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It was a beautiful evening. A perfect karva chauth evening at naik sadan, mumbai. A house lit up with beautiful lights and diyas. A lady is scolding everyone. This lady is the head of the house, Mrs. Naik aka Daya Mai. She is a kind lady, a good wife, a loving mother and a perfect mother-in-law. She is the wife of Mr. Ankur Naik and the mother of two, RaghuNath Naik And Rasika Naik.
Mrs. Naik:- "chalo chalo jaldi karo. Sab log anay walay hain. Aray bhai ap woh mala theek laga0. Aray bappa main toh kitchen mein kher rakh kar ai thi cholay par. Jal gai hogi".
Saying this she rushed to the kitchen.
Mrs. Naik:- "sab mujhay karna parta hai. Naukar toh sab bekar hain aur.."
Before she could continue she saw her beautiful daughter-in-law decorating the kher bowl with almonds. Mrs. Antara RaghuNath Naik, the daughter-in-law of Daya Mai and the loving wife of RaghuNath Naik.
Mrs. Naik:- "aray antara tu yahan hai beta, woh mandir ka kaam aur tum tayar kab hogi beta!!??"
Antara:- "aray ai ap fuzool mein fikr karti rehti hain.. Main ne mandir ka kam sab check kar lia hai aur tayar bhi main hoon jaun gin fikr mat kejiye."
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu say baat hui? Kab aaraha hai woh?".
A sudden wave of sadness came on antara's face.
Antara:- "haan mai hui thi na.. Woh usay aik mahina aur lagay ga."
She said making a sad face.
Daya mai kept a hand on her shoulder.
Mrs. Naik:- "fikr mat karo.. Aik mahinay ki baat hai.. Tum ne do saal uska wait kia hai. Bs ab woh wapis ajayai ga".
Antara nodded.
Antara:- "acha ab yeh sab chodiye. Aur jayai... Tayar nhn hona apko."
Daya mai smiled.
Mrs. Naik:- "tu meri chor apni baat kar. Ja ja kar tayar hoja."
Antara:- "aik kam kartay hain. Dono sath nikaltay hain yahan se. Phir ja kar tayar hojatay hain."
They let out a loud laugh. Hearing this Mr. Naik stepped in.
Mr. Naik:- "kia hua?? Theek toh tum dono??"
Antara:- "haan ji papa bs aik baat par hansi aa gai."
Mr. Naik:- "achaaa... Chalo ja kar tayar hojao."
They both again let a loud laugh.
After a while, antara finished all her work and went up to the bedroom.
It was her and raghu's bedroom. It was painted in light reddish walls. There was big bed in the middle. A dressing table was in the opposite side. She went inside and switced on the lights. She looked up and saw a big frame. It was their wedding picture. She still remembers the day, their wedding day. Antara was standing next to him. He was holding his hand and her hands were round around his neck. She was laughing and shying away while he was lost looking at her face. Antara went near the frame. She waved her hand on the frame.
Antara:- "i miss u".
A lone tear escpaed her eyes.
** FLASH BACK**
Antara moved from kashmir. It was when her father died. He was an indian army major. He was a brave hearted indian. He loved his family especiall antara. Antara had only a brother in siblings. His father died while performing duties in a war. Antara was just 14 years old. She shiffted to mumbai to her mama mammy's place. Wen antara came to mumbai she wont talk to anyone. She didnt wanted to become friend to anyone.. Raghu always saw this. He made friends to her. They became good friend. They went to different schools but studied together. Raghu and antara went to same college. He always standed for antara. They took the same subjects. They didin't knew when they started liking each other. Raghu couldn't bear to stay away from antara and neither did she. Antara realised that she loved him and so did he but always hesitated. Raghu never wanted to hurt their friendship. But he was not able to control it. She still remebered the valentine day when raghu proposed him. It was perfect. It was a planned event. Antara was sleeping when a sound woke her up. She knew it was coming from the balcony. As it was the gateway for raghu. When she opened the balcony door their was a whole bed of roses in the balcony. Antara got confused. A bouqet of roses were kept in the balcony with a note.
" well if u want to find the answer of this nonsense come to the terrace."
Antara was confused. She saw the handwriting on the note. It wasn't raghu's as she knew very well. She hot scared. She thought of calling him. And she did as she didnt wanted to break the trust.
