Pavitra Rishta Written Update 23rd September 2014

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Pavitra Rishta Written Update 23rd September 2014


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Ankita's car

Naren and Ankita are in the car. Naren is driving, looking at Ankita. There is a car coming from the other direction, the car honks at Naren. Naren suddenly looks at the road and quickly gets in the other lane so they don't get in an accident, he stops the car. Ankita says Naren sir what are you doing?! Don't look at me, look at the road! What if we got into an accident? If you don't take care of yourself at least take care of Ashi and I. Please look ahead and drive and drive carefully, there's no rush. Naren says you scold just like Ashi does. Ankita says and you act just like Ashi. Naren keeps driving, the car starts going fast. Ankita says what happened Naren sir? Naren says why aren't the brakes working? The car keeps going, Naren is about to bump into a car but he goes to the right and bumps into a tree. The front of the car opens, Naren and Ankita's heads go down because of the crash. Naren asks Ankita if she's ok. Ankita says yes I'm ok, are you ok? Naren says yes I think the car caught on fire, get out of the car. Naren and Ankita get out of the car, Naren says the car is fine but the brakes failed, but how will we get out of this jungle? Ankita says I don't know how we'll get out, I just know that I have to get out of here Naren sir, I have a meeting which is very important! Naren says yes I know. He looks at his phone and says there's no network here either. Ankita says this is all because of you, where was your mind? How were you driving the car? Is this how you drive a car? Naren says I was driving the car fine, the brakes failed. Ankita says what were you doing? Naren says the brakes failed, you were talking to me.

Outside

Ankita says what do you mean? Do you want to say that the car brakes failed due to me? How can you say that? You can't blame me Naren sir, for anything! Do you understand? I have a meeting, don't you hear what I'm saying? Naren says relax, relax, just cool down, ok. Everything will be fine, there's no network here so I have to call. Ankita says you can't, I will do what I have to, please. Ankita takes her bag out of the car and calls for a lift. A cab is coming, Ankita shouts for it but it passes Ankita, Naren says Ankita nothing will happen, no one will give us a lift. Ankita says are you challenging me? Naren tries to say something, Ankita says one second, are you challenging me? It's ok, I will win this challenge. I will stop a car, wait and watch. Naren tells Ankita it's not safe. Ankita goes on the road and stops a car that's coming. There are 2 old men in the car who are in the drunk, the passenger says this girl is out here so late at night, such a beautiful girl, is she an angel? The driver says let's go ask her. They get out of the car, Ankita asks them if they can give her a lift. The men ask her if she is an angel. Naren comes there, Ankita says to the men, look I made a mistake, you guys leave, I will manage. The drunk men say no, we will take you. Ankita refuses, she runs to Naren and hugs him. One of the men say to Ankita, oh sorry, sorry, I thought you were alone, and wanted to give you company. Sorry, very sorry. Ok enjoy yourselves. Both the men say bye to Ankita and get in their car. Naren says to Ankita, what happened? Don't you want to go with them? Go. Ankita shakes her head, she and Naren walk together.

Deshmukh House

Ashi and Pari are on their bed. Pari is sleeping, Ashi wakes up and sees Pari is sleeping. She gets out of her bedroom and goes to Vaishnavi's room. Ashi says to Vaishnavi, you haven't gone to sleep. Vaishnavi says I don't feel sleepy without choti ma. Ashi says I'm also not feeling sleepy, I'm hungry. Will you make something for me? Vaishnavi says ok, come. Ashi and Vaishnavi go to the kitchen, Vaishnavi makes a sandwich with jam for Ashi. Both Ashi and Vaishnavi have their sandwiches, they hear a sound and quickly hide in a corner next to the refrigerator. Kinnari comes to the kitchen and goes to the refrigerator but doesn't see them. Kinnari sees jam sandwiches on the table and says how did this bread get here? Vaishnavi and Ashi have jam all over their face, they both open their mouths. Kinnari sees them in the dark and screams. She runs out of the kitchen and screams ghost, ghost! Teju and Nina wake up, Teju asks where is the ghost? Kinnari says they are inside the kitchen. Nina says ok let's see. Kinnari says I will show you 2.

