New FF *A different Love Story* Pt11 Pg 23

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anagha107

@anagha107

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Iam getting a feeling like am reading one of the judi foster's romantic novels. A very interesting approach of sugvi love story. good work and keep going.

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croziaxx

@croziaxx

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

aari ! this is beautiful ❤️

so both side kuch-kuch hota hai 😉

aur ye btao aaloo pratha aur bhindhi curry kanhi tumhari favorite to nahi hai ? tell me 😛

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

AArthi a beautiful continuation from you!! Please continue...IA love that you kept the original essance of Sugni and Vickram intact! Great Job keep it up!

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Rozey

@rozie

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Well Aarathi, i am surprised that you want us to tell you if ur story is boring, because dear, thats not how i see it, ur story is like one of those romance novel, that once you start reading u just don't want to stop cuz its just too good.

I absolutely admire ur superb writing skills, and the way u r blooming the love story between Vini is so fantastic.

I honestly don't have words to tell you how much i enjoy reading ur FF, i just love it ❤️

And can't wait for u to update 😊

And Thanks for the PM

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payal7

@payal7

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Hi Arti

Another great part of the story. I personally think the story is developing well and its nice to have other things like the factory starting and other characters.

Thank you

Edited by payal7 - 12 years ago

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widdy

@widdy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Well,you 3 girls are in the same league!👏(Ash,Mansi and Vinnie)

Very good creative writing-keep going.Congratulations to all.👍🏼

I do hope the cv's of this show open their eyes wide to see how a story should be wriiten-3 different ways and all are interesting!😊

Not the rubbish we have been subjected to for the last 5-6 months!😡

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octopie

@octopie

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Hi Arti ! Not at all boring to me, I think it's absolutely a great idea that you're putting some other things into the story and not just Sugvi. While their story's seed has already been planted and is growing, there are other situations/events happening and such things will also help understand and see the story better. By doing so, you're also giving their blooming relationship a context.
So, I'm happy, as a reader, to know about other parts of their lives... the factory especially since that's what brought Vickram here and is quite important to him. Through these other happenings, we see qualities of Vickram like just see here, how the manager admired and praised Vickram. seeing that Vickram cares about the villagers as they are facing poverty, that he could help them (and have faith in them) this way at least instead of getting workers from elsewhere and at the same time, he finds his father's dream important to fulfill although he does not have to do so, is it?
so keep it up, Arti ! it's fantastic 😳 I loved reading about their inner thoughts too !

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komal

@komal07

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Aarathi it's not boring at all. I loved each and every detail you gave about characters.You 're doing great job👍🏼

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Sandy

@Sandy66

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

😊 Aarathi, absolutely fantastic, 👏. Love it. Not a boring moment. Anyone can fall
in love with Vickram, he"s charismatic, loving, caring and charming 😉. Please continue,
we're looking forward for Part 5. Awesome job 👍🏼

Edited by Sandy66 - 12 years ago