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HELLO EVERYONE...THIS FF IS FOR PAVITRA RISHTA'S FANZZ !!! YOU ALL CAN CALL ME MERMAID, AS I CANT REVEAL MY REAL NAME, SO YOU ALL CAN CALL ME MERMAID...WELL THIS IS MY FIRST FAN FICTION (FF) ..HOPE YOU WILL ALL LIKE IT...I AM REALLY VERY VERY EXCITED...I HOPE YOU WILL LIKE IT...PLEASEE DONT FORGET TO COMMENT...SILIENT READERSSS PLZZZZ DO COMMENT...IF ANY SPELLING MISTAKE..THEN REALLY SORRY FOR THAT..ENJOY....
SHE'S MY LIFE
PART 1
(TODAY WAS A BIG DAY FOR DESHMUKH INDUSTRIES....DESHMUKH INDUSRTIES ARE ON NUMBER 1 POSITION...THEY HAVE EXPANDED THEIR BUSINESS AROUND THE WHOLE INDIA NOW AND WILL SOON START UP INTERNATIONALLY. TODAY IS A BIG DAY BECAUSE THEY HAVE REACHED ON NO.1 POSITIONS...AND THAT IS JUST BECAUSE OF MANAV DESHMUKH...HE JOINED HIS FATHER'S BUSINESS 5 YEARS BEFORE, AND AT THAT TIME NO ONE KNEW ABOUT DESHMUKH INDUSTRIES...HIS FATHER MR.NITIN DESHMUKH IS A PROUD FATHER...TODAY MANAV DESHMUKH HAS THROWN A FANTASTIC PARTY TO HIS STAFF AT GRAND HAYATT...HE BELIEVES THATS ITS A TEAM WORK..WITHOUT HIS COOPERATING STAFF, HIS COMPANY WOULD HAVE NEVER BEEN ON TOP...)
GRAND HAYAAT HOTEL 7:30 PM
STAFF: YAAR SIR NE KYA SHAANDAAR PARTY RAKHI HAI...
STAFF: SACH MEIN APNE SIR HAIN HI ITNE ACHEY....VAISE SIR HAIN KAHAN?ABHI TAK AAYE NAHIN?
STAFF: VO DEKHO AAGAYE HAMARE MANAV SIR .....
ENTRANCE OF "MANAV DESHMUKH"
STAFF(EVERYONE): HELLO SIR...
MANAV: HELLO EVERYONE...I HOPE YOU ALL ARE HAVING GREAT TIME?
STAFF: SIR...THANK YOU SO MUCH...FOR THIS LOVELY PARTY..
MANAV: THANKS KIS LIYE...AAJ JASHAN MANAANE KA DIN HAI..TUM SAB LOGO KI MEHNAT AUR HARDWORK KI VAJA SE AAJ HAMARI COMPANY KAHAN SE KAHAN POHANCH GAYI HAI...THANKS TO MUJHE BOLNA CHAHYE TUM SAB KO...MERI AIS CHOTI SI COMPANY KO ITNA BADA BANA DIYA TUM SABNE..
STAFF : SIR AAP HAMEIN SHARMINDA KAR RAHE HAIN....AAJ AGAR COMPANY NO.1 POSITION PE HAI TO SIRF AAP KI MEHNAT AUR LAGAN KI VAJA SE....
MANAV: SIRF MERI NAHIN...HUM SAB KI MEHNAT KI VAJA SE :) CHALO TUM LOG PARTY KA MAZA LO, MAIN BAS ABHI AAYA
STAFF: HAMARE SIR KITNE ACHEY HAIN...SERIOSLY KABHI KISI CHEEZ KA CREDIT NAHIN LETE...
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GRAND HAYATT HOTEL 8:30 PM
ENTRANCE OF "ANUJ" (MANAV'S BEST FRIEND)
MANAV: THANK GOD ! AAKHIR TUM AGAYE...
ANUJ: HAHA...(SMILED AND HUGED MANAV)
ANUJ: SO...MAIN AGAYA...
MANAV: TERA SAFAR KAISA RAHA?
(ANUJ RETURNED FROM DUBAI)
ANUJ: SAFAR TO BUHAT ZABARDAST THA YAAR...KYA AIR HOSTESS THII...UFFFFF MAT POOCHOO...
