T2-ariya ff:ek nayee prem kahani (part-21-page-33)30sep - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mujhey abhi update chahiyeh...😡 😡
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Originally posted by: Aks13

Mujhey abhi update chahiyeh...😡 😡


lagta hai sys dena padega...😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all congrats for the new thread dr n sorry for being so late...!!!
BTW the update was mind blasting n quite shocking...!!!!!
Arjun bcme hell surprised whn told him that she was just potraying that she lost her memory as per Sam's plan...!!!
Awww Arjun tried to make her understand that it's love not inftuation but she didn't paid any heed...!!!!
Her outpour was quite painful...!!!!!
FB was superb...!! Loved how Sam conviced Riya to go forward with his plan n gv another chance to their relationship...!!!!
OMG thy all tried their best to stop her but she went away leaving behind broken Arjun...!!!
Let's see how he get his Riya back in his life...!!
Thanks for pm dr...!!! Continue soon...!!!!
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008



lagta hai sys dena padega...😈


Kavzzz I think she need sys with damn it... 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I m back !!!! i hope ki sab log previous part ki shock se overcome kar chuk ho .ok now time 4 the nxt part .but firstly i have 2 thank 2 all of u 4 ur supports .i can presume that u r liking the story .

Guyz ,ek baat bohot din se kehna chahti hu ...i know meri frnds mujhe bohot pyaar karte hai .but that not means ki tum log mere bare me criticize nehi kar sakte .if u have any complain or demand u can ask me frankly .i will b very happy 😊.




PART-18

Arjun slamped on the ground & burst into tears .

Sam ,ayesha ,shree & chotu had also tears in their eyes seeing arjun's condition .

Ayesha :sam ,ap jakar arjun ko samhaaliye .mein riya ki ghar jakar usse samjhane ki koshish karti hu .

Sam nodded his head .ayesha left with shree 4 riya's home .

Sam walked 2 arjun & kept his hand on arjun's shoulder .

Arjun raised his head & hugged sam tightly .he is crying so badly .sam also crying seeing his frnd like this condition .he never saw arjun like this .

Arjun :sam ,mein jee nehi paungi riya k bina .mein maar jaungi ...😭

Sam :arjun ,aise nehi kehte .samhaal khudko .

Arjun :kaise samhalu ...mein janti hu ki meine riya ko bohot hurt ki hai .par mein sach keh rahi hu sam mein riya se ab bohot pyaar karti hu .kaise yakin dilau usse ...

Sam :arjun ,mein janta hu ki tu riya se sach much bohot pyaar karne lagi hai .aur dekhna ek din riya jarur laut k ayegi tere pas .kyu ki sachcha pyaar kav hamse dur nehi hota ...

in riya's house

Riya reached at her house.her mom dad still not came .she immediately rushed 2 her room ,closed the door & burst into tears .

Riya :ah ...aa ...(she started crying so badly)

Riya :kyu ...kyu mere sath hi aisa hota hai ??? meine tumhe maaf karne ki bohot koshish ki .sab kuch vulakar age badne ki koshish ki .par nehi hua mujhse .un ek saal me tumari diyi hue dard ko mein vula nehi paa rahi hu .kaise mein sab kuch vulakar tumare sath age badu ???kaise yakin karlu ki aj tum sirf mujhse pyaar karte ho .
Mujhe aj v yaad hai uss din ki bare me .mein to bas tumhe khush dekhna chahti thi .par tum ...

FLASHBACK

It was arjun's birthday .riya was so much happy .she decided 2 give a surprise party 4 arjun .that day arjun went 2 office earlier .

Riya called sam,ayesha,shree,chotu & told them about her plan .they also agreed 2 help her .whole day riya was busy in the party arrangement .they also helping her .

B4 the evening the preperation was complete .they didn't call any guest .just only themselves .bcoz arjun don't like crowded party .riya asked sam 2 call on arjun's phone .

Sam called 2 arjun .arjun was doing his project work .
Sam :arjun ,tu kaha hai ???

Arjun :sam ,.don't ask me stupid question .u know very well ki iss waqt mein office par rehti hu .i m doing my new project work ...ab sys ...

Sam :ha ha samaj gayi .but tujhe avi ghar ana hoga immediately .

Arjun (worriedly):kyu kya hua ????

Sam :wo ...wo ...riya achanak senseless ho gayi hai ...(hamesha riya ko mohra banana jarurat hai kya ...😡)

Arjun (shock):what !!! tumne doc ko bulaya ???

Sam :ne ...nehi ...

