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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Ohh hoo sorry sorry I ment to come back and comment lakin bhool gaye ... And I think that theo others are waitng for Ron to translate ... If she dose not I will later ok...

Now on to my review::::

Well In helping her it seems Vickram is slowly finding peace within him se;f and his heart. I ope he opens it up again and these two start something very soon.
Malhar is a very strng girl and her and her grand mom is very close... I hope nothing happens to her!!!
Great Chapter Mansi I am looking forward to see what happenes next!!!...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: croziaxx

itne saare view aur only one comment " BHUT NAINSAFI HAI"


mujhe to abhi pata chala story continue ho gayi

mansi madam .. pm karna tha na k story ko continue kiyaa..

chalo chalo rona band karo..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u , thank u girls me garden,garden...
roshan ! next time i will do PM sure..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

mansi it was nice chapter em glad she is safe and fine 😃

hello all... here is chapter 8 translated too!!


CHAPTER-8


Next morning ----- mallhar is sleeping on the couch and vikram comes to her..

V - mallhar! Mallhar ! ( this time he shake her sholder ) .

M - ( she wakes up ) wha.. what happens ? dadu ?

V - she is ok ..

M- oh god , I dont know how did I sleep

V- its ok, fine at least you could have a rest, come the doctors are treating your grand mother

M- let's go

( they rushed to the her room)..

Mallhar ask to the docter " how is she now

D-- she is stable ...

V"that means, her life is still in danger?..

D -- yes ! but her condition is not bad if she will be remain as it is ,for next few hour then, I can say there would be hope .. keep lil patient ..

M - docter I m very nervous...she is about to cry ..

D"look young lady this is life .. and in the life some things are not in our hand so have a faith in god..and hope for the best.. (he goes)

V"the doctor is rite Malhaar, we have no other option then waiting

mallhar ! come let's go out its 8.40 am I have to go to office too.

M"but sir..

V"I know u r alone but mallhar ! rajeev brother is not coming in so i have responsibility on me...so i have to go to office.

M"I know sir ..

V" come let's eat something.. come

M"i don't feel like eating , sir

V"see malhaar, your grand mother needs u... if u get ill then who will take care of her... be practical please..

M"ok sir

( both takes breakfast together and then vikram went, that was very hectic day, vikram was too busy , and at the hospital M was worry about her granny , thankfully prity came back so she has strength , and within whole day Vikram ask her to help few times.. and at the evening almost 8 p.m. he was here with her..

V" hows your grand mom ?

M- phele se thik hai ..she is better then b4... once her b.p got high but now its fine!

V- I can't see prity here, u said she came back didn't u

M"yeah, she just went back home to get fresh and bring some things

( a nurse comes and say )

N- there is a good news for u, the patient is slowly being conscious

M -- really ! can I see her

N"yaa ! come on

( vikram and mallhar comes in the room, doctor was checking )

D- ( he take his stethoscope in his hand and say with smile) now she is out of danger ..

Ur prayers worked..

M- thank god ! I m so happy ..(big smile on her face) ..
( dadu open her eyes and see to her. Mallhar run to her and hold her hand and sit near her and say " dadu ! I know nothing will happen to u, be fine like b4 and every thing will be just like b4 ( dadu want to say something)

M"no dadu ! ... no granny don't say anything, please rest now... don't worry about me, im totally fine,but u come home very soon... the house is empty without u ( her eyes r wet)

Dadu say in thin voice -don't cry, u r my brave kid na*

M- yes, I m just like u... (her eyes are twinkle...she moves towards vikram)... granny this is vikram, he is my sir and he helped me allot in those 2 days...(vikram nod his head and said hello to her),

the doctor interruped them and said= ok ok enough patient need to rest... please go out now..let her rest now.

M- dadu !I m malhar, don't worry haa.. she said and comes out with vikraam ..

V"so now u happy naa (a smile on her face) ..

M- yes allot... u dont know in those two days i had to bear pain...the fear of losing some one from the family is breath taking, killing.. but now I m relived ( she take a fresh breath)

( some thing click in his mind but he nod his head as he want to ignore everything and say " I can understand.. ok now me leaving.. now your grand mom is fine... take care of her.. and when every thing comes back to normal join office ..are u planning to join back the office or not... haa.. he ask mischievously

M"ofcourse sir ..as soon as possible..

V"ok em leaving now.. take care of your self and your grand mother.

he is walking towords the parking .. intentionally he see to the sky and say slowly " thank you god ! you saved her from the bad thing... from being alone... she was rite... the fear of losing one of your relative is scary... please keep her happy... while praying he feels a peace and satisfaction a positive energy within himself .. he opens his arms and close his eyes and feel it deeply..

Edited by ronshaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: croziaxx

thank u , thank u girls me garden,garden...
roshan ! next time i will do PM sure..😳


haaye haaye...

kab sikhogi mera naam 😭

chalo roshan hi sahi😳 - na nick thik se na naam thik se😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronshaan


haaye haaye...

kab sikhogi mera naam 😭

chalo roshan hi sahi😳 - na nick thik se na naam thik se😲


RONSHAAN ! i know ur name see, but u know roshan means " filled with light " ..so
but if u don't mind i can give u a nick name "RAASU" not gullaaa don't worry 😉😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: croziaxx


RONSHAAN ! i know ur name see, but u know roshan means " filled with light " ..so
but if u don't mind i can give u a nick name "RAASU" not gullaaa don't worry 😉😛😆



Mansi...

kya karu me tera haaan bol bol

pehle to mera naam roshan nahi 2nd ronshaan is nick
3rd .. mera naam Ronit hay
so if u want to say is short u can call me Ron...
Ab... agar koi rasu basu kaha na ... to... iski jesi halath ho jayegi teri ...

Nice to meet u mansi https://www.picgifs.com/smileys/smileys-and-emoticons/beating-and-fighting/smileys-beating-and-fighting-498920.gif
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronshaan



Mansi...

kya karu me tera haaan bol bol

pehle to mera naam roshan nahi 2nd ronshaan is nick
3rd .. mera naam Ronit hay
so if u want to say is short u can call me Ron...
Ab... agar koi rasu basu kaha na ... to... iski jesi halath ho jayegi teri ...

Nice to meet u mansi https://www.picgifs.com/smileys/smileys-and-emoticons/beating-and-fighting/smileys-beating-and-fighting-498920.gif




haaye ! haaye !
dost -dost naa rha , pyar-pyar na raha.. zindagi humei tera aetbar na raha..

mai tera kya kru , tu bta mai to tujhe roshugulla naam dena chahti thi ekdum mitha

teri trah
dimang ki batti jla aur soch


but tu khafa ho gayi , if u want mai tujhe ronit khungi😳 ..u know, mai tera ye naam bhul gayi thi 😉 sach me... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: croziaxx



haaye ! haaye !
dost -dost naa rha , pyar-pyar na raha.. zindagi humei tera aetbar na raha..

mai tera kya kru , tu bta mai to tujhe roshugulla naam dena chahti thi ekdum mitha

teri trah
dimang ki batti jla aur soch


but tu khafa ho gayi , if u want mai tujhe ronit khungi😳 ..u know, mai tera ye naam bhul gayi thi 😉 sach me... 😆


😆 MERA NAAM BHUL GAYI TU 😲

HAAAYEE.. YEH DOSTI.. WHA !!

DOSTI KA DAWA KARNE WALE TERA KYA KEHNA 😭

MUJHE MANSI NAAM YAAD HAY

SHUKAR KARO MAINE CRAZY NAAM NAI DIYA U KO...

croziaxx - CRAZY HEEHEEH😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
u can call me crazy my dear .. because i love u na

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