MANAV: THEEK HAI NAHIN POOCHTA..
ANUJ: IDIOT..
MANAV: ACHA YE BATA..KUCH KAAM VAAM BHI KIYA YA SIRF MASTI KI DUBAI MEIN?
ANUJ: KAAM..VO KYA CHEEZ HAI...
MANAV: BACHUU...TU NAI SUDREGA KABHI...EK NA EK DIN APNE DAD KI COMPANY KO ZAROOR DUBA DEGA..
ANUJ: ARE NAI NAI..KAAM KIYA NA ...JIS CONTRACT K LIYE GAYA THA VO MILA NA..
MANAV: SACHHH...WAHH...YE TO BUHAT ACHI BAAT HAI...JANAB NE VAHAN JAAKE CONTRACT FINALIZE KIYA..OHOO..GOOD GOOD..I AM REALLY EMPRESSED !!
ANUJ: AHEM AHEM..THANK U THANK U...VAISE YE PARTY KIS CHEEZ KI HORAHI HAI YAHAN?
MANAV: VO MAIN STAFF MEMBERS KO PARTY THROW KI HAI, AUNKI MEHNAT AUR LAGAN KI VAJA SE DESHMUKH COMPANY IS ON TOP TODAY...
ANUJ: ACHA...THATS COOL YAAR...
(MANAV AND ANUJ NE DINNER KIYA PARTY MEIN...PARTY BUHAT HI BARHIYA THI..SAB LOG KHUSH THE...)
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MANAV DRIVING THE CAR 2:30 AM
ANUJ: YAAR..VAHAN DUBAI MEIN MAIN EK LADKI SE MILA..
MANAV: ACHA...TELL ME SOMETHING NEW..
ANUJ: NAHIN YAAR..AIS BAAR SERIOSLY BOL RAHA HOON..
MANAV: U SERIOS? (QUESTIONED HIM CURIOUSLY)
ANUJ: YES...
MANAV: KON HAI? DESI YA VEDESI...YOU LOVE HIM?
ANUJ: DESI..INDIAN HAI...WORKS IN DUBAI...YAAR I THINK I AM IN LOVE..SHAYAD SHE IS MY TRUE LOVE...
(MANAV WAS LISTENING HIM SILENTLY..HE COULDN'T BELIEVE THAT PEOPLE LIKE ANUJ CAN FALL IN LOVE)
ANUJ: TU CHUP KYUN HAI?
MANAV: KUCH NAHIN...JUST SUN RAHA HOON TUMHARI BAAT...YAQEEN NAHIN ARAHA K TUJHE PYAAR HOGAYA HAI..
ANUJ: KYUN??? SIRF TUJHE PYAAR HOSAKTA HAI..MUJHE NAHIN?? (JALDY JALDY MEIN AUSKE MUU SE YE LAFZ NIKAL GAYE)
(MANAV GOT REALLY UPSET...HE GOT SILENT, ANUJ REALIZE THIS THING QUICKLY)
ANUJ: HEY...I AM REALLY SORRY...MAIN TUJHE VO SAB YAAD NAHIN DILANA CHAHTA THA, BAS MERE MUU SE NIKAL GAYA..REALLY SORRY..(MANAV K KANDHEY PE HAATH RAKH KE KAHA AUSNE..WHILE MANAV WAS DRIVING CAR)
MANAV: ITS OKAY...TERA GHAR AGAYA...(HE STOPPED CAR)
ANUJ: THANKS...(HE GOT OUT OF THE CAR)
ANUJ: CHALO GOODNITE..MILTEY HAIN PHIR KAL
(ANUJ APNE GHAR K ANDAR CHALA GAYA....WHILE MANAV VAHIN GAARI MEIN BETHA RAHA KUCH DEER...KISI DEEP SOCH MEIN THA MANAV...BUHAT UDAAS AND SAD LAG RAHA THA...KUCH DEER BAAD MANAV NE GAARI START KI AUR VAHAN SE NIKAL GAYA....)
