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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: valli30

paha nahi di jaise comment kar start karthi hu naam apne app aa rahe hai๐Ÿ˜†


aaj to naye naamo ki bouchar ho rahi hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome... Interesting... Liked the update...
Thanks for updating...
Waiting for the next update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Induuu

badi naughty naughty update hai๐Ÿ˜‰

Hmm Meera does not remember anything related to her past
did she misunderstand sister's words in hospital and now she thinks that Maan is her husband?
and Now all want Meera to recover fast..I think if meera's memory returns she will know that Geet is maan's wife
do geet and Meera share any relation?
I mean Meera remebered her maasi and Geet cooked halwa which tasted same like her maasi cooks
waiting to know how geet and Maan got married and Meera met with the accident..I think both happened almost at the same time๐Ÿ˜ƒ
aur ye Kya Maan abhi tumhara aur Geet ka rishta secret hai to thoda sa sabar karo yaar๐Ÿ˜†
aisa mera sochna hai writer to tum ho to tumhen hi pata hoga ki sach kya hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


di no sabar please๐Ÿ˜‰ intahaa ho gyi intzaar ki...๐Ÿ˜‰

finally u updated ...yeppieee
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Story
Read All the parts
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Lakshu ki post se churaayi hai..
update jaldi se de do
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Posted: 10 years ago
๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
tu to raat me update dene wali thi
kya hua?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: valli30

nice update

so meera lost her memory
yaar meera tu ghajni bangayi aur maan majnu ๐Ÿ˜‰
poor boy can't spend time with his wife
maan don't want to leave geet aur geet hai ki usko bhaga rahi hai taki koi dekh na le unhe
sab maaneet ke dushman ab anu agayi poor maan
chalo tom ji jaldi karo next update keliye waiting
aur itna chota update next wali badi chahiye๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Thanks Jerry...

Aaj kal tu naming Queen ban gayi hain๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

next update bada dene ki koshish karungi...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
(Thank you Priya for the beautiful Banner...)



Part - 6

Anu got ready early as she wanted to help Geet...she was heading to Geet's Room...dadi also joined her...Both went and knocked Geet's Room...


Dadi was tensed whether Maan and Geet woke up or not...if not They will be in trouble as Anu is with her...


Their lips were millimetres apart...they heard a knock on the Door...Geet startled and pushed Maan...Maan koi aaya hain aap jayiye...she said in whispers...

Maan nodded a no said not before having my Kiss...


Geet - jayiye na Maan...Dadi hoongi...


Maan bent forward and gave a peck on her lips and left from there...


Geet blushed ...She moved to open the door when she heard knock again...


Dadi with Anu entered the Room...Dadi felt relief by not finding Maan there...


Dadi - Geet beta aap toh tayyar hogayi...koi problem nahi hui na raat mein...


Geet - Nahi Dadi koi problem nahi hui...abhi toh dard kaafi kam hain...


Anu - Aur main bekaar mein tension li...tum toh mere aane pehle ready hogayi...mujhe laga tumhe help ki zaroorat padegi...


Dadi - Acha chado...Anu aap Geet ko neeche lekar jaayiye...main Maan se milkar aati hoon...


Anu - Theek hain Dadi...


Dadi left from there to Maan's Room...


Anu - toh chale geet...


Geet- Ek min Anu...Geet took her mobile,Bag and both went downstairs...


Dadi knocked Maan's Room...and Entered after maan opened it...


Maan - Good Morning Dadi...


Dadi - Good Morning ...Mujhe Aapse kuch baat karni hain Maan


Maan - Kahiye Dadi...Kya baat hain...


Dadi - App jo karr rahe hain theek nahi karr rahe hain...App meera se aise behave nahi kar sakte...Kal unhone aap ka kitna inyezaar kiya...


Maan - Maine kuch nahi galat kiya hain Dadi...App jaanti hain yeh baat...


Dadi in a little harsh tone...Maan aapne meera ki zimmedaari uthayi hain...toh usse poori kihiye...Aise bhagiye Mat...


Maan - Main nahi bhaag raha hoon...Main jo karr sakta hoon maine woh kiya...Usse treatment dilaraha hoon...usse rehne keliye jagah diya hain...aur kya karoon Dadi...


Dadi - Woh aapko apna pati samajhti hain Maan...


Maan - Yeh meri problem nahi Dadi...Maine toh pehle hi kaha tha ki usse batadijiye ki main uska pati nahi hoon...lekin aapne meri baat nahi suni...ab kya chahiye...Mujhse nahi hoga Dadi.Main aur kuch nahi karne wala hoon...


