The Unforgotten Journey of Arvi Upd Pg 8,11 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Nice job Amy!
ArVi brings out the poet in us!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
amy and aathya...superb poems...👍🏼
brilliant job👏

ArVi r still together❤️
we know they r not together
their lives r not belongs to each other
their paths has changed
they r living their lives with their life partners...!!!
but they r happy ???? nooo
i can see the pain in their eyes when they see each other with their respective partners...
i can see that how much they still care for each other
i can see the happiness and spark in their eyes when they hear each other's names
i can feel that they r not happy with their life partners...
is this they deserve...
they deserve the life where they r together
but destiny...
they r not with each other today
but i feel they r still together
becoz their relation is from heart...
and DIL KA RISHTA(relation of heart) sabse pure and true hota hai...!!!
soo our ArVi r still together


and this relation will reunite them one day...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Wow...Amyy and latika and aathya..loved it...👏👏
ArVi has brought poets out of us..(not me actually,i cant write a poetry..i dont understnad how u ppl manage to right such beautiful poems...Its ArVi's magic I believe)
Loved it guys..all your poems are just beautiful..!!
Keep up with ur good work guys..love ya..🤗🤗
Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: ameilia

Arvi's magic once again brought out the poet that i never knew existed...


Honesty and trust are what build a relationship,
Something called love began with something called friendship.
With time the bond you share only grew stronger and stronger,
It was the support that protected you through every danger.
Two souls connected by the power of love,
Not forgetting humanity but holding that person above.
Someone to lend you an ear
Who knew a stranger would turn out to be someone you hold dear.
That person who can make a gloomy day look bright,
She was your queen while you were her knight.
The passion,intensity and glares you shared,
Hey you guys were in love,
That was all that you cared😭
Waking up to that wonderful face everyday,
Knowing together you both would fight all the odds that came you way😭 😭 😭 😭


Thanks for writing another beautiful one Amy 👏

Loved it, especially the parts in bold
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Lovely poem amy

Indeed arvi brings the poet out of you, after all their love itself is so poetically romantic




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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: ameilia

Arvi's magic once again brought out the poet that i never knew existed...


Honesty and trust are what build a relationship,
Something called love began with something called friendship.
With time the bond you share only grew stronger and stronger,
It was the support that protected you through every danger.
Two souls connected by the power of love,
Not forgetting humanity but holding that person above.
Someone to lend you an ear
Who knew a stranger would turn out to be someone you hold dear.
That person who can make a gloomy day look bright,
She was your queen while you were her knight.
The passion,intensity and glares you shared,
Hey you guys were in love,
That was all that you cared😭
Waking up to that wonderful face everyday,
Knowing together you both would fight all the odds that came you way😭 😭 😭 😭

wow Amyy beautiful😭 just like our ArVi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Truely ARVI have brought out the poets within ARVIANs..
Very very nice posts everyone..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
wow Amy...brilliant job dear...
loved each n every word in the poem...
p.s. sorry for late comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
too good- love the thoughts put into it!
Edited by eshaaax3. - 12 years ago

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