from civil society, he trudged up the windswept path towards the foothills, not knowing where his feet were taking him.

Without warning, a silver fork of lightning ripped through the black velvety sky to reveal the burnished red sand stone facade of the Anand Vilas Palace as it perched proudly on a rocky cliff. Slowing down, he raised his eyes and gazed at a dark, desolate wing of the palace, while the wind howled around him.

"Mohi...Mohi...", the disconsolate wind whispered to him, causing unexplained tears to run down his suddenly stricken face. His body trembled because the whole air around him seemed to be shuddering with umimaginable grief and each gust of the wind tortured with pain. He had chanced upon a phenomenon that kept people away from the palace at nights.

A century old incessant echo, a century old yearning , a century old love...


Like innumerable people before him, this man had no idea or understanding about what he had chanced upon; his crippled mind could not comprehend the true nature of that powerful disembodied emotion, that had suddenly assailed his heart and soul. All he could feel was his own responses to it. His quivering heart, his streaming eyes, the shudder of the heavy air surrounding him and the disconsolate, relentless wail of the wind. Innumerable people before him had felt the same.

The cry of a grieving, tortured soul, disembodied since almost a century, begging for some reprieve...for hope...for succor...for love...for Mohini...

As another flash of lightning lit up the sky, the man raised his face upwards and whispered just a single word.

Mercy.


As he sped away from the palace, his barefeet silent on the dirt road, something changed in that night. The wind slowed even as it's tortured wailing transformed into a whisper, it's yearning into anticipation.


Anticipation laced with hesitant stirrings of hope.


Mohi?



The air stilled, holding it's breath, listening attentively as the sweet notes of an invisible nightingale ascended to the heavens once again.


Like a prayer.


And then, without warning, without any kind of preamble, the skies burst open and water poured down from it, accompanied by a thunderous, ear-shattering din of drumming rain drops.

The tortured air, the wailing wind mingled with water, grief mingled with reprieve and together, they fell onto the parched, thirsty earth causing warm scented vapor to rise from it.

Like the sigh of a lover who finally become ones with it's mate.




Dear readers,

Hope you liked it...and hope I was able to keep my promise of not letting the story end on a note of despair..:)

Biting nails, while waiting for your feedback...

Love,

Jenny..


Edited by IPK007 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
The story of Mohini and the Maharaja was so tragic, yet so beautiful at the same time. You really did do justice to it as a standalone story. Your ability to write period pieces is simply amazing.

Thanks for sharing this story with us once again; really enjoyed reading it, even with the tragic ending.
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Posted: 11 years ago
A beautiful ending. I don't remember it from the first one. I think you should repost the other story as well. The one that connects with a current Arnav and Khushi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well he got some solace in the end
Oh man it wasn't easy to read
Knowing what would happen in the end
But he did get his mohi back
Must not cry too much
As he gets his khushi aka mohi in next life
Mercy was given to him
Sad and yet beautiful ending
Thank you for giving us this again
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Posted: 11 years ago
Some where in some other world in some other time, Maharaja Arnav and Mohini were united for eternity!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I did wish for them to have the happiness ...but the last chapter was heartbreaking...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its a master piece...it has touched my heart...

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