TaShi OS: My Knight in shining armour

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is my first attempt ever to write an OS. But I would like to thank Ananya who told me I should write. I know I write too bad but this idea was so struck in my mind so wrote it. Please tolerate my mistakes😆.
ROSHNI OS: MY KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR
(In front of mirror)
Aaj ka din kitna ajeeb tha na Gauri ne mujhse badla lene ke liye kya tarika nikala. Mujhe tabhi samajhna chahiye tha jab maine Zara ko apne room mein dress ke sath dekha tha. Meri fresher's party ki dress ko kharab kar diya aur party mein woh side se tear apart hone lagi. But Gauti ne mujhe aaj itne bade embarrassment se bacha liya. Thank God usne time pe dekh liya when I was on the dance floor and he gave me his jacket. This is the third time jab Gauti ne mujhe un paanch se bachaya hai. Gautam anjane me hi sahi par mera knight in shining armour banta ja raha hai. Pata nahi mujhe kya ho gaya hai uske sath rehna achha lagta hai not just because he is gauri's bhai par woh bahut achha hai apni pura din mein sirf Gauti hi hai jiske sath mein khul ke hans pati hun. Jab wo mujhe chhuta hai ek ajeeb sa ehsaas ho jata hai. Kya kar raha hai woh mere sath pata nahin kyu main uski taraf khinchi hi chali jati hun. Kahin mujhe usse pyaar?
Roshni(of mirror: her reflection cuts in between): Pyaar?? Laughs evilly Pyaar ye tu kaisi baatein kar rahi hai Roshni?? Tu paagal ho gayi hai kya? Tu Gauti se kaise pyaar kar sakti hai woh toh tera enemy hai?
Real Roshni: Gauti mera dushman nahi woh paanch mere dushman hain.
M Roshni: Na na Gautam bhi tumhara dushman hai kyuki uski behan tumhari dushman hai.
R Roshni: Gautam apni behan se bahut different hai.
M Roshni: So what tum bhi toh apni behan se bahut different thi par aaj dekh lo tum apne sapnon ko chhod kar yahaan aa gayi apni behan ke liye uska badla lene ke liye. Gautam tumhara sath kyu dega woh apni behan ke sath hai. Ho sakta hai Gautam bhi Neha Di ki death mein involved ho woh 1st year repeat akr raha hai ho sakta hai Neha Di aur uska koi link ho. Ye bhi ho sakta hai jab yeh sab hua to woh apni behan ke sath hi mila ho kuchh bhi ho sakta hai Roshni.
R Roshni: Gautam aisa nahi kar sakata.
M Roshni: Chalo maan lo ki usne hi yeh sab kiya hai tum kya karogi apne knight in shining armour ke saath?? Soch lo tum usse pyaar karti ho. Yehi kahogi ki woh ab change ho gaya hai aur use maaf kar dogi aur uske sath apni baki ki life spend karogi?
R Roshni: Nahi yeh kabhi bhi nahi ho sakta ab meri zindagi ka ek hi sapna hai apni Neha Di ka badla aur jo bhi mere saamne hoga main use destroy kar dungi phir chahe woh Gauti hi kyu na ho. Pehle use destroy kar dungi aur phir chahe woh Gautam hi kyu na ho. Neha Di ko insaaf dilana mera sapna hai par Gautam meri zindagi pehle apni zindagi ko destroy karke apne aap ko khatam kar lungi Roshni Kataria ka naam is duniya se mita dungi kyuki Gauti ke bina main ji nahi sakti aur Neha di ko main dokha nahi de sakti. Aur yehi mera aakhiri faisala hoga. Gauti ke saath main bhi destroy ho jaungi aur Neha Di ko insaaf bhi dila dungi. Suna tumne Main yehi karungi. Yehi.
Mirror Roshni fades away leaving a sad Roshni behind.
THE END
Phew completed and I know its very bad. But wanted to write this for Gautam and Roshni because I love them. Please leave your precious comments.
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-Raj- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os... loved reading her pov...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey its nt bad...
infact its amazing...

her POV was well depicted..
n i specially luv hr final deccision..

n i specifically lvd this line


Gauti ke bina main ji nahi sakti aur Neha di ko main dokha nahi de sakti.


it shows hr dilema...hr plight...

jst luvd it Angel...


n ur nt a bad writer...


keep writing more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was an amazing piece of work Abhiya, i loved it.

You portrayed her inner turmoil beautifully. Do write more as such. It was superb!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Raj-

nice os... loved reading her pov...

thanku so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: tareyfan

hey its nt bad...

infact its amazing...

her POV was well depicted..
n i specially luv hr final deccision..

n i specifically lvd this line


Gauti ke bina main ji nahi sakti aur Neha di ko main dokha nahi de sakti.


it shows hr dilema...hr plight...

jst luvd it Angel...


n ur nt a bad writer...


keep writing more...

thanku so much
I am glad you liked it
you are comments are really encouraging.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nash..

That was an amazing piece of work Abhiya, i loved it.

You portrayed her inner turmoil beautifully. Do write more as such. It was superb!

thanku so much
I will try I am not that good in expressing
thanks once again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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