Dadi - Maan kal meera ne apni maasi aur Mumbai ki baatein yaad ayi hain...kuch din rukjaayiye plz...hume poora yakken hain ki meera jald hi theek hojayengi aur hume pata chaljaayega ki uske accident ke peeche kiska haath hain...


Maan - Meera ki baat chodiye Dadi...Geet ka kya...uski khushi ka kya...woh iss ghar ki badi bahu hain aur yeh baat koi nahi jaanta...mere bhai aur behen bhi nahi...aur iske liye sirf aap zimmerdaar hain...aap pehle hi meera ko sach bata deti toh aaj mujhe Geet ka yun chupke se khayal nahi rakhna padta...

Dadi - Maan aap bhool rahe hain ki doctor ne kya kaha...Meera ko shocking baate nahi batani chahiye...isse uske dimag par asar hosakta hain...aur unki yaadein poori tarah se mit jaayengi...Kya aapkoyeh manzoor hain...

Maan was about answer his mobile Rang...Malika's name flashed ...

Maan - Dadi Main aapse baad mein baat karta hoon...aap neeche chaliye...aur Geet se kahiye ki woh tayyar rahe doctor ke paas jaane ke liye...Maine malika se appointment fix karliya hain...ussi ka phone hain...Main baat karke aata hoon...


Dadi sighed and went down...Maan answered the call...


Maan - Hello MMS...


Malika- - Maan...Ab mein MMS nahi hoon kitni baar kahun...


Maan - Ha mujhe pata hain ab teri shaadi hogayi hain aur tu MMS nahi rahi, phir bhi main tujhe MMS hi bulaoonga...


Malika - Tum sudhorge nahi na...acha batao bhabhi ko kab leke aarahe ho...


Maan - Kyun kahi aur jana hain kya...


Malika - Nahi..bas apna bhi time free rakhungi...Sanjay ke saaath saath...Mujhe bhabhi se milna hain aur unhe dekhna hain...jisne Hamare Mr. Akdoo ka dil jo churaliya...woh bhi pehli nazar mein...

Mean while Ali came to Maans room...Maan baba...Dadi aap ko neeche bula rahi hain...


Maan nodded and showed his bag...Ali nodded and took it and went away...


Maan was talking and came down...


Maan - Main aajaoonga...10 baje tak...tum tayyaar rehna...Ok ab rakhun...


Malika - Ok...


Anu - Bhai mujhe baat karni hain MMS se...


Maan - Anu baat karna chahti hain ruko...


He handled his mobile and went to his seat...Meera was sitting on his right side...and Geet on left side as Dadi asked Geet to sit on the left side...and breakfast was served...


Angel sat there quiet...Geet was wondering what happened...


Geet - Angel kya hua...aap itni chup kyun ho...


Angel looked at Geet and again looked down...


Naina - Isse aise hi rehne do Geet...Bohut naughty hogayi hain...


Geet guessed Naina might have scolded her...She thought to cheer up angel...


Geet - Arre App gussa mat karo na Angel par...woh toh meri aadat hain gir jaane ki...Tumhe pata hain angel...Main bhi tumhari hi tarah thi bachpan mein...mujhe bhi bhagna acha lagta hain...aur mujhe bohut saari chotein bhi aayi...


Angel looked at geet listening to her...Geet continued...Main bohut bhagti thi...Gahr mein toh skates laga kar hi ghoomti thi aur Mama se daant bhi padti thi...


Angel - Kyun...App ki Mama kyun daanti...


Geet - Skates pehen ke ghoomti thin a kabhi kabhi balance nahi hota toh kisi na kisi se bhi takraati thi.ya phir plates tod deti thi...Pata ek baar kya hua...Mama Kitchen se garam garam coffee lekar aarahi thi aur mein school se bhaagti hu aayi aur Mama ko hug kiya...Mama ke haath mein jo coffee thi woh sab neeche girgayi...Mama ne bohut daanta...


Angel - Jaise Meri Mama de kiya...with that she looked at naina and looked down...tears were forming in her eyes...


Geet - Nahi...Agar coffee mere upar ya mama ke upar girti toh burn hojata na..isiliye...phir hum aur zyaada rote na...kitni takleef hoti...socho...


Angel thought for a while and said...Haa burn hojati ...


Geet - Agar kal sach mein tumhen chot lagti toh tum apna birthday kaise manaoge...Party toh cancel kardenge na...


Angel got alert with the mention of Party...She immedialty turned to Naina and said...Mama...Angel Good girl ki tarah rahegi mama...aap party Cancel mat karo...plzzz


Naina smiled...as she was also feeling bad for scolding Angel...Acha toh aap abhi apna Breakfast poora kahtam karo...