Raghu was waiting when his phone rang.
Raghu:- "ab kiska phone agaya?"
When he saw antara's name flashing on the screen, he smiled.
Raghu:- "not bad antara.."
He picked up and sounded like she was in deep sleep.
Raghu:- "kia hua antu? Itni raat ko kiun phone kiya??"
Antara:- "raghu woh woh..."
Raghu:- "dekh antara agar tujhay mujhay raat ko kuttay ka gana sunana tha toh record kar leti ab mujhay sonay day".
Saying this he hang up.
Antara:- "hmmm... Tu bhi pagal hai antara.. Ja ja kar dekh kon hai!! Agar raghu bolay ga toh bol daina main ne call ki thi tumne meri puri baat nahin suni".
Saying this she went up. As she went up she saw that whole terrace was decorated in red. There was rose petals everywhere. In a corner there was table. A candle and her favoraite chocolate cake with a lot of icing on it.
She felt delighted but was also shocked. A voice came from behind.
Voice:- "Thank u anay ka! Tumhay acha laga."
Antara really wanted to break this man's teeth. As antara turned her eyes widened in shock. It was raghu standing there with hands in his pockets.
Antara:- "raghu yeh sab?"
Raghu:- "aik number ki yedi ho tum."
Antara:- "matlab?"
Raghu:- "aray yaar... Itnay roses, cake, candles dekh kar bhi samajh nhn aya."
Antara:- "toh yeh sab tumhara mazak tha... Par jab main ne tumhay phone kia tum toh soyai thay".
Raghu took steps towards her.
Raghu:- "tujhay yeh sab mazak lag raha hai? Ya main yeda hoon ho raat kay 11:59 par tujhsay mazak karoon ga".
He bent down and took a flower, a big rose flower from his pocket.
Antara:- "raghu yeh tum??"
Raghu:- "i love u antara.. I know aj tak hum sirf best friends thay magar ab main tumhe apni life partner banana chahta hoon bolo tum bano gi meri life partner."
Antara took the rose. She made a hard face while taking the rose. Raghu stood up. He was looking at her face trying to read her expression.
Antara:- "hmmm toh yeh kehnay kay liye tumne mujhay itne raat ko uthaya".
Raghu:- "q koi problem hai!"
Antara left a deep breath.
Antara:- "sorry raghu agar tum mujhay aik mahina pehlay boltay main kuch sochti.."
Raghu:- "kia matlab aik mahina pehlay?"
Antara:- "aik mahiney pehlay main ne apna life partner choose kar lia.."
Raghu smile got disappeared. He took a deep breath.
Raghu:- "an antara..."
Suddenly antara laughed. Raghu didnt understand..
Antara:- "u should have looked at your face... Bilkul lalloo lag rahay thay..."
Raghu rolled antara and caught her by her waist... Antara was looking straight at him.
Antara:- "r raghu yeh kia kar rahay ho?"
She got nervous. Raghu was looking at her.
Raghu:- "hmmm... Toh tumhay yeh sab mazak lag raha hai?"
Antara:- "nahin main woh..."
Raghu laughed and left her.
Antara was looking at him all amused. After a while they both started to laugh.
But again raghu looked at her.
Raghu:- "toh tera jawab??"
Antara again blushed.
Antara:- "magar raghu baki sab??"
Raghu:- "baki sab ka kia? Unko pata hai.. They know we are here".
Antara eyes got widened.
Antara:- "kia??"
Raghu held her hand.
Raghu:- "i love u antara.."
Antara turned red as tomato. She turned and hugged him tight.
Raghu:- "bol na tera jawab??"
Antara:- "i... I love u too.."
Raghu let a sigh... He was very happy... It was like he got everything he wanted.
** FLASH BACK ENDS**
Antara had tears in her eyes.
Antara:- "raghu jaldi ajao. It's been 2 years. I m waiting."
Precap:-
Antara saw a car from the balcony.. She saw and started to run.. She didnt saw anyone in the way.
Ok Ready For Chappals, Tamatars and Saray huay anday...
Regards,
Haya.
Index:-
Chapter 1:- Page#1
Chapter 2:- Page#9
I wrote this myself..
