Mehbeer TS Based on accident track pt 2 p.1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its like a masterpiece dear...!!! But the most important thing is that it isn't lifeless. Most of the times, a piece of art when done with utmost perfection , loses it soul somewhere in the process, and a bit of imperfection in that perfection. And then people call it a masterpiece...
But this didn't happen with the first part you wrote... I could feel abeer's pain and could imagine all of it happening in front of me...
I'm a bit emotional now...
Running to grab a tissue paper...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz continue this awesome😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely end😊
,but when she was pregnant,it was like some year later right?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was truely amazing..!
Nd so beautiful. . I loved the way u wrote it..
the way u described abeers pain was superb..
I loved the ending..
superb..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey!!

Read the two parts, that was like a quickie read. But that was nice.
You write so well. Keep writing on Mehbeer. Thank you!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh, this is absolutely BRILLIANT! Hope we get something on similar lines in the show.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful ebding
i must say tat it was fabulous
loved it to the core

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