AkDha OS: The Seperation(prologue posted)

Prologue..

HB(in anger): Yeh aapne thik nahi kiya,Jalal.. Bina jaach partal kiye aapne Begum Jodha ke upar itna bara ilzaam laga diya aur upar se unhe mehel se bedakhal kardia..

Jalal remains silent.

Hamida Bano(ordering the guard): Fouran Humara Agra ke dharmshalamein jaane ki taiyaari ki jaaye... Hukm ki tameel ho...

After silence, Jalal says,

''Par,Ammi jaan...''

Hamida Bano(shouts at the top of her voice): Bas... Ek aur lafz bhi nahi,Jalal... Aur,aap apne napak zaban se humein AmmiJaan mat kahiye... Apni Badi AmmiJaan ko bohut azeez samajhte hai na aap,toh,jaiye aur unse puchiye ki kyun unhone itna bara shariyantra racha aur aapke dimagh mein Jodha ke khilaaf zeher bhara aur aapne unhe Mehel se chale jaane ko kaha?

(worried and tears in her eyes).. Pata nahi,meri Jodha kaisi hogi? Meri bohut yaad arahi hogi? (in a sad tone,taunting Jalal) Kabhi nahi socha thha ki aisa bhi din dekhne ko milega ki Mallika-E-Hindustan ko ek mamuli si dharmshala mein rehna parega...

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Interesting prologue, continue soon!
Would love to read it.