Arjun :tum itne irresonsible kaise ho sakte ho sam !!!! Jaldi se doc ko phone lagao .mein avi ghar aa rahi hu ...

Saying this he cut the call .

Sam gave all a high 5 look .actually riya was not there .she was in the kitchen .so she didn't hear their convo .

Ayesha :sam ,tumne jhut kyu bola ??? wo v riya ki naam lekar .jab arjun akar dekhega riya bilkul thik hai tab kya hoga ????

Sam :don't wry ayesha .tab ka tab dekha jayega .mein hu na ...😉

Riya came back 2 the hall .

Riya :hey sameer ,baat hue arjun se ???

Sam :ha .wo office se nikal chuka hai .bas ata hi hoga .

Arjun reached at home in 20 minutes .He came into the hall room & suddenly rose pattels fall on him .he is totally shocked at this sudden incident .he looked at his surroundings & found everyone is standing with happy face & wishing him "happy birthday".the most shocking thing 2 him is riya standing there well heartedly

Now he got it that it was all prank .he bcam so much angry .he murched 2wards riya & b4 any one could say anything he burst on riya .

Arjun :tumari himmat kaise hue aise ghatiya majak karne ki !!!!😡

Riya is hell shocked hearing this .the others could sensed arjun's anger reason .sam tried 2 say something .but arjun didn't give him any chance .

Arjun :no sam !!! don't interpret in it !!! Iss ladki ne aj sari hi hade par kardi .saadi kya karli isse ye to saar pe hi chad gaya .mujhe laga ye bimar hai ,isse meri jarurat pad sakti hai .par ye ...ye yaha stupid sa party arrange kark baithi hai .iss ki wajah se meine apni itni important work chod k ayi hu aur ye yaha maje le rahi hai !!!!😡

Riya (trying 2 say):par arjun meine kuch ...

Arjun :just shut up !!!! don't utter a single word .meri nazroki samne se dur ho jao .mein tumari shakal tak nehi dekhni chahti .

Riya's eyes fill with tears .tears coming 4m her eyes .she couldn't bear all this .she ran 4m there & locked herself in her room & burst into tears .

Here sam wanted 2 make arjun understand but arjun didn't hear any word & walked out 4m there .

FB END

Riya :arjun ,us din meri galti na rehne ki wajud v tumne meri ek baat nehi suni .mujhe apni taraf se safai dene ki mauka tak nehi di .mujh par itni si varosa tak nehi ki .fir aj mein tum par kaise yakin karlu jab ki tumne to aj tak meri varosa sirf tode hai .saadi ki suru k din se har ek din meri varosa tode hai .mera pyaar ka majak udaya hai .kaise karlu tumpe yakin .kaise ???😭

Suddenly she heard ayesha's voice 4m outside .

Ayesha :riya ,darwaja khol .mujhe tujhse baat karni hai .

Riya opened the door .ayesha looked at her face .her face is looking dull & gloomy 4 over crying .

Ayesha :riya ,kyu tu waha se aise chali ayi ???

Riya (turning her face 2 other side):mein iska jawab waha de ayi hu ayesha .

Ayesha :riya ,jawab dene se sawal nehi khatam hoti .manti hu ki arjun ne tere sath bohot galat ki hai .par iska maatlab ye to nehi ki tu v usse badla le .aur riya ...galti sab insan se hoti hai .par usse xcpt karne ki himmat sab me nehi hota .but arjun ne apni galti k liye repented hai .kya wo avi v maafi deserve nehi karta .

Riya :ayesha ,baat maaf karni ki nehi hai .baat hai varosa ki .mana ki usse me maaf v kardi par jo varosa usne toda hai uska kya ???

Ayesha :usse ek mauka to de ...

Riya :i m sry ayesha .meine bohot koshish karli .par ab bishwas karna mushkil hai .

Ayesha :achsa ...aur kashmir me jo waqt ek sath bitayi uska kya ???

Riya :wo bas pal var ki attraction thi .

Ayesha :riya ,aj tak mein arjun ko galat samaj ti thi .but aj pata chala ki tu v kitni badi galat decision le rahi hai .

Riya :ayesha ,mein iss bare me aur koi baat nehi karna chahti .just leave me alone .

Ayesha :ok f9.reh akele .jo tere maan me aye wo kar .bas mein tujhe itna kehkar ja rahi hu ...tu apne sath aur arjun k sath dono sath hi na insafi kar rahi hai .

Ayesha left 4m there .

Ayesha came 2 arjun's house & found arjun is sitting numbly & sam & chotu standing bside him .