Anu came back after talking...She listned a part of Geet and Angels convo and asked...Toh Geet tum latest kal giri...kal se pehle...kab giri...bolo bolo...


Geet - Anu tum bhi na chodo...Main angel ka mood theek karr rahi thi...


Anu - arre maine bhi waise hi poocha ab bata bhi do...warna mere pet mein dard hoga...she giggles...


Geet - Acha theek hain...She thought for a while and said...Anu may be 1-1 1/2 back hoga...shayad...Main mama ki help karr rahi thi cleaning mein...ghar ki safai chal rahi thi...main lambi si stool pe chadke...upar kuch saaf karr rahi thi...aur mama ne mujhe bulaya toh main achanak se mudi aur balance nahi karpaayi ur...Suddenly geet stopped remembering her fall and looked at Maan ...Maan was also listening...while eating his BF...a pleasent smiled appeared remembering his first official meet with Geet...who directly fell into his arms...suddenly...when he was entering Handa House...with Dadima...


Anu - Phir kya hua...Bolo na...tum neeche giri...chot aayi...


Geet - In a trance...Nahi main nahi giri...kisine mujhe girne se bachaya...


Anu - Wow...kaun hain woh...batao...


Geet- ...


Anu - Shooked her...Geet kya hua...Bolo woh kaun hain jo tumhe girne se bachaya...


Geet - ...Woh...Woh...How can she tell that its Maan ...Woh...Haan...Papa se koi milne aaya aur unhone mujhe bachaya...bas...


Anu was about ask more...dadi interrupted


Dadi - Acha Maan Malika ne kya kaha...


Maan - MMS ne bulaya hai Dadi...sanjay ko koi kaam hain...


Dadi - Toh hum bhi chalte hain aapke saath...Geet ko bhi toh hospital leke jaana hain...


Maan - Theek hain Dadi...10 min me challenge...


Meera thought...Ek hi baar mein Maan gaye...Mere liye hospital chalna hai toh Dadi kitni baar kehti hain...yaad dilana padta hain...Kyun aise hain Maan...kya mujhse koi Galati hui hain kya...


Meera - Dadi Main bhi chaloon...Ghar pe bore horahi hoon...


Maan was irritated...but didn't show any reaction...Geet was also calm...she showed no reaction...


Dadi - Arre Meera aapka appointment toh kal ki hain...hum kal jaayehnge...aaj aap aaram kijiye...zyaada stress nahi lena hain aapko...bas doctor kehde aap physically fit hain toh hum aapko nahi rokenge kahi bhi jaane se...


Meera was disappointed as she thought she can spend time with Maan when Dadi and Geet will be meeting the doctor she could be with Maan...


Meera - Maan plz...aap kahiye na Dadi se...


Maan - Meera Dadi theek kehrahi hain...tum unki baat maanlo...


Meera's face fell...she slowly mover to her room...


Maan, Geet and Dai left to hospital...


Veer and Anu also left to the Office...

As soon as they reached hospital...Dadi asked Maan and Geet to go get the check up done...she has some other work...she will leave for now...and asked him to call after the check up...


Maan - Dadi aap kaha jaa rahi hain...


Dadi - Maan aap Geet ke rahiye, hum yehi paas mein jaa rahe hain...hamari ek dost ke yaha...unka operation hua hain aur hum unhe dekhne jaa rahe hain...


Maan - Theek hain Dadi...aap gadi leke jaayiye...Main Ali se kehke doosri gaadi Mangwaloonga...


Dadi - Maan aap hame phone zaroor kariyega...hum intezaar karenge...Ghar bhi toh jaana hain Geet ke saath...


Maan - Haa Dadi...Main kardoonga...


Dadi - Theek hain hum chalte hain...Malika ko hamara pyaar dijiye ga...


Dadi went away from there...


Maan smiled and turned to geet and laced his finger with her and said Chale...


Geet nodded...


They both directly went to Dr. Sanjay Mishra's Cabin...


Maan knocked and entered...


Sanjay welcomed them warmly...He immediately called Malika...In no time MMS came...Maan stood up and hugged her warmly...


He turned to Geet and Said...Geet Yeh Malika hain...Meri aur Rohan ki dost...hum teeno ek hi class mein the till our 12th...Aur yeh Malika ke husband Sanjay hain...


Geet wished them...


Malika - Toh aap hain meri Bhabhi...and she lovingly embraced her...Geet reciprocated...


