New FF *A different Love Story* Pt11 Pg 23 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

LOL LOOK who's back..Its me...PSH ko pehle hi BYE kaha tha ..but LLOVED YOUR FICTION!! AWESOE START!! want to know more...Here is a banner for your Fiction HOPE YOU LIKE IT!!



Piu thanks a lot dear for your siggy...loved it and using it too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pankhudi11

finally i got to read FF on PSH ...it was awesome aarthi .. so means DV and sugni are not bro-sis in your FF ? or they are and do not know ? continue soon .. thanks for PM dear !!



Thanks pankhudi... Yes in my FF DV and sugni are not at all related
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
@Widdy
@Julie

Thanks a lot for liking my work
ronshaan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
its really good
Mansi writing what happened after vikram left the village
and U write a new fresh story
Mazzaaa aa gaya
keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Hey
I am waiting for the 2nd part Ash_arti plz thoda jaldi
And even Mansi aage badhao apni story
Patta hai it feels great too read your plots I mean they are amazing aur purine Vikram ki yaad dilate hain.

I wish you both would have been the writer.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

Part 2 – First Meeting

Sugni & Vikram fell on the road(Sugni on Vikram). Sugni slowly opened her eyes & found a pair of jet black eyes staring at her.She found herself drawn deep into the eyes & continued to gaze into them while she heard someone calling her name repeatedly and shaking her.Sugni finally tore out of the captive black eyes gaze & looked up at Champa who helped her to get up.

Vikram remained lying on the road while Sugni composed herself & offered him her hand.A couple of seconds passed & Vikram held her hand to get up while Sugni felt a shiver & thrilling pleasure run through her body at his touch.She had never felt anything like this before & it left her wondering.She continued to stare at Vikram.



Vikram : Will you leave my hand… I have got up now.

Sugni blushes & says : Sorry Sir… I am very sorry to have barged in & collided with you like that.

Vikram : You should be… cant you see…………….By that time DV & Suraj come and DV pulls Sugni towards him and holds her in embrace.

DV : Caught up with you finally my dear…………I must say you have courage to run away from me…….very few girls have challenged me like you.

Sugni who is struggling to come out of his hold says : leave me just leave me I say.

Just then someone taps of DV's shoulder and DV looses his grip on sugni and turns to find Vikram who gives him one tight slap. DV starts to bleed at mouth and looses one tooth while sugni escapes , runs and hides behind Vikram.

Vikram asks sugni : Who is he? Why is he harassing you?

Champa : Sir he is Digvijay a very rich thakur of Rampur.He was harassing an innocent girl just few minutes back..we tried to save the girl so now he is behind us.

Vikram comes near DV & holds his shirt collar & strangles him & says – You must be ashamed to behave like an animal showing your strength on young girls in this manner. Don't you have any sister at home…you seem to be educated is this what they teach you in college to show your male ego on women.

DV : Just shut up who are you to advice me… you don't seem to be from Rampur.

Vikram gives DV another slap and asks him to keep his mouth shut & tells Sugni – You girl come here come and give him a tight slap.

Sugni : Sir??

Vikram : Don't be scared I am here slap him… he misbehaved with you right…slap him that will teach him a lesson.

Sugni after some hesitation slaps DV twice

Vikram : I am warning you young man next time I see you harassing or teasing any girl here you will regret why you were born.

Saying so Vikram lets go of DV when Suraj comes to his rescue and together they run helter skelter.

Vikram : I hope you are fine girl…….. By the way whats your name?

Sugni : Thanks to you sir I am fine…My name is Sugni and she is my friend Champa.

Champa : Sir we are very grateful to you… don't know how to repay you.

Vikram smiles & says : You can repay me by showing the way to Old Haveli.

Sugni : Old haveli??? That is abandoned from so many years sir…no one lives there…infact its not in a state for anyone to leave… what do..

Vikram : Listen girl…whatever's your name cut your crap and tell me if you can take me to Old Haveli.

Champa hints sugni to keep quite and says – Sir we will take you to the haveli.Its about twenty minutes from here.

Saying so sugni & champa hold Vikram's suitcase against his will and head towards the haveli.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Good Aarti I loved part 2

DV's toot broken hahaha good i like it
vikram wow like old days
i love it... !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

DV might be angry like this

dv and sugni
Thakur vikram singh might b like this
sugni hesitate to slap DV might b like this
😊
Edited by ronshaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
aarti ! its beautiful,😳 kaash ye sab such hota... cvs ne humari khushiyo aur apne show ka styanash kar diya...😭
u know humei apna PH kholna chahiye, hum unse better show bna sakte hai... 😳😳 😉 😉
Edited by croziaxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
As before I loved this part also Aarti
Good work
Keep going

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