(WHILE DRIVING VO BUHAT UPSET THA, VO BAAR BAAR STEERING KO APNE EK HAATH SE MUKKA MAAR RAHA THA..JAISE SAARA GUSSA AUSPE NIKAL RAHA HO...MANAV NE GAARI EK NIGHT CLUB K BAHAR PARK KI, AND ANDAR JAAKE HE GOT FULLY DRUNKED...WHENEVER HE IS UPSET HE GETS DRUNK...VO APNE GUM KO SHARAAB K ZARYE BHULAANA CHAHTA THA)
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BEACH 4:30AM
(MANAV DRIVED HIS CAR ON A BEACH....HE WAS DRUNKED !! HE STOPPED HIS CAR ASIDE..VO GAARI K BAHAR NIKLA, AUSKE HAATH MEIN STILL EK BOTTLE THI SHARAAB KI...HE CAME NEAR WATER...HE WAS SILIENT...AND DRINKING AND DRINKING AND DRINKING...BOTTLES FINISHES...HE THROW IN THE WATER...HE GOT SOME OLD MEMORIES IN HIS MIND....HIS EYES WERE IN TEARS NOW...HE WAS CRYING...NOW HARDER....VO BUHAT BURI TARAH ROO RAHA THA...AND APNE AAP SE CHILLA CHILLA KAR BOL RAHA THA " WHY ME !!! KYUNNN....YE MERE SAATH HI KYUNNN !!! ")
(MANAV WAS VERY DEPRESSED...VO UDHAR EK SIDE PE BETH GAYA...AND PANI KI TARAF DEKHNE LAGA CHUP CHAAP...AUSKI AANKHO SE AANSU NIKAL RAHE THE.....VO PURAANI YAADO KO YAAD KARTEY HUE ROO RAHA THA...KYA HAIN VO PURANI YAADEIN? KYA HAI VO ATEET?? MANAV APNE PURAANE DIN KO YAAD KARNE LAGA.....(FLASHBACKS...)
2 YEARS BEFORE ......(FLASHBACK)
TINA'S PHONE RINGS...TRING TRING...TRING TRING..
TINA: HELLO...
MANAV: HELLO...
TINA: HMMM...
MANAV: KYA HMMM...YE HMMM KYA HOTA HAI...
TINA: KUCH NAHIN... :) KYA BAAT HAI...RAAT K 3 BAJE CALL KIYA TUMNE?
MANAV: KYUN...KYA MAIN APNI HONE VALI MANGETAR KO CALL BHI NAHIN KARSAKTA AB KYA?
TINA: AAHAAN...JEE JANAB BILKUL KAR SAKTEY HAIN..
MANAV: APNI BALCONY MEIN AAO..
TINA: WHAT???
MANAV: AREYY SAWAL MAT POOCHO AUR AAO BALCONY MEIN BAS...
TINA: MANAV...!!! (SHE WAS SHOCKED)
(TINA BALCONY MEIN GAYI...MANAV NEECHEY KHARA THA APNI CAR K BAHAR...MANAV NE EK FLYING KISS PHENKA TINA KO...ABHI BHI PHONE CHALU THA)
TINA: MANAV...TUM YAHAN KYA KAR RAHE HO...AUR VO B ITNI RAAT KO...
MANAV: AREEY ..2 DIN BAAD HAMARI SAGAI HAI..SAGAI SE PEHLE MILNE KA JO MAZA HAI...VO TO
TINA: BAS BAS...AB JAO YAHAN SE..
MANAV: MAIN TUMHE LENE AYA HOON..
TINA: MANAV TUM PAGAL TO NAHIN HOGAYE...?
MANAV: HAAN !! PAGAL HOGAYA HOON...TUMHARE PYAAR MEIN :)
TINA: UFF...TUM KABHI NAHIN SUDHROGE...
MANAV: BAHAR AAO...TUMHARE LIYE KUCH SURPRISE HAI...
TINA: LEKIN ...
(SHE WAS SCARED K AUSKI MOM NA UTH JAYE...AUSKI MOM BUHAT ACHI HAIN,KABHI MANA NAI KARENGI TINA KO MANAV SE MILNE K LIYE..LEKIN TINA KO EMBARASSMENT HORAHI THI....VO BUHAT ZADA SHY HAI...
TINA K FATHER KI DEATH 3 SAAL PEHLE HO CHUKI HAI...TINA EK FASHION DESIGNER HAI)
MANAV: LEKIN VEKIN KUCH NAHIN..NEECHEY AAO BAS..