Deshmukh House in the kitchen

Teju, Nina and Kinnari go inside the kitchen, Kinnari points to the place where she saw Ashi and Vaishnavi and says the ghost is there. Nina turns the light on, Kinnari says I saw it there. Teju says Kinnari, you are grown up, ghosts are nothing. Teju tells Nina to make her understand. Nina says Kinnari you are such a coward, you start screaming whenever you see anything, that there's a ghost, ghost. Where is the ghost?! You ruin your sleep and ours too. Go to sleep! Kinnari says I really saw a ghost. Nina says come on, go to sleep. Teju tells Nina to take Kinnari. Nina and Kinnari leave the kitchen. Teju sees Ashi and Vaishnavi hiding somewhere else in the kitchen under the table, smiling. Teju thinks to herself, oh I will have to teach them a lesson.

Outside

Ankita and Naren are walking outside on the road. Ankita is trying to get network on her phone but the signal does not work. Ankita says my phone is also off Naren sir, you give me your phone, I will try it. Naren says I've tried 10 times, network is not coming. Ankita says please try, put your phone up. Ankita takes Naren's phone and raises it high. Naren says the network won't come like this. Both of them are holding the phone, Ankita says the phone will fall. They drop the phone by accident. Naren says now there's no signal and no phone. Naren picks up his phone, Ankita says I don't want to stay here, it's do dark on this road. I'm going back to my car, I will sit there. At least I will have a place to stay in, if you want to come then come. Naren follows Ankita to the car.

In the car

Naren opens the door for Ankita, Ankita sits in the car. Naren gets in the car. The car lights turn off, Ankita says Naren sir! Naren says don't worry, I know you're afraid of the dark. Naren lights up a torch, and says one minute. How do I know that you're afraid of the dark? You never told me. Ankita says Naren sir every girl is afraid of the dark, it's not something to tell. Naren says yes, you go to sleep peacefully. Ankita says may I say something? Naren nods, Ankita says I'm sorry. Naren says sorry for what? Ankita says I got so angry at you, I put the blame on you for not reaching the meeting. Naren says it's ok, you don't have to say sorry. I understand, and as far as the meeting is concerned, it's said whatever happens is for the good. Who knows, we might get a bigger project then this. Ankita smiles, there is thunder and lightning. Ankita thinks to herself, Naren sir you said whenever unseasoned rain comes it brings back a lot of old memories but now our new love story can't start. Naren and Ankita spent the night in the car sleeping together, it is the next morning. Ankita is sleeping on Naren's shoulder, she wakes up and realizes this. Ankita remembers the old times she had with Naren.

Outside the chawl

Savita is walking outside. She says, the every day drama, wake up in the morning, stand in the water line. Savita stands in the line to fill water, 2 goons come there and tell all of them to get out of the way and says no one will fill up water. The goon says our boss will fill water first, understand? Now get out! One of the ladies from the chawl says do you have any manners or not?! We will not tolerate gandagardi(misbehavior) if you want to do that then do it somewhere else or else. The other goon says what will you do? Another lady slaps him, and says was that enough or should I slap you some more? The boss comes and scolds the lady, the lady firmly tells him to leave and threatens him. The lady says your face looks like Shakti Kapoor, Savita laughs. The lady says what do you think, you can scare away poor and innocent people to get your way? The boss says look, you don't know me! The lady says I know you very well, you're a cheap gunda who steals from poor people. Savita nods, the lady says if I surf the internet I won't find anyone more disgusting then you. The boss says control your mouth or else! The lady says or else what? Try to slap me! The boss says you're fighting with me so bravely, don't you feel scared? Who are you? The lady says if I will tell my identity I will slap you 4 more times. The lady firmly tells a gunda to bring her the chair. The gunda brings it for her, she sits down. The lady gets ready to call someone, the boss of the gundas tries to say something but the lady tells him to keep quiet.


