virman ff: journey of life season2 pt 14(ii) pg 142 (04/08) *New* - Page 67

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Awesome
too good
like it

Originally posted by: nia333

Hello Shivali

First of all..iam really very sorry dear for not commenting on part 7,8 n 9 😳..i was really very busy dear 😔...i read all parts n loved all...😛

In part7- that sketchwala part was really very nice n very well written...par i toh cried with Meethi 😭 ..n after that Manaofying part toh loved it 😉😆..a big smile was on my face 😃...it was Amazing...

Part8...kd,arjun n veera ganged up to make Virman one 😛..n also loved Arjun-Veeras nokjhok 😆 ...n that Manvi ka ghar chodkar jaanewala scene thaa it was totally emotional 😭😭😭...thank God Manvi ruk gayi 😊 ...n that Virman terracewala scene toh super Awesome thaa 😳 ..n that name kadwa karela 😆 ...funny but true hai... 😉

Part9...Superb update..loved it..specially that moulwala n ice creamwala part 😛 ..happy..happy thaa but last mein that arguement bw Virman turned into a fyt ..n Virat ne bechari Mannu ka insult kiya n Mannu hurt hokar chali gayi 😒 ..sad..😔

Part10-..Amazing update dear...Virat is guilty about his behaviour n wants to apologise Manvi.. par he dnt kno only ki Manvi left their house 😔 ..that dinning tablewala n living areawala scene was very nice dear 😊 ...specially Meethi n Viratwala scene..it was so cute 😛..n lastly liked viren n Meethiwala part 😃... N Mannu aagayi par kisske saath 😲 ...

excited..n Aap kithne big updates deti hain yaar..Really hats off to u 👍🏼👏 ...thank u so much for d pm...

Love U

Take Care 😊

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Fantastic update Shivi!! :D Virat is regretting so much.. But he can't take back his words.. He can only apologize to her and hopefully Manvi will forgive him.. Meethi is a sweetheart.. Her innocent words showed him a way to rectify his mistake.. Loved it.. Finally they found her.. But what is she doing there?? & why is she so scared?? Eager to read the next.. Please continue soon.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care :))

Originally posted by: madhuharini

It's a fabulous update dear😊
I am just hooked up with ur stories...
I luv this sooo much dear...
Virat's feelings of hurt and guilt is written fantastic...
I luv meethi's childish languages u wrote...
finally they saw Manvi... what's her fear now???
waiting for next... plzz update soon...😊

awesome update
loved it
superb
virat married her... How will she react
hate her parents..
meethi is cute
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Fantastic...woohooo...it happened just bcs of my Mitthi...she is sweetheart...ahh virman got married...lovely...i think manvi will angry on Virat...but i m sure she will accept it later...at least fr mitthi n kadambari...cont soon soon soon

Finally they got married!!!😃 But the thing is manvi was not in her senses when they got married i mean of course she was in deep shock which was obvious...now dunno how manvi will react!!!!