FF ~His First Love~ Thread 1 *Closed*

Nice... 👏
I liked it except d Benz being jalal's gf 😛
Update soon... 😊

Originally posted by: Jodha_Akbar_Luv

Nice... 👏
I liked it except d Benz being jalal's gf 😛
Update soon... 😊

Thanks a lot. Will surely update!😊

Awesome start

Hey Hey Hey Samy!🤗 Look who's here.. Your Namy!😛
Sweetheart.. First of all, a Very Very Very Big Sorry for not commenting on your wonderful story till now!😭😭

And secondly, A BIG TIGHT HUG for you for this AMAZINGLY AWESOME Story!🤗🤗

Read all the parts and I have caught up on this FF!😉 🤗

Its such a..such a wonderful story!👏 I really liked the concept and it has already got me intrigued!😳

I liked how you gave us glimpses of Jalal's childhood.. He is insecure as he had to suffer losses..! Thats sad! Hence, the bitterness and ego, MAY BE!😛
So, he's a rich spoilt brat.. Khool !😛 I like how he respects his mother, who is his life.. and I also like that he does charity to help people..😳 ⭐️

I like Jodha's side as well.. She's an innocent gal..but not the least stupid! She's smart, professional and enthusiast! 😳 😳

I like the characterisations you have done.. Salima the Secretary,😛 Ben the gf..Oh Gawd! The less I say about her, the better!🥱 😆
Ruqaiya is receptionist... loool..!😆😆😆 (Sorry, but as soon as I read that bit that Ruqs was the receptionist, I was laughing out loud..not that I am laughing
on the post, its just that it giggles me out to imagine Ruqs there.. Purrrfecttly Deserved!)😆😆

I liked Jodha's small and happy family..Maina, Bharmal and Sujamal are all so loving and supportive!😃 😳 Sukanya her colleague cum friend is such a darling!😃😳

Now coming to details, Jalal is sorta troubling her so much to satisfy his bruised ego.. yet he day dreams of her.. He looks really lustful currently..!😡😛😛
Calling her hottie every now and then, and day dreaming hot scenes with her.. (But I like the scenes.. Uff.. 😳☺️☺️ )
(Okay.. When he day dreams of her THAT way..☺️☺️ I was listening to this song..and OMG..it suited them so much..
Blue eyes..hypnotise teri..kardi hain mainu☺️
I swear choti dress mei..BOMB lagdi mainu..☺️
glossy lips...wolfy tricks..
..
Oh yeah..oh yeah..
Qatl kare tera BOMB figure..😆☺️😆☺️😆)

Jodha, on other hand, knows his evil things, yet she's optimistic..!😳 bviously, she's too smart to let him get his way.. But She wants to see her family happy, thence,
She's working without a word! 😭 😃
Lets seehow the story unfolds.. Great going!👏👏👏

Now coming to your flawless and exquisite writing my dear Samy, I just have one word to say "WOW".😳 👏 😳
ur writing is so fluent, enjoyable and its so modern.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️ yu write really really well..👏
The way you describe the things, the details with your polished writing, compells me to clap for ya..👏👏👏 🤗

Great going dear!🤗 Keep it up.. All the very very best for your exams.. I know you gonna rock them.. 👏

Come back soon with marvellous updates!🤗 😳
Love ya 🤗

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Awesome start

Plz continue soon

Plz pm when u update

Hey will surely. but since I am a newbie IF does not allow me to send links in PMs😭. But I will send across a message definitely!

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Res!😳

Hey thanks! But what does Res mean? Taking time to learn the IF language.😃

Superb dear 👏👏 Love this concept 😛😛 Curious beginning , interesting precap , LOVE IT ❤️❤️ Update soon dear 🤗

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

Superb dear 👏👏 Love this concept 😛😛 Curious beginning , interesting precap , LOVE IT ❤️❤️ Update soon dear 🤗

Thanks! Will surely update!😃

nice start 😃...update soon...