Please bear with me..
Do Like And Comment..
It was a beautiful evening. A perfect karva chauth evening at naik sadan, mumbai. A house lit up with beautiful lights and diyas. A lady is scolding everyone. This lady is the head of the house, Mrs. Naik aka Daya Mai. She is a kind lady, a good wife, a loving mother and a perfect mother-in-law. She is the wife of Mr. Ankur Naik and the mother of two, RaghuNath Naik And Rasika Naik.
Mrs. Naik:- "chalo chalo jaldi karo. Sab log anay walay hain. Aray bhai ap woh mala theek laga0. Aray bappa main toh kitchen mein kher rakh kar ai thi cholay par. Jal gai hogi".
Saying this she rushed to the kitchen.
Mrs. Naik:- "sab mujhay karna parta hai. Naukar toh sab bekar hain aur.."
Before she could continue she saw her beautiful daughter-in-law decorating the kher bowl with almonds. Mrs. Antara RaghuNath Naik, the daughter-in-law of Daya Mai and the loving wife of RaghuNath Naik.
Mrs. Naik:- "aray antara tu yahan hai beta, woh mandir ka kaam aur tum tayar kab hogi beta!!??"
Antara:- "aray ai ap fuzool mein fikr karti rehti hain.. Main ne mandir ka kam sab check kar lia hai aur tayar bhi main hoon jaun gin fikr mat kejiye."
Mrs. Naik:- "raghu say baat hui? Kab aaraha hai woh?".
A sudden wave of sadness came on antara's face.
Antara:- "haan mai hui thi na.. Woh usay aik mahina aur lagay ga."
She said making a sad face.
Daya mai kept a hand on her shoulder.
Mrs. Naik:- "fikr mat karo.. Aik mahinay ki baat hai.. Tum ne do saal uska wait kia hai. Bs ab woh wapis ajayai ga".
Antara nodded.
Antara:- "acha ab yeh sab chodiye. Aur jayai... Tayar nhn hona apko."
Daya mai smiled.
Mrs. Naik:- "tu meri chor apni baat kar. Ja ja kar tayar hoja."
Antara:- "aik kam kartay hain. Dono sath nikaltay hain yahan se. Phir ja kar tayar hojatay hain."
They let out a loud laugh. Hearing this Mr. Naik stepped in.
Mr. Naik:- "kia hua?? Theek toh tum dono??"
Antara:- "haan ji papa bs aik baat par hansi aa gai."
Mr. Naik:- "achaaa... Chalo ja kar tayar hojao."
They both again let a loud laugh.
After a while, antara finished all her work and went up to the bedroom.
It was her and raghu's bedroom. It was painted in light reddish walls. There was big bed in the middle. A dressing table was in the opposite side. She went inside and switced on the lights. She looked up and saw a big frame. It was their wedding picture. She still remembers the day, their wedding day. Antara was standing next to him. He was holding his hand and her hands were round around his neck. She was laughing and shying away while he was lost looking at her face. Antara went near the frame. She waved her hand on the frame.
Antara:- "i miss u".
A lone tear escpaed her eyes.
Antara moved from kashmir. It was when her father died. He was an indian army major. He was a brave hearted indian. He loved his family especiall antara. Antara had only a brother in siblings. His father died while performing duties in a war. Antara was just 14 years old. She shiffted to mumbai to her mama mammy's place. Wen antara came to mumbai she wont talk to anyone. She didnt wanted to become friend to anyone.. Raghu always saw this. He made friends to her. They became good friend. They went to different schools but studied together. Raghu and antara went to same college. He always standed for antara. They took the same subjects. They didin't knew when they started liking each other. Raghu couldn't bear to stay away from antara and neither did she. Antara realised that she loved him and so did he but always hesitated. Raghu never wanted to hurt their friendship. But he was not able to control it. She still remebered the valentine day when raghu proposed him. It was perfect. It was a planned event. Antara was sleeping when a sound woke her up. She knew it was coming from the balcony. As it was the gateway for raghu. When she opened the balcony door their was a whole bed of roses in the balcony. Antara got confused. A bouqet of roses were kept in the balcony with a note.
" well if u want to find the answer of this nonsense come to the terrace."