Outside the chawl


The lady calls the police inspector, she says yes inspector, come to the Anand Niwas chawl. There are some goons here, no I won't let them run away, come. The lady hangs up and warns the gundas. Savita says to the lady, good job dear. You have taught these gundagardis a good lesson, you completed what I did not do. The lady says Savita ji, I have heard a lot of good things about you. Savita laughs, the lady says I learn from you and I have come to live here now. Savita says that's good, it felt very good to see you here. The lady says that's fine Savita tai, but the fault is of the chawl people. Anyone comes and does gundagardi and they tolerate it, no one even gives them a good answer. The person to be blamed more is the person who tolerates the injustice compared to the person who causes injustice. If we keep tolerating their injustice then the gundas confidence will grow. The lady says to the chawl residents that if they had raised their voices together then the goons would have run away. Savita says you are absolutely right.


Outside the chawl


The lady says wherever there is injustice, whether it's a line to fill up water, a bus, an auto, on the road, anywhere, it should be stopped immediately. We think a hero will come to save us, now that time is over. Now you will have to be your own hero and take care of yourselves, lighting candles at the India gate will not do anything. If you want to light candles, then light it in yourselves and deal with the goons. The goons try to run away but Savita stops them and holds them in place. The lady says to the crowd, now you say, what should we do with them? Beat them up or let them go? The crowd from the chawl shouts, beat them up! The lady says ok so before the police comes they will be beaten! Everyone from the chawl starts to beat the gundas. Savita says to the lady, you did so good dear. If everyone had a daughter like you then it would be great for this country. You are not a daughter but a son, Savita strokes the lady. The lady smiles.

Deshmukh House

Pari comes to the main room. Ashi is there trying to make her hair, Teju is in the kitchen. Pari thinks to herself, where did Naren go? He didn't come home the whole night? Pari tries to call Naren but there is no answer. Pari goes to Ashi and says Ashi why didn't your dada come back? Ashi says he's at a meeting, he'll come back later. Pari says why didn't he tell me this? Ashi says because he told me. Teju says Pari what kind of mother are you? You're seeing that your daughter is struggling to make her hair, can't you make her hair? Pari says Maushi I don't know all this, and I just woke up, how would I know to make her hair? A newspaper gets dropped off at the front of the house. Pari looks at it and thinks to herself, Ankita's accident must be published in the newspaper, let's see. Pari goes to the front to pick up the newspaper, when she goes there Ankita and Naren come inside. Pari sees them and looks at Ankita shocked. Pari says you? Ankita says yes, me. But what happened, why are you looking at me like as if you've seen a ghost? Ankita and Naren go to sit down, Pari says you didn't come home all night so. Naren says don't ask what happened. Ankita says what is it Pari? You're worried for me? It felt good. Teju says Ankita, you didn't come home all night and Naren you? Naren says we were together. Pari says what?! Naren what if something happened to you? Naren says if something happened to me, how did you know that something happened to us? Pari says you didn't come home all night so I was worried.

Deshmukh House

Ankita says it's ok Naren, you were with me during the night so she would be worried. Ankita smiles at Pari and says I can understand. Teju says one second Ankita. You went to the office right, for a meeting. Did your meeting go overnight? Ankita says Atia we were going to go to a meeting but actually we couldn't reach the meeting.(Ankita is looking at Pari while saying this) Teju says why? Naren says Attu we got in a car accident. Pari and Teju look shocked, Naren says we just did anything to come back alive. All that way through the jungle, I'm very tired now. Ankita says thank you Naren, I don't know what would've happened to me if you weren't there. Pari looks very angry at Ankita. Ankita says anyways I will get fresh Atia, I'm very tired and I have to go to a meeting. And yes Naren, please give me the Kapoor Industries file, my meeting is a little urgent. Ankita gets up to leave, Naren says yes I haven't even completed the file. Pari calls for Naren but Naren leaves the room. Pari looks extremely annoyed.

Precap: Naren and Pari are talking in their bedroom. Pari says Naren you know if breaks fail, it's impossible for anyone to be saved. You don't think at all Naren. Naren says one minute, how did you know that the car breaks failed? I didn't say anything about it and neither did Ankita.


Enjoy!😊


Edited by bhallarox - 10 years ago


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Thanks for the written update 😊

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