VIRIKA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: suju143

Amazing
great update
fabulous
thank for the pm
continue soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliantly written.
Love reading it.
Their sweet talkd fight remember me of krysn.

Thanx alor reyna for writting such a wonderful story.

Hey if I dont reply frm nxt tme den do nt gt sad & don't frgt to pm me as my boards r arriving.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 03Kamya

Brilliantly written.

Love reading it.
Their sweet talkd fight remember me of krysn.

Thanx alor reyna for writting such a wonderful story.

Hey if I dont reply frm nxt tme den do nt gt sad & don't frgt to pm me as my boards r arriving.


thank u
n whos krysn ? ... sry, i donno !!
ok, i'll surely pm u !!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing update
loving virika small small fights and den saying sorry
love this jeevika wch is straight forward
continue soon
thanks for the pms
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Posted: 11 years ago
sry for late cmt again had read long ago forgot to cmt anyways luving the stories in the diary thanx for the pm 2 keep us updated dont do it late
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 11:

Varun and vanshika thought that viren didn't love aenna as he was just admitting in his diary on jan 2, 2013 !

So, they thought to better read the 2012's diary to go ahead with 2013's and started 2012 !!

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

July 17, 2012

I completed reading the book and so, I went to handover the book to librarian n also inform the miss.topper abt it !

As I went to library, she was present there only !!

I thought ... is she really a bookworm ? but I left it coz ... it's none of my matter !!

As I extended the book to librarian, she grabbed it from my hands like an angry bird

Can I know ur name miss ? ... I guess it'll help ...coz, if I don't find a book here, I can easily come to u !!

She replied softly for the first time that her name is aenna and we both introduced ourselves !!

We had a coffee and I came to my home

Shez not that bad after all ... !!

And girls must be tough, else ... any silly boy can get her !

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Vanshika: so, our son likes girls with attitude ! ... Then why doesn't he like jeevika ? wat's wrong in her ?. ...shez also showing attitude !!

Varun: that's not called attitude vanshi, that called hatred !! ... they both hate eachother, but don't worry, we'll make them love eachother soon ... !

He continued reading ...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Days are passing and now, ... the girl whom I just didn't like at all during my first meeting, is my best friend !

I never thought of this happening !

But I'm glad to god that he has given me such a cute best friend who understands whatever I say !!

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

October 13, 2012

Today, we went to play beach volleyball ...

My thoughts were less on game and more on the girls who were playing volleyball in beside courts ...

I was searching for that girl who hit me, I want to show her how well I can play !!

This is the first time, my mind is thinking abt a girl whom I even donno !

I wish to meet this girl as soon as possible

~*~*~*~*~*~

After reading the 2012 diary completely, varun noted some points which he had underlined in his brain

1. Aenna is very sweet girl

2. Shez viren's best friend and just best friend

3. Viren wanted to meet jeevika desperately ( the volleyball girl )

4. Aenna likes people who can make her laugh and hates lies

5. She always appreciates viren for his gud behavior

6. she never forgets to praise viren and viren loves it

vanshika: grt work varun ! now, shall we go to 2013 diary ?

they shift to 2013 diary ... ( 1st jan and 2nd jan were done in previous parts )

~*~*~*~*~*~

Jan 4, 2013

Today, aenna was really adamant to know whether I love her or not !!

So, I told her that I don't love her as I never wanted to give her false hopes ...

She immediately questioned me that ... do I know wat love is ?

I replied in a no !

She then said that she'll make me understand wat love is and then ... I can tel her if I love her or not !!

She told me that we both wil stay away from eachotehr for 3 days without even chatting and then, we'll meet on 4th day at the same place to know abt love !!

Both of us agreed and left the place

But now, I feel...does this really make me understand wat love actually is ?

Ok, I'll try and see if it works out

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Jan 8, 2013

Today, I'm going ot meet aenna after 3 days ... !!

I should tel her how much I missed her !!

I went to her and we settled ...

She had a paper with different questions ...

She told me that ... These are questions to test our love and we are positive in all these , then we both love eachother and if not, we never loved eachother !!

Then started the quessionaire ...

