ArVi OS- Four Years Later // Part 2 page 10 - Page 5

Awesome update esha, very well written. the emotions were portrayed amazingly. continue soon.

Originally posted by: neha333

Hey esha that was awesome ...grtt loved it thoroughly..ohh I m loving pari and her arabi language...plzzz update soon...waiting for arvi

Ovi divorced Arjun...hope this happens in PR😡

Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-

Awesome update esha, very well written. the emotions were portrayed amazingly. continue soon.

Esha - thank you so much for this update! I know I said I'll comment before the weekend but got around to it just now 😳 Sorry!

Omg esha jst luv it..I luv evry word of dis part...Here ovi is so intelligent bt in pr she is so dumb...I wish in pr she also understands arjun like dis bt 4 get it,arjun doesnt believe purvi is dead aww jst luv him thnx dear 4 dis updt

Originally posted by: peachesnplums

Esha - thank you so much for this update! I know I said I'll comment before the weekend but got around to it just now 😳 Sorry!

Oh Esha, the knack you have for describing Arjun's anguish, his pain, his conflict - everything beautifully in character, it is wonderful.

Why is life so cruel to me?

😔

This whole scene, him driving, in tears and then in anger - I could visualize it all very well.

I'll still see love for Purvi in them. I don't want to put myself in that position Arjun.

And Ovi that I actually appreciate, for her maturity and also when she said she wants to not remain friends. Thanks for giving her self respect here. How I wish she had taken a stand even remotely similar to this. Moving away from it all when she could.

So Pari and Purvi are in Dubai...I want to see Purvi's avatar here, am sure it's nothing like those curtains she drapes.

And a sassy Pari, of course

Continue the good work when you get time.

All the best with studies 👍🏼

Originally posted by: helen_of_troy

awesome update dear

loved the concept

do PM me ur work if its possible:)

Originally posted by: Salrina_Ashvik

Omg esha jst luv it..I luv evry word of dis part...Here ovi is so intelligent bt in pr she is so dumb...I wish in pr she also understands arjun like dis bt 4 get it,arjun doesnt believe purvi is dead aww jst luv him thnx dear 4 dis updt

Eshuuu... **runs to hug her and starts crying badly** :'( eshu why ur soo amazingg.. gal ??????... Loved loved loved it alot *take a bow* aww... My kadoos Ak and his kadoos beti :-)) want to see their bonding soon... Plz reunite Arvi jeldi jeldi na *makes a puppy phace* love u alot <3