New MehBeer SS: In Search of a DAWN! [CH 1 A UPD] - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Loved the prologue sans...do continue n pm me as always ;)
pretty interesting story to unfold :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Awesome concept. It's definitely interesting. Looking forward to it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is definitely going to be something for which I would be in eager anticipation ...
Loved it !!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome prolouge nd cs
eagerly waiting to read more
plz do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh my sweetest kannukuty finally i am here..and sorry for being late here!!! the story seemes to be quite interesting..the charm of the story lies on the strong characterization and u have that in this ff..awesome character sketch!! lovely prologue too!! hope u will finish this one!! continue dear..love u so much ummah!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey friends, Thanks a lot for all your support to me... I will update all my fics, right now I am here with the first chapter, hopefully you will like the beginning... let me know the views you have about this story it's shaping and plot. Please do like and comment! I am sorry for not replying the comments will do it shortly. Also this update is a bit short and covers only the first half part of chapter one!

Enjoy reading!

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CHAPTER 1 [A]



"Yes Aunty I am moving towards Abeer's cabin... I will talk to him don't worry!", A girl replied to someone talking
"What will you talk to me?", a voice called her out and she immediately cut the call
"Abeer...Actually...I was trying to say...hmm Hiee!", she was trying hard to find words that clearly reflected through her expressions!
"Sabreena! Kya hua tujhe? It's you who make everyone sweat!", Abeer winked and almost dragged her with him towards a cabin and made her sit on the chair
"What happened?", he asked with a concern
"Nothing!", she tried to show a fake smile but failed bitterly, "I will talk to you later!", she said and began to move, Abeer caught the grip of her hand and made her sit back on the chair!
"Are you going to speak or should I use 3rd degree treatment?", Abeer smirked
"Hmm OK listen!"
"I am in full ears!"
"Actually Shravan... your Mom"
"Aah I get you! Stop being nonsense you already know what happened at the house, don't you?", Abeer questioned her moving back
"Yep but Aunty feels once he gets married he will leave all his bad habits... and what's wrong you already own your own matrimony can't you get your brother married?", Sabreena spoke
"Sabz there is no point to argue, it's actually a baseless argument, you too very well know that Shravan can NEVER improve", Abeer said stressing more on the word NEVER'
"What if he does?", Sabreena spoke
"Oh come on you aren't from some other planet or a stranger to me right!", he said looking at her straight and continued, "and you are a doctor man how can you live in a world of such hypothetical probabilities?"
"Abeer try to understand, everything will be crystal clear, each and everything about shravan will be mentioned, the girl will decide to give him a chance or no you have no need to worry try getting professional Abeer!", Sabreena spoke out
"You think this will be limited to a pre-defined professional boundary? You very well know that Mom won't allow any negative thing to be entered! Try to understand Sabreena I can't stake anyone's life! Use your forth sight... Why do you think the lady who being my Mom never looks at me like a mother has suddenly decided to use me as a mean to get Shravan married? It's just because no one will show fake qualities about him...", before he could speak anything else Sabreena cut him in middle, "I know everything Abeer! But I just don't want the things to worsen between you and your Mom! I know you carve for her affection! Your denial would just worsen your relation...Hari kaka did tell m e what happened last night!"
"I have stopped wishing from any kind of affection from her! She doesn't treat me as a step son but...she is never a Mom for me!", he sighed

