The Romantic/Filmy Arjun Kirloskar *COMPLETE* - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: sweetone

this is certainly one me the best SSs.
it was superb. looking forward to many more SSs ahead. thumbs up.

Thank you so much...😃

Originally posted by: shreya2094

too good!how i wish it wud never end😭but anyways it was simply superb!and u r a really very good writer👏👍🏼

Thank you so much Shreya..😃

Originally posted by: swapna99

This was ver cute and romantic. The perfect for describing our dear arvi!!!

Thank you so much Swapna(hope that's your name)😃

Originally posted by: Chani1

this was so cute, loved it 😊

Thank you so much Chani(hope that's your name)😃

Originally posted by: Ashlaika

Liked it Neha!!! Good job.

Continue soon pls! :-)

Thank you so much...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: rithika2012

sorry for late comment.. i was busy with other works so i reserved my space first...

Coming to the update.. it was superb outstanding and fantastic..👏 i loved the whole part...
The lines.. MY WIFE PURVI KIRLOSKAR were absolutely cute...😳😊 just simply loved them...❤️
Thanks neha for writing such a wonderful ss it was awesome...😊

At last the perfect family is perfectly perfect.. loved your edit tooo... Arvi are awesome and aditya is sooo cute...😳😊
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Wish to see such a family in pr but it will not happen there.. but happy that it happened here atleast...😊

Thank you so much Rithika..😃..

Originally posted by: MishAv

Oh My God...
Neha this update was simply superb, truly an amazing one...God, you're really a gifted writer...I would give you a 10/10 for this,really...After reading the future track I was just soo depress and then you gave me this update, I was just the thing which I needed, like a medicine to heal my wound...
From the start till the end it was just simply superb, the part where Arjun called Purvi My love and then he getting hurt and tried hard not to curse the barbecue pit...😆...and and he telling her that she looked divine in that saree...and him tellling to himself that Purvi is his wife and all, Purvi Kirloskar...Ohh how I wish it too be true in the real story...

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare, dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Omg, their signature song which I really love...

Arjun and Purvi are shown lying on the ground; they are looking at the sky.

"Arjun, why is the sky dark?" Purvi asked, she sounded drunk.

"Because its night Purvi, that's why it's dark'" Arjun said. I shouldn't have let her drink the wine. Arjun thought to himself. He looked at Purvi who was looking at the sky laughing.
Arjun: Why are you laughing?
Purvi: Because I can see someone.
Arjun: *woke up and sat straight* who?
Purvi: *looks at Arjun* A guy'*giggling*
Arjun: A GUY'Which guy? Who's that guy?
Purvi: My prince charming'You want to know who?
Arjun: Yes.*a little angry*
Purvi also woke up and sat straight, she signaled him to come near. Arjun went near her, Purvi tells him to show his ear and he does.
"You'" Purvi whispered in his ear. Arjun blushed when she said that, Arjun and Purvi looked at each other.
"You are blushing'" Purvi said while laughing, Arjun brushes it off, Purvi was about to fall back until Arjun hold her.
"Purvi, I don't know how to be filmy and romantic. But I do know one thing, I love and I would always love you till I die." Arjun said to Purvi while he cupped her face. Purvi on the other hand was sleeping while Arjun was talking.
"I love you Arjun." Purvi uttered in half-sleep. Arjun just smiled.
"I love you too Purvi. I love you" Arjun said as he looked at Purvi sleeping.
I loved all this part the most, especially the bolded ones...And then the part where Arjun was having fun watching Purvi figuring out whether all of it was dream or reality...😆...I had a smile while reading the update...and last but not least, the siggy which you did...😃...My god, its just perfect...I'm using it as my signature if you don't mind...😳
All I can say is a big 👏s for you my dear...the most amazing update ever...😃

Thank you so much dear, loved your long comment...and of course you can use it...😃

Originally posted by: xoxoarvi

Nice job Neha!!!

So sweet of Arjun to throw her a surprise that was so filmy!! The ending to cute... Arjun is one hot bad boy😆😳

Thank you so much...😃

Originally posted by: Pancham101

Ah the possibilities! 👏

Simply perfect.

Only conflict sells huh???????😕


Thank you so much...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: WanderingBeauty

Was waiting for you to update since God knows when!! And finally you updated!! Yippieee...*jumps up and down*

ArVi dancing to 'Dil Kyu ye Mera Shor Kare' was a treat to imagine...And the barbeque party with Arjun cooking for Purvi was so sweet...It was very much romantic and I loved it to the core...Purvi giggling and Arjun blushing...awww!! Purvi forgetting the whole scenario and thinking of it as a dream was too cute...😳

Do write more such OS's in future...Would love to read them!

Oh, thank you so much dear..thank you...😃

Originally posted by: latika_AshVik

so it was ur last update neha...!! an awesome end of an awesome OS... totally loved ur whole OS... thanx for writing and for the PM..:)

Thank you so much dear...😃

Originally posted by: PariD

Superb update Neha. Loved the Perfect Family pic Arjun, Purvi n cutie pie Aditya. Hope we will watch it in reel pr soon.😊

Thank you so much...😃

Originally posted by: jayashs

Loved it Neha... Thanks for the PM. Great ending to a Greater romantic Story! Great job!!!

Thank you so much...😃

Originally posted by: AquaNymph

read all the parts.

it's truly beautiful. and a treat. thanks for this.

Thank you so much...😃

Originally posted by: Soumya02

I hv no words 4 it babe... Bt its totaly awsm. <3 it

Thank you so much...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Author's Note

Done replying for all the comment...

First of all,I would love to thank everyone who has supported and loved my OS...I really do appreciate it a lot...Thank you to everyone who has loyally been reading my story..

Second, ..I'm overwhelmed...Such a lovely and long comments, thank you so much...And to all those Silent readers...your like was enough for me to understand how much you loved it...So thank you so much...

Note: If you wish to receive PM for my future and upcoming stories, please kindly buddy or please visit my index and hit the like button for PM list in page 3...
Here's the link for my index:
Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Fantastic, keep up the good work!

I am eagerly looking forward for more and more of your OS, FF and SS😆. Your stories are always a treat for us to read😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: NadaCinta

Fantastic, keep up the good work!


I am eagerly looking forward for more and more of your OS, FF and SS😆. Your stories are always a treat for us to read😉

Aww,,,thank you so much Di...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I am sooo sorry for this extremly late comment...Sorry dear, coming to your update...I'ved it a lot...Man you are a superb writer, this was the best ending that I've ever read, so sad that it was last but never mind, I know that you will definitely start a new arvi os soon rite, so i guess I'll wait frot it...you're the best writer and never let this talent go away from you, its really hard to come by a talented writerl like you...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Thank you, haven't gotten around to reading as yet, and wish you well in your exams.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow i juz came across ur os...its really great superb n u r very talented. i mean u were sick n havin exams n u came up wt such a great os...do pm m if u r goin to write a new os.tks n do write soon 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey neha Loved ur OS ...👏

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