Geet looked at maan...questioning...Maan mouthed use pata hain...Geet smiled...


MMS - Sach main Maan Geet bohut khubsurat hain...Geet blushed at the compliment...Maan Winked at Geet...


Malika - Maan hum yehi hain...aur tum ankh maar rahe humare saamne...Kuch toh sharam karo...


Sanjay laughed at his Wife nautanki...


Sanjay - Malika is right Maan...I must say ur selection is awesome...


Malika - Tabhi toh MSk pe ko nazar mein pyaar hogaya...


Geet looked at Maan...He just turned away from her bring caught...


Maan - Yeh rohan bhi na kuch nahi chupta iske pet mein...


Malika - Mr. Khurana...Agar tumne Rohan se kuch bhi kaha toh dekh lena...


Maan - Kya karegi MMS...Main nahi darta tumhari dhamkiyon se...Aur rohan ko toh mein baad mein dekh lunga...


Sanjay ...Tum dono ek minute bhi chup nahi rehsakte...aur Maan tum bhi...agar kisi ko pata chalega ki MSK aisa ladta hai toh...

Sanjay - Inko chodo Geet yeh aise hi hain...main tumhara checkup karta hoon chalo...


Maan nodded and Sanjay took her to the examining room...


Maan and Malika discussed Meera's health...Maan told her about the incident in which she mentioned about her Maasi and Mumbai...


Sanjay and Geet came back...Geet is fine Maan...Kuch nahi hua...Everything is normal...kuch khaas medicines ke bhi zaroorat nahi hain...She is totally fit and Fine...


Maan - Are u sure...Kal raat bohut dard tha..aur Pair bhi swell hogayi thi...


Sanjay - Haa maan...Main ne dekha hain...Her back is perfectly fine...Pair mein bhi moch aayi thi...woh bhi theek hajayegi...1, 2 din mein...Agar tum chaho toh main X-ray lesakta hoon...par meri maano toh zaroorat nahi hain...


Maan - Nahi Sanjay...Mujhe bharosa hain tumpe...Bas isse kehna ki zyaada stress nahi le...meri baat toh manegei nahi...


Geet looked at him and turned her head anooyed...


Sanjay - Geet...Maan theek kehraha hain.tum do din ke liye thoda aaram karo...Ghar mein ghoom sakti ho...but no running...


Geet - Ji Main khayal rakhungi...


Malika - Checkup hogaya...toh chalo canteen chalet hain..mujhe bhook lagi hain...


Maan looked at Sanjay and sanjay made a bechara face...


MMS - Sanjay ko kya dekh rahe ho...Pregnent main hoon woh nahi...chalo...


Geet and Maan stood up...sanjay also went with them to the canteen...a separate one for the doctors working there...


Malika ordered her Food...others too...


MMS - Aise mat dekho jab Geet pregnant hogi tab dekhlungi tumhe...


Geet blushed ...


Maan - Maine kya kaha...Main toh chup hoon na...chodo...batao mera champ kaisa hain...


MMS - Haa theek hain...aur tumse naraz hain ki tumne use apni shaadi mein nahi bulaya...


Maan - Malika tum jaanti ho hamari shaadi kaise hui...meri taraf se toh sirf Dadi thi...aur koi nai...







Plz give me ur views...


Ignore Hindi Grammatical mistakes and type errors...





Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
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๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
dobara se comment likh rahi hoon
ek baar likh kar post kiya to pata chala ki net dis connect ho gaya๐Ÿ˜ญ
khair koi baat nahin
comment to dena hi hai
pata nahin ab kaisa aayega

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MSK you are very smart
knock sun kar bhi kiss liye bina jaane ko ready nahin hai๐Ÿ˜†
arrey le bhi liya kiss
good great effort MSk

Dadi wants to knock some sense In Maan's mind about Meera
she wants him to do his all duties but he simply told her that he did whatever he could do for her

Loved the bond between Geet and angel

Now Maaneet go to hospital and Meera again is sad that he never wanted to go hospital with her but he at once got ready to go with geet

arrey yahaan bhi MMS
but married hai pahle se hi
pragnenet bhi hai
and she knows that maan loves geet and she is his wife
mujhe Rohan se milna hai jaldi se lekar aao usko
achchha ek baat bataao ki Meera mi memory kab wapis aa rahi hai
wo kya hai na bechhre Maan ko baar baar balcony se kood kar aana padega na geet ke saath night spend karne ke lia
mujhe darr hai ki kisi din chot na lag jaaye bechaare kle
lovely update Indu
next update jaldi se do
Edited by rashmivaish - 10 years ago
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