Antara was confused. She saw the handwriting on the note. It wasn't raghu's as she knew very well. She hot scared. She thought of calling him. And she did as she didnt wanted to break the trust.
Raghu was waiting when his phone rang.
Raghu:- "ab kiska phone agaya?"
When he saw antara's name flashing on the screen, he smiled.
Raghu:- "not bad antara.."
He picked up and sounded like she was in deep sleep.
Raghu:- "kia hua antu? Itni raat ko kiun phone kiya??"
Antara:- "raghu woh woh..."
Raghu:- "dekh antara agar tujhay mujhay raat ko kuttay ka gana sunana tha toh record kar leti ab mujhay sonay day".
Saying this he hang up.
Antara:- "hmmm... Tu bhi pagal hai antara.. Ja ja kar dekh kon hai!! Agar raghu bolay ga toh bol daina main ne call ki thi tumne meri puri baat nahin suni".
Saying this she went up. As she went up she saw that whole terrace was decorated in red. There was rose petals everywhere. In a corner there was table. A candle and her favoraite chocolate cake with a lot of icing on it.
She felt delighted but was also shocked. A voice came from behind.
Voice:- "Thank u anay ka! Tumhay acha laga."
Antara really wanted to break this man's teeth. As antara turned her eyes widened in shock. It was raghu standing there with hands in his pockets.
Antara:- "raghu yeh sab?"
Raghu:- "aik number ki yedi ho tum."
Antara:- "matlab?"
Raghu:- "aray yaar... Itnay roses, cake, candles dekh kar bhi samajh nhn aya."
Antara:- "toh yeh sab tumhara mazak tha... Par jab main ne tumhay phone kia tum toh soyai thay".
Raghu took steps towards her.
Raghu:- "tujhay yeh sab mazak lag raha hai? Ya main yeda hoon ho raat kay 11:59 par tujhsay mazak karoon ga".
He bent down and took a flower, a big rose flower from his pocket.
Antara:- "raghu yeh tum??"
Raghu:- "i love u antara.. I know aj tak hum sirf best friends thay magar ab main tumhe apni life partner banana chahta hoon bolo tum bano gi meri life partner."
Antara took the rose. She made a hard face while taking the rose. Raghu stood up. He was looking at her face trying to read her expression.
Antara:- "hmmm toh yeh kehnay kay liye tumne mujhay itne raat ko uthaya".
Raghu:- "q koi problem hai!"
Antara left a deep breath.
Antara:- "sorry raghu agar tum mujhay aik mahina pehlay boltay main kuch sochti.."
Raghu:- "kia matlab aik mahina pehlay?"
Antara:- "aik mahiney pehlay main ne apna life partner choose kar lia.."
Raghu smile got disappeared. He took a deep breath.
Raghu:- "an antara..."
Suddenly antara laughed. Raghu didnt understand..
Antara:- "u should have looked at your face... Bilkul lalloo lag rahay thay..."
Raghu rolled antara and caught her by her waist... Antara was looking straight at him.
Antara:- "r raghu yeh kia kar rahay ho?"
She got nervous. Raghu was looking at her.
Raghu:- "hmmm... Toh tumhay yeh sab mazak lag raha hai?"
Antara:- "nahin main woh..."
Raghu laughed and left her.
Antara was looking at him all amused. After a while they both started to laugh.
But again raghu looked at her.
Raghu:- "toh tera jawab??"
Antara again blushed.
Antara:- "magar raghu baki sab??"
Raghu:- "baki sab ka kia? Unko pata hai.. They know we are here".
Antara eyes got widened.
Antara:- "kia??"
Raghu held her hand.
Raghu:- "i love u antara.."
Antara turned red as tomato. She turned and hugged him tight.
Raghu:- "bol na tera jawab??"
Antara:- "i... I love u too.."
Raghu let a sigh... He was very happy... It was like he got everything he wanted.
Antara had tears in her eyes.
Antara:- "raghu jaldi ajao. It's been 2 years. I m waiting."
Precap:-
Antara saw a car from the balcony.. She saw and started to run.. She didnt saw anyone in the way.
Ok Ready For Chappals, Tamatars and Saray huay anday...
Regards,
Haya.
Index:-
Chapter 1:- Page#1
Chapter 2:- Page#9
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