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Posted: 18 years ago
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The story starts from when Mayank is found guilty, he is sent to an ashram. Ekalavya and KT are friends, still quirkey releations with nakul, lakshya and Manthan. All except for MOhini and Tripti like Tulsi as she appoligised.

Manthan is walking angrily on the road after having a fight with Lakshya and Nakul, he suddenly bumps into this girl and he catches her before she falls to the floor.

First we see her eyes, lips, hair, then body, then her whole self, she is NEHA BAMB from KYPH, KRIPA. BUt her name is NEha in KSBKBT

Manthan stares at her and sweet music is playing in the background

neha: what the hell are you doing? chodo mujhe chodo!

manthan leaves her and she falls to the floor.

neha: Why did you leave me?

Manthan: tum ne kaha chodo...so maine tumhe chod diya

neha: mera woh mathlab nahin tha, i went leave me alone. idiot, tum jaise lufungo ko mai ache tarah se jaanthi hoon, jaanmuch kar ladke ko geerana aur usse pakadna?

Manthan: You think you are miss world that i would want to hold you? tum janthi nahin, i come from a very respectable family

Neha: nonsence, tumhari aucaat kya hai? Tum nahin jaanthe ho mai kaun hoon

Manthan: Mai... (the phone rings, and manthan stops)

Neha: huh, (she walks off)

Neha is shown entering Shanti Niketan. she runs in and closes tulsi's eyes

neha: mai kaun hoon da?

tulsi: Neha!

neha: aap mujhe kaise pehchaan gaye?

tulsi: ek tum he ho jo mujhe da kehkar bulati hai

every body comes down. neha is introduced as Mirhir's best friend's poti. she often used to come to play in SN when she was a child.

Eklavya and bhoomi come down and they hug her, she greets them "Eklavya bhaiya" and "Bhoomi de" Nakul and lakshya come down the stairs, but Nakul stops half way and stares at Neha.

Lakshya: woh khoobsurat hai, make sure she dosen't call you bhaiya!

Nakul laughes ------------------------------------------------------------ ----------------------------------------------------------- would you like me to continue?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
Hey it's really good and ofcourse I want u to continue but u know ur title is a bit confusing so u might wanna add ff to it so ppl realise that it's a ff.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice, I c that ur moving towards a triangle btweeen Manthan, Neha, and Nakul. 😃 Continue please
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Posted: 18 years ago
#4
ek aur love triangle hey plz continues
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
it is very nice please continue 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
plz continue it was really good 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
it's really nice plz continue it keeep it up

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