When sam noticed ayesha he immediately walked 2 her .

Sam :kya baat hai ayesha ...riya se baat hue ???

Ayesha :hmm

Sam :kya kaha usne ???

Ayesha :wo lautna nehi chahti .

Sam :par kyu ???

Ayesha :kyu ki usse avi v arjun k pyaar par yakin nehi hai ...

Sam :what ??? uska dimag to thik hai na

Ayesha :sam ,i know riya ab jo kar raha hai wo bohot galat kar raha hai .par kahi na kahi wo galat v to nehi hai .akhir usk dil me jo dard chupi hue hai uska kya ???

Sam :but ayesha ...

Suddenly arjun spoke up

Arjun :sam ,riya jo kar rahi hai wo bilkul sahi hai .akhir meine jo usk sath kiya iski saza to mujhe milni chahiye .i really deserve this .i should b punished .

Sam :par arjun ...

Arjun :sam ,mujhe kuch der k liye tum log akele chod do .i want 2 be alone .plz .

Sam nodded his head & signaled everyone 2 leave .they left 4m there leaving arjun alone .

Arjun is totally heart broken now .her words r enhoching his heart in every second .

background music


Main dhoondne ko zamaane mein,
Jab wafa nikla
Main dhoondne ko zamaane mein,
Jab wafa nikla
Pata chala ki galat leke,
Main pata nikla
Pata chala ki galat leke,
Main pata nikla
Main dhoondne ko zamaane mein,
Jab wafa nikla
Main dhoondne ko zamaane mein,
Jab wafa nikla
Aa..ha..., Aa..a..ha...
Aa...a...


Arjun :riya ,mein tumari diyi hue har saza ko sehne k liye tayar hu .agar isme tumari khushi hai to mein chup chap khushi khushi ye sehen kar lungi .par riya mein apne pyaar ko harne v nehi de sakti .mein apne pyaar ko sabit kark rahungi kissi v halat par .kyu ki mein janti hu ki aisab kark mujhse jyada takleef tum khudko de rahi ho .aur mein tumhe aur takleef jhelne nehi dungi .

scene shift 2 riya

She sitting bside the window looking at the full moon .every time when she see the moon she feel happy .but 2day the beauty's of the moon couldn't affect her .

bg music


Gumsum Hai Dil Tanha Hai Dil
Gumsum Hai Dil Tanha Hai Dil
Jaanu Na Mai Dhunde Kya Dil
Gumsum Hai Dil Tanha Hai Dil
Gumsum Hai Dil Tanha Hai Dil
Shahema Shahema
Kyu Hairaa Hai Samaa
Ruke Ruke
Kyu Dil Ke Hai Armaa
Jal Bhi Mai Rahi
Par Dhua Nahi
Waqt Bhi Hai Thahra

Gumsum Hai Dil Tanha Hai Dil
Jaanu Na Mai Dhunde Kya Dil


A long tear drop fell 4m her eyes .


PRECAP :now what will arjun do manufying his mistake & prove his luv 2 riya ??? ...2 know just stay connected with the story.


Kardi update .ab thoda likes aur comments kar v do ...😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My first demand... I want updates every day...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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emotional part
Arjun's outburst was really painful
while Riya is no better
she's struggling with her thoughts to trust Arjun's love or not
the fb was heart breaking
Riya so lovingly did his b'day preparations
but due to Sameer's prank
n Arjun's anger all ruined up
n Riya was left behind in tears😭
Riya n Aisha convo was nice
n somewhere down the lane Riya is right at her place
one yr's pain n sufferings can't be healed in one day
Arjun's pov was nice as well
his determination n love for Riya was well written
thanks for update
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Super Duper Awesome update dr...!!!!!

Awww Riya's decision broke his heart...!!!! Loved how Sam tried to consoled him but couldn't decrease his pain...!!!!!
FB was amazing...!!!!! Riya arranged a surprise party for Arjun b ut Arjun misunderstood her coz of Sam n behaved very rudely to her which hurted her so much...!!!!!
Riya's POV was quite painfull...!!!!!
Wow Aisha tried her best to made her understand that she is doing wrong with herself n with Arjun n she must gv a chance to this relationship but she didn't budge...!!!!!
Poor Riya is in a strange fix that how could she trust that person again who broke her heart at every step...!!!!!
Arjun's POV was fantastic... he looked so determined to win his love back...!!!!!
let's see wht happens nxt...!!!!!
Continue as soon as possible...!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update waiting how
he will get her trust and love
back update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aks13

My first demand... I want updates every day...😉


Ha ha very funny ... 😛

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