Fanfic #1 Sujeet ki Kahani !! Check out !

Okie guys this is just an experiment.... almost similar to Fan fic ... most of u must have gone thru fan fics or written something of your own too may be in group fan-fic

Well it's just the same ... only difference is everyone can take part....

Also please let me or Shariefah know who is gonna do it next... so there will be no confusion among us (who all are writing !!!!)

But it has to be meaningful, a continuation to the previous one...

Lets make a Serial of our own …..

[Need any help – PM me]

Jiju ki Kahani

Place - Bihar

Sujit works for a small company as s/w engineer. He is very intelligent and smart. Coming from a small city, Sujit is very simple and a bit shy. He is very popular among his group and also with the girls in office. In fact he is in love with one girl in office – Trisha. Trisha is actually his boss. Trisha likes Sujit but she s not sure of her feelings for him.

One day a new girl Vanshika joins as a trainee and is supposed to work under Sujit. Vanshika is a big city girl, daughter of a big city industrialist. She s got everything. You name it she s got it. It's like as if she has a Money Tree in her backyard that keeps on growing everyday.

Why she chose to work this way. She wants to understand how people who do not have money like her live. She wants to know what a normal life is. She is tired of all the money she has. She wants to experience things… things people do everyday, the emotions they go thru above she wants to be independent. Away from her over protected father.

Her first day in office – Sujit is trying to make her understand some code…. Code, are we talking about Da-Vinci code…. Ooops she doesn't know anything. Did she ever study? Gosh what do I do?

Sujit – Are kahan kho gayin aap. Hum bata rahe the ke yeh if ….

Oofoh Sujit, it's my first day. Why don't we get to know each other.

Magar Vansika --- ahan Vansika nahi Vanshika Sh sh…. U can call me Vansh ..

Sujit going red, are eee ka musibat hamre gale daal di Trisa ji ne.

(Okie guys I am not that great story writer. It might suck. But this is my first try….) If we get some response we will move it …. Or we will just trash it….

Some Rules to follow.....

Only one Story Board for now.....

No foul langugae

No character assasination

Follow the storyline

I know there are many creative people in GES forum !!!!!!!!! Waiting to read the next episode .....

Do let us know how u like this idea .....

Okie guys !!! come on …… Episode 2 (anyone ?)

Ok let me try..i should be analyzing the risks for TNT right now...but this is more fun 😆

some more rules 😛...please put the names in front of the lines so it makes it easier to follow the story

Jiju ki Kahani Epsiode II

Vanshika: Sujeet what time is it? abhi lunch ka time nahi huwa kya?

Sujeet: Ji madam, its almost 13h. But i usually eat my lunch on the desk.

Vanshika: That was till vansh arrived. Aaj se tum mere saath lunch karoge. Hum saath saath coffee piyenge to dosti barhega...

sujeet (thinks): ye kya mosibat hai...kitni muskil se diet maintain kar raha tha main and now she wants me to have lunch with her

Vanshika: kya huwa you dont wanna join me? you dont like me? ok no problem i am used to it....she leaves...

Sujeet: ooh madam where are you going...i am coming just give me a second i have to inform trisha ji that i am going out for lunch

Vanshika: who is she ur mother? shes just ur boss na, then why do you have to inform her before you go for lunch??

Sujeet: well its just that she comes and visit the staff during lunch and maybe she will find it odd if i am not at my desk....

Vanshika: oooh just come its not like she will miss you.....there are lot of other people to take care of her na...

Sujeet, hesitates but leaves with vanshika.......

IN Trisha's cabin :

clerk(nandu): mam ur shall i bring ur lunch to ur cabin?

trisha: no Nandu i have to discuss something with sujeet, i think i will go and meet him. His moms gobi ke parathe are amazing and he always brings 2 or 3 extra with him...

Nandu: but mam......i dont think u can eat gobi ke parathe with him today

Trisha: why what happened did sujeet not come to office . why didnt you tell me earlier?? is he not well??

Nandu: No mam, he went outside for lunch with the new city madam Vanshika

Trisha (thinks): first time in 7 years Sujeet didnt informe me before going out of office....who is this vanshika....i think i'll have to meet him

i know little boring....sorry 😳

are yaar guys please reply na

iffi882 dear rocking ... just amazing ......

too good
👏

loved it

thanks.... now i just wish someone would continue the story... and then i will be back to continue it.. i feel like a script/story writer! that sounds like a fun job to do though... i had a great time writing this... it all came so naturally but thanks for the compliment!

Originally posted by: iffi88

thanks.... now i just wish someone would continue the story... and then i will be back to continue it.. i feel like a script/story writer! that sounds like a fun job to do though... i had a great time writing this... it all came so naturally but thanks for the compliment!

iffi tusi great ho yaar u made the story move fast...no dragging

like it

will try to continue 😉

lol thankss! i wish i could write for a drama director! cuz im really creative when it comes to things like that...