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Posted: 10 years ago
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MehBeer OS
Yeh Pal









This was initially written on another couple but I tried it for MehBeer with few changes...hope you will like this short and cute story...





Meher stared at the white clouds changing shapes above her...as she was lying among the green blades of grass,waiting for evening...

Monday ...29th June,every year was the day...when she waited for Abeer...

And looking at the time on her watch ...she just sat in excitement...

The smile couldn't be wiped off her face as the wind whipped her hair in different directions...

Meher:five minutes more before Abeer would arrive...

Abeer was never late...and it was one of the many things she loved about him...

She just get up from the grass and walked a little...

Meher:3 minutes more...


As she was just thinking this , a pair of strong arms wrapped around her shoulders and pull her up before she could heard his voice...instantly she threw her arms around his neck...

Abeer:''I missed u sooo much Miss Akdoo''...he said as his arms traveled securely around her waist...

Meher:And You have no idea how much I missed you my bad boy...

Keeping her arms around his neck,she pulled back to look his face...the face she loved so much ...his deep eyes met hers and a big smile appeared on his face...the smile he only had when he is with her...

He slowly leaned down and kissed her...his kisses were breathtaking...especially when it had been such a long while he felt his lips on hers...

Abeer:''Tum se dhoor rehna kisi saza se kam nahi hai Miss Akdoo...he said placing his hand gently on her cheek''...

Abeer and Meher were truly in love with each other...since she had moved to his town during her tenth grade,Abeer was her class mate...

After completing his college,Abeer went to foreign for his music carrier and he used to come back only during the summer...

Every year he came back to his country...his town...his home and his Meher...his Miss Akdoo...the same day when they first met each other...

Abeer sat near a tree and pulled Meher with her...

Abeer''Ab tum se door rehna impossible hota ja raha hai...kuch na kuch tu karna pardhey ga tumhein lip kiss karney ke liye''...he winked and rested his head on the tree behind him with a naughty smile...

After a few minutes silence...Meher rested her head on Abeer's chest...''Issi liye tu hamarey parents ne next week hamari engagement karney ka decision liya hai Mr. Rockstar...she kissed his lips softly...

Abeer smirked and sat up and slowly leaned over her...now her back was touching the ground...and Abeer's arms were on either side of her...''You will be mine then...legally...his voice become husky on the last word''...

Meher:''then''...

Abeer:then I can do whatever I want.''...


Meher blushed hearing those words from him and she closed her eyes...loudly calling his name...Abeerrr...

Abeer kissed her eyes one by one...''I mean after that any time we could marry''...

Meher slowly opened her eyes and said''I love u ''...happiness was glowing in her beautiful eyes...

Bending his elbows...Abeer lowered his face to hers and kissed her once again...''I love you tooo Miss Akdoo''he spoke between the kiss...

Abeer:''Tum kush ho na ke hamari engagement ke baad tum merey saath foreign aao gi studies ke liye''...

M
eher:''Ofcourse Abeer...wajah chahey kuch bhi ho hum aik dooosrey ke kareeb tu hongey na...merey liye yehi kafi hai''...saying this she wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him closer to her for a tight hug...

Both were lying under the open sky for hours and hours talking about their sweet future...their marriage...their honeymoon and their kids...



A purpose of human life, no matter who is controlling it, is to love whoever is around to be loved...
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Euphoria_V thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bravo
One more master piece by u
I loved it to the core of my heart
Superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

Bravo

One more master piece by u
I loved it to the core of my heart
Superb

Thanks sweetheart...😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏...Superb story...it was well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A sweet moment of serenity and love... It's beautiful!
The way the One Shot began was mesmeric but the most enticing fact was the depiction of MehBeer bond.
Meher was so certain about the time of Abeer's arival- this showed how strong their mutual bond of understanding is, a fact I loved about this One Shot.
The kiss was a moment of bliss, one that I wish to see in the show as well.
A wonderful One Shot with equally wonderful title and banner.
I would certainly love to read more!!

Regards
K
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u sooo much dear...
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Originally posted by: stephie34

👏...Superb story...it was well written

Thanks a lot...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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twas breathtaking awsum os
update more n pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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overall a good os... very sweet and romantic... loved ms akdoo and mr. Rockstar...
But seriously I thought something would come up... may be a twist... or something like this convo be a dream or flashback...
do write more dear...
Edited by naina927 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh wow that was just too aesome ❤️ Loved it do write more n pm me for sure I would love to read your work I really like this sweet cute naughty n very romantic one shot it was amazing 😃

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