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Meher dressed up in a beautiful pink dress and got ready, she closed her eyes and saw something in front of her cold eyelids and opened them with a smile
"So finally you have decided to move ahead", her sister came and Meher just smiled
"Are you sure!", she asked looking at a photo
"See dii no one can take place of Dhruv in my life, you very well know the situation if that one black day would have got erased! But trust me I don't want to keep a void in my life on the name of sanity... I am a mature and very much open for this institution!", she replied
"Are you doing this just for Dhruv?", her sister asked and continued by pressing Mehar's hand with her palm as a sign she is there for her and continued, "I can promise you I and my husband will take care of you and your son, you need not compromise!"
"Why are you saying this suddenly?", Meher questioned
"What were you imagining closing your eyes in front of the mirror?", her sister questioned
Meher's face went pale at first but soon it gained colours
"Hmm it was Dhruv! He said I am looking beautiful in pink and so...", Meher said but her sister cut her in middle, ""Meher Dhruv is..."... "Somewhere around here only!", Meher completed the sentence
"Why this marriage Meher?", her sister questioned desperately by holding her by her shoulders
"Because it's the right and most beautiful thing to happen in this world!", Meher replied
"But the time for yours is not right!", her sister said desperately each word reflecting care for Meher
"Dii no time is right we must make it right... I WILL TRY MY BEST!", Meher said and continued, "Oh can we go to the office... I wan't to check the status of their work!"
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"Oh I hpe I am not troubling you love-birds!", Abeer gave a low chuckle
"Abeer Sudhar jaa!", Abhishek replied
Just then Abeer got a call and cut it a bit furrowing his eyebrows in anger
"What happened?", Abhi asked
"Nothing actually that India times reporter she clicked me and Sabzz at Green things the new hotel in the city last week when we did go at the opening... she just want some spice for her news paper", Abeer said and continued, "Last week they had even published didn't you the over possessive boyfriend read it?", Abeer giggled and teased
"Abeer can't ypu get serious?", Sabreena asked demandingly
"ok I get serious can you elaborate how did you impress this lady hitler!", Abeer giggled and soon Abhishek joined him
"Lets get to some work", Sabreena said coldly
"okay fine.. I was just thinking to add something to my GK!", Abeer again joked and giggled
"Abeer how many entries did we get?", Sabreena asked
"There are the forms printed and kept in that yellow file", Abeer pointed out at the shelf
"I will get it", Abhishek said and took it out, "125 entries very good!", Abhishek seemed to be happy
"Hmm so how if we divide in 50 for the medical checkup?", Sabreena said
"Sabz that is the later things, first we should arrange a get together for these people where they will interact!", Abeer said
"Ohh yeah! Let me check the entries", she said asking Abhi to hand her the file
"Oh wait I think there has been some mistake!", Abhi replied
"What?...Where?", Abeer said and went near Abhi
"Hmmm here this girl is a mother and it's mentioned she is single... it's some typing error it must be divorcee or widow correct?", Abhi was confused
"No actually she is a single Mom!", Abeer answered
"Are you sure?", Sabreena asked, "I mean single mom?"
"Yeah I have met her, she did fill the form in front of my eyes, we even did have some talk!", Abeer said
"hmm okk but do you think, this may be a problem later on...I mean Single Mother is till a somewhat unopened topic in this nation!", Abhi began
"I know what you are getting at Abhi but I think we can handle it with the help of media and some publicty of them!", Abeer answered
"PUBLICTY? Abeer that will be a cheap publicity... you are familiar to the media aren't you?", Sabreena said
"I won't let it happen I will make sure it benefits both the lady and our matrimony...trust me!", he ended

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**To Be Continued**

~Love
Sans

Edited by .Sanskruti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: jyothirockz

Thats a very interesting beginning.

Love Meher's confidence. But I have few questions, Who is the biological father of her baby ? Will there be much stress on that part ? I felt this story is more about Meher's look out for her son's future along with hers that meddling into past, that's why the question about biological father.


You will get to know abt it soon😊 nopes I won't stress on her past only relevant things that are necessary will be brought up!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

oh my sweetest kannukuty finally i am here..and sorry for being late here!!! the story seemes to be quite interesting..the charm of the story lies on the strong characterization and u have that in this ff..awesome character sketch!! lovely prologue too!! hope u will finish this one!! continue dear..love u so much ummah!

thanks yup I will complete it since it wont cross 20 chapters😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Nice update
Loved it
Thanks 4pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sans that was fab yaar... I loved it to the core... Every single word. So many things got revealed in a single chappy. Virat's strained relationship with his mother. His brother shravan. Who is spoilt and a casanova... and how typical n wrong his mother thinks. Shadi ke baad sidhar jaega... shadi hai... punar janam nahi.. lol... so meher had some dhruv guy in her life n he is no more... really sad... hawww publicity... I wonder what abeer is planning to do... jo bhi hoga, we will get mehbeer...
Really excited... Thanks for the pm...

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