1).Did u miss eachother in these 3 days ?

We both answered ... yes

2).With whom do u want to share ur happiest moment other than parents ?

We both answered ... aenna and viren

3).With whom do u want to share ur saddest moment other than parents ?

We both answered ... aenna and viren

4).Do u dream abt the eachother ?

She answered yes and I answered no,

as I have nightmares almost every other day abt that volleyball girl again defeating me !!

5).Do u feel jealous ?

Aenna said yes and I said no

I asked her, for wat she feels jealous and she said that ... she is jealous of my dream girl wenever I mention her name

And I retorted ... shez not my dream girl, but my sleep disturbing girl !!

6).Do u feel eachotehr's company very comfortable than with any one of ur gang ?

We both answered in yes

7).Ur needed person during emergency

We both answered ... aenna and viren

8).Do u remember the sweetest things u've had in past ?

She answered yes n mine was no, as I barely remember things ... !!

Again she raises her questions ... Wen u don't remember these many things that happened btw us, how come u remember that single game and girl ?

I calmed her ... I never knew answer of this question even for myself !

9).Do u know abt each and evry detail of eachother ?

We both answered yes

And I added a clause ... " except her measurements, I guess I know everything abt her "

She again complimented for my perfect timing and sense of humour

~*~*~*~*~*~

Vanshika: ohoo ... So, my son also flirts with girls !! ... how can he know a gilr's measurements ? ... Thank god, he didn't know and I wish that he never knows it even !!

Varun: don't be soo hysterical vanshi !! ... He's man and he should know atleast some of the art that his father is a preacher of !!

Vanshika: now u don't get started ... continue with the diary

~*~*~*~*~*~

10).Do u care for eachother ?

We both said ... yes

Now, the most imp. Questions ...

11).Do u feel something passionate wen u hug eachother ?

She said yes n mine was a no

12).Does ur heart race at the other's touch ?

She again said yes n I again said no

Since many were not matching, I said that we don't love eachother, but she asked me to meet at the same place tomorrow to decide it completely and forever !!

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Varun: it's enough for today vanshi, we'll continue tom !

Vanshika: no varun, how can we stop at this point, we'll read next day's and then we'll sleep !!

Varun: no !! ... come and sleep with me !

They both sleep

After returning from work and clg, virika have dinner and go to their room early to decide their plan to stop vanshika !!

Viren: why don't we act like a normal couple infront of her so that she don't try anything stupid to unite us ?

Jeevika: yeah ... it's nice, but will she believe us after wat we did ?

Viren: u've a point ! ... why don't we act like friends first and gradually make them believe that we are perfect !!

Jeevika: this will work, but I've a condition !!

Viren: wat's that ?


u'll all know her condition and the next day in diary in next update !!


i want long comments for my long update


********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ress
unrress
ahh... what agr8 update u gave it as really tooo
wonderfull
this is gtting interesting day by day
i even cant predict whats coming next just loving that how u r portraying the characters
and revealing the past of viren through his dairy
the small little fight and understandings are amazing btw vanshika and vikram
viren and jeevika are too planing for something to make vanshika understand that now everything is fine btw them
hope the plan really works and they really unite soon
i loved how u decribed each words
its magical
nice update again
now waiting for Thursday to come soon
take care
love u

Edited by sweet_aayushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
more than virika
i liked
vanshika and varun character
they are behaving
like a teenager
and virika is planning to act
like normal
in front
of vanshika
she will get them so nicely
they are accting
and she will teach them lesson
and vanshika like she dont know anything about
viren
my son flirt with girl
she thinks viren is decent girl
total
it
was superb
fantastic
awesome
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
do u know u r such a grt writer ???
do u know ur each update make me smile????
do u know u write beautifully ???
if I don't u should know all this !!!!
u r so phenomenal as a writer
I love each nd every update of urs!!!!
nd feel like reading again nd again ...
do cont soon :)
cant wait !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
luved it is was awesum cant wait 2 read more n i knw that he doesnt luv aenna but eagerly waitin 2 knw y he said that he luvs her even though he knws that he dont luv her many questions which only u can answer so update them soon waitin

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