My Fiancee's little sister-A sinful story-[2]-Completed.

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Thanx to all my dear readers regular and silent for loving the previous update. All your likes & comments are valuable to me and are like my energy booster to cont. writing. Keep on showering your appreciation like this only. It means so much. I read all your comments thoroughly but due to my time restrain i could not personally reply to all of them hope you all understand my dearies. So plzzz keep on showering your special likes & comments like always. Enjoy this upd.

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Ch-18

'My tears blurred my vision as i tried to keep my eyes open but couldn't as the fragrance from the envelop entered my nostrils, a feeling of dizziness covered my eyelids making me loose my consciousness but before that the words that registered in my heart on the black letter were 'WE WILL SHARE THE PAIN TOGETHER MAAN- Ayaan'. Pain what pain ? before i could comprehend any thing i lost it, the only thing on my lips was Geet's name followed by the black out.

'Maan get up ? maan please open your eyes. What happened to you? Maan i am scared please open your eyes get up maan.'

'Just few minutes ago, i was having my delicious kheer only to hear a loud thud from the stairs , the sight i witnessed was horrifying as i saw my maan falling down the stairs. Throwing the desert away i rushed towards him only to find his unconscious body rolling down , i tried to save him but i couldn't and i fell down on the floor to save his forehead from getting hurt and i did as his head leaned down on my lap. With nakul's help we get him on the couch and now presently here i am trying my hard to wake him up.'

'Geet mam, i have called the doctor and aditya sir too. They both are heading here.'

'Hmmm, i couldn't understand anything at all, my mind was not working. What had happened? Few moments ago both of us were happy and now here my maan is unconsciously sleeping on my lap. Aditya's voice broke my thoughts as he rushed with the doctor towards us.'

'Adi sir see na? my maan is not waking up at all. He just fell down from the stairs. I tried to explain him with a choked voice but my tears clogged my throat.'

'Geet mam please don't cry and let the doctor do the checking please get up?'

'Nooo, i won't leave him alone you check him in front of me, i protested as they tried to move him away from me.'

'Baby doll.'

'The voice of ayaan echoed through the halls of KM , making all of us turn our heads towards him.'

'Nakul was holding his bag beside him as he walked with long strides.'

'Ayaan...'

'Shhh baby doll, come here let the doctor do the check up and if you want maan back he has to look at him, but see you are blocking it. Let the doc. do his job come here? He pulled me away from my maan as i kept maan's head softly on the couch. The feeling was so heart - wrenching, i felt suffocated as if my life, my breaths were being snatched away from me. A deep pain erupted in my heart and i didn't like the comfort hug from ayaan too, i just wanted to lean beside my maan in his arms close to him. It was killing me seeing him like this.'

'After few minutes the doctor instilled an injection and told us to wait for few hours. It was nothing serious according to him and that brought an instant relief but my heart was still not at peace , until i could see, hear and feel the touch of my maan.'

'Ayaan took him to our room and left me alone with him as he got an urgent call.'

'Caressing his face i pecked his forehead and pleaded to my babaji for his safety. This incident shook me to the core, i was feeling so vulnerable at the moment but i couldn't broke into pieces , i had to be strong for my maan. Imagining my life, a single moment without my maan had made my heart stop for a moment. The feeling was dreadful and so scary. Then and there i decided, i will do anything, just anything and everything to keep him hail and healthy. I will never deny him anything. And i will love him till my last breath. Yes, i loved my maan so much, as the realisation sunk in, it made me feel at the top of the world. And at the second moment a feeling of pain crossed my heart, seeing his unconscious state. 'I LOVE HIM SO MUCH, IT HURTS'.

'Maan please get up fast and take me in your arms please.' i mumbled these words looking at him.

'At the same time downstairs the doctor disposed off the black envelop, vanishing its existence completely.'

'Gud job doc.' ayaan's voice made him turn around along with nakul who was helping him in the task.'

'And you too nakul.'

'Both greeted him with smile on their faces.'

'But sir aditya?' nakul voiced his fear.

'I have taken care about him, so don't worry. After all in my absence someone has to look after the London business and who better than Adi.'

'So doc. now tell me the progress?' ayaan questioned him.

'Progress is on the way sir, just few more hours to go.'

'Hmmm, i was wondering a paralysed maan would look good or if he forgets his jaan, his geet that would look good?'

'Well that depends sir, what do you want?'

'I want pain, filled with reaction.'

'Then sir, it should go the other way round.' the doc. replied back.

'Hmmm, he leaned back on the chair and closed his eyes for a second.'

'So, ruthless MSK is it then. Time to revisit and rekindle our previous painful years. Time to be a heartless monster once again. Time to forget geet. What could be more painful than forgetting your love forever. And the sight witnessed by the lover is much more painful than death itself. So, there is no need to go for bloodshed.'

'An evil smirk covered his lips, making his eyes twinkle.'

'Now , two of you get going, doc i need you for one more week and nakul be a faithful servant just like before, but this time there is a slight change in your loyalty. And remember one thing betrayal will cause you both a painful death.'

'Yesss...sirrr.'

'Welcome back MSK, can't wait to hug you. The field of medicine has surely given me a lot of boon in my task.'

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#253

oh my god yeh kya hogaya 😲😲😲😲itna bada shock diya ab maan ka kya hoga nakul bhi dhokebaaz nikla

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Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#254

OMG this 360 degree turn in events..and Geet will be left alone again..as this will take off his memory...Thats insane..Waiting for enxt n Thanks for the PM!!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

N I thought he loved geet!!

Maan bana MSK!!

Bhai bana villain

Nakul beimaan

Doc dhokebaaz

Geet?????😲😕

Waiting for the next !

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Heela diya update ne yaar.It took me time to formulate words to comment.I didnt see dis coming fm Aayan.I thot he wud harm Geet but here he drugged Maan and is planning either to paralyize him or make him lose his memory.
Its true its your closest comorade who can strike fatal to us.Thats what happened with Maan.

M scared.

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Its all plan by ayaan hope maan geet ko na bhule waiting 4 more parts

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

great... maan haww shocking... n nakul also into dis...
ayaan so so so bad ...really feel like strangling him...continue soon...

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.OneDirection.

@.OneDirection.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#259

OMG OMG😲😲😲 ..
It was obvious ayaan loves geet..
But would go to that extent .! And iss nakul ki tho , dhokebaaz 😡 ,aur tho aur doc bhi !
Pata ni maan ka kya hoga ..
Update snnn..