VIRMAN: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE ! - Page 34

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at first
im reallyyy sorryyy my dear to comennting soo late, i know i havent comment earlier but i promise, i will try to comment now in every part,

this story is really different and intersting , you have wrote it well👏

thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow it was an awesome update
loved it to the core of my heart
wow virat and maanvi love sports
waiting for their bonding
will virat leave maanvi for aenna
plzzz don't let that happen
plzzz do continue soon😊😊
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Nice update. Really now Vanshika is getting more smart. The parents plan was awesome. The precap looks interesting. Will be waiting for your next update.
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Originally posted by: hangok

at first
im reallyyy sorryyy my dear to comennting soo late, i know i havent comment earlier but i promise, i will try to comment now in every part,

this story is really different and intersting , you have wrote it well👏

thanks for pm


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

wow it was an awesome update

loved it to the core of my heart
wow virat and maanvi love sports
waiting for their bonding
will virat leave maanvi for aenna
plzzz don't let that happen
plzzz do continue soon😊😊


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Originally posted by: jayprabu

Nice update. Really now Vanshika is getting more smart. The parents plan was awesome. The precap looks interesting. Will be waiting for your next update.


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Posted: 11 years ago

part 9 :

virat: so ... Such diverse people like us, can also have some similaries in interests n likes ... That's really nice to know !

manvi: even I'm surprised to know !! ... Done with ur first aid ... how are u feeling now ?

virat: it's not like ... something went into my eyes, ... u remove it n ask ... how are u feeling 😆?

I got hurt n u've done dressing just now ... It needs some time to heal manvi !! ... I'll tell u tommorrow, whether I'm feeling well or not ... !!😉

ok, lets go now, we r getting late !

manvi: late for wat ?

virat: are you planning to stay back here for the rest of ur life 😆? ... We need to go !! ... Mom n dad might be waiting

manvi: oh yeah ... lets go !

they go near their cars but don't find anyone there !

virat: where did they all go ?

manvi: how can I know ?😉

virat: come, lets see around ... they might have gone to roam !

manvi: wat abt our friends ?

virat: oh yeah ... i forgot to remove our friends from my pocket, ... just a min !😆

manvi: is that a joke ? ... I didn't get laugh !!😡

virat: who told u it's a joke ... ? ... N not getting laugh isn't my problem !!⭐️

manvi: for god's sake, will u please keep quite ?😡

virat: finally ... u've understood the peace in silence !! ... I'm glad that from now, u'll maintain silence !😆

manvi: all ur games are fine until we find them ... Once it's done, u'll know wat is manvi !!😡

virat: no, I need to know abt it right now !! ... Tell me ... Wat ..is ..manvi ?😉

manvi: manvi ... Umm ... manvi isss ... a good girl !!😆😆

virat: ( laughs off ...) first think wat to speak n then speak ... Ok ?

he starts walking with slippers in his hands leaving his footprints in sand ! ... Manvi stops for a moment, thinks n runs towards him ...

manvi: wat wrong did I speak that u asked me to think before I speak ? ... I know very well ... That I'm a good girl !

virat: firstly, everyone thinks that they are gud ... !! ... We need any other person to confirm it !!😉

secondly, I don't think u r gud or ... u donno the meaning of good ... So, get a dictionary !!😆

manvi: I'll remember this forever ... Mr.virat !! ... U insulted me in beach ... that too ... a public area !!😡

virat: hold on !! don't decide to have a grudge on me !! ... Though it's a public area, there's no one to hear that u r insulted !!😉

n by the way, does the public space matter to u more, or the insult ? ... Is it ok if I scold u in our room ?😆😳

manvi: so, u also know how to speak !! ... I thought ... by now, u would've understood me , but no ... U r still the foolish one !

vanshika: ( shouts ... ) now stop it !! ... Since the last 15 min's, u both are arguing with eachother ... Don't u have any other thing to do ?😡😡

manvi: but aunty, how do u know that we were arguing ? ... n from where did u come here all of a sudden ?😲

vanshika: coz, I was eavesdropping ur convo through phone !! ... I called ur dad's no. through my phone n dropped my phone in ur handbag ...⭐️👏

Virat: wat ?😲😡

Varun: actually, ur mom wants to know if everything is fine btw u both or not, so ... she did this ...sry on her behalf !

Vanshika: sry ? ... For wat ? these 2 are useless ! ... They donno how to behave atleast like a boy friend n girl friend !!😆

Virat: mom ?😲😡

Manvi: yes aunty ... it's ur son who's going soo fast leaving me behind !! ... Then wat can I talk ?😉

virat: I'm not fast, u r only slow !

vanshika: but u r not fast in every sense, virat !!👏😉

virat: mom ?😲😡

manvi: that's soo true ...😆

vanshika: lets go now ... it's waste of time even to let u guys stay alone !!😉

such stupids !!

they all go home ... manvi's parents go to their home !

everyone go to their rooms after dinner

in virman's room:

virat: wat were u doing wen my mom was keeping phone in ur bag ?😡

manvi: I did wat u always do ... Ask in a shocked expression ... " Mom ?😲😡 " 😆😆

virat: I think this is all my mom's plan to get us closer, ... but remember, I'm not going to ditch aenna for u !!😡😳😳

manvi: that's soo sweet of you😳 !! ... Even I'm not waiting for us to get closer ... n u know that better !!😆

virat: we should stop my mom from doing all these things !!⭐️

manvi: even I'm feeling so !! ... Wat shall we do ?

virat: we'll plan something tomorrow⭐️⭐️, gud night !

manvi: gud night , but can I ask u something ... if u r not going to fall asleep 😳?

in varun n vanshika's room ... They start to read virat's diaries🤢 !!

Actually, I can continue this part with the dairy n manvi's question, but didn't coz I'm not feeling to write it !!😆

friends ... I'm getting actually the lowest response ... for 356 pm's, I'm getting 32 likes n even less comments !😭😭

I'm completely disappointed !

If the response is same in this part also, then ... I'll end my stories ... both ... as even that story is getting less response !😡😡

I'm sry for saying like this, but this time ... I'm pretty sure to discontinue both my stories if the response is soo less !!

if u like my story, please share my story with ur buddy's also ... else ... this will be my last update !!


********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

Edited by reyna. - 11 years ago
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love this update very much Friend... I can't be waiting to know what will be happen next... thank u friend for ur awesome update and pm...
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plz dont stop d storyy plzzz

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