TINA: OKAY
(TINA NEECHEY UTRI...MANAV NE TINA KA HAATH APNE HAATH MEIN PAKRA AUR AUSKE HAATH KO KISS KIYA...TINA SMILED WITH SHY...MANAV NE GAARI KA DARWAZA KHOLA AUR KAHA K " ANDAR BETHO " )
(TINA FRONT SEAT PE BETHI..MANAV BHI BETHA AUR GAARI START KI, TINA BUHAT CONFUSE THI K MANAV KAHAN LE JARAHA HAI..MANAV BUHAT ROMANTIC MOOD MEIN THA..HE WANTED TO GIVE HER SOME SURPRISE..)
TINA: HUM KAHAN JARAHE HAIN?
MANAV: BAS DEKHTI JAO...
TINA: UFFFOOO...BATA BHI DO,.
MANAV: ACHA THEEK HAI..EK KISS DEDO, TO BATA DOONGA...(HE SAID IN A NAUGHTY WAY)
TINA: HUH...
MANAV: HAHA !!
(MANAV NE AAKHIR KAAR EK JAGA GAARI STOP KI...YE JAGA THI, MANAV KA FARM HOUSE...DONO GAARI SE UTREY KO FARM HOUSE K ANDAR GAYE..MANAV NE TINA KI AANKHON PE PATTI BAANDH DI..)
TINA: MAIN GIRR JAUGI...UFFOO
MANAV: NAHIN GIROGI..MAIN HOON NA..(MANAV NE EK HAATH AUSKA PAKRA THA, AUR DOSARA HAATH AUSKE SHOULDER PE RAKHA THA BUHAT PYAAR SE)
MANAV: BAS HUM AAGYE AB...(MANAV NE DHEERE SE AUSKI PATTI KHOLI)
(TINA NE APNI AANKHEN KHOLI TO DEKHA K POORA FARM HOUSE PHOOLO AUR TEDDY BEARS SE SAJA THA,,,HAR TARAF CANDLES N FLOWERS THE..AAJ TINA KA BIRTHDAY THA...FARM HOUSE MEIN EK BADA SA CAKE BHI RAKHA THA...LEKIN YE DONO VAHAN AKELE THEY..AUR KOI BHI NAHIN THA)
TINA: OMG !! MANAV...TUMHE YAAD THA...(AUSNE MANAV KI AANKHO MEIN DEKHA...SHE WAS SO TOUCHED BY ALL THIS..MANAV KI AANKHON MEIN JAISE VO KHOO SI GAYI..EK AJEEB SI CHAMAK THI MANAV KI AANKHON MEIN...)
MANAV: AB BAS DEKHTI HI RAHOGI MUJHE YA CAKE BHI KATOGI...
TINA: THANK YOU MANAV...THANK U SO MUCH..( HER EYES WERE IN TEARS..SHE HUGED MANAV SO TIGHTLY..THEY BOTH HUGED EACH OTHER SO TIGHTLY...FOR ABOUT 5 MINUTIES, VO EK DOSARE SE CHIPKE RAHE..)
MANAV: HEY..TUM ROO KYU RAHI HO..
TINA: KUCH NAHIN...I AM SO HAPPY TODAY..MAIN KITNI KHUSH KISMAT HOON...MERI ZINDAGI MEIN TUM AAYE..JO MUJHE ITNA PYAAR KARTA HAI...(THEY STILL WERE HUGED EACH OTHER AND TALKING)
MANAV: HEY PAGAL...AESE ROOTEY NAI..I CANT SEE TEARS IN UR EYES..(HE KISSED HIS FOREHEAD WITH LOTS OF LOVE AND AFFECTION)
TINA: KYA TUM HAMESHA MUJHSE ITNA HI PYAAR KARTE RAHOGE?
MANAV: NAHIN..
TINA: :(
MANAV: ITNA HI NAHIN KARUGA....BALKE AISSE ZADA KARUGA...(AUSKA EK EK LAFZ TINA K HEART KO TOUCH KAR RAHA THA)
(TINA KISSED MANAV ON HIS CHEEK...)
MANAV: ITNE SE KAAM NAHIN CHALEGA...(HE ASKED IN A NAUGHTY WAY)
TINA: ACHA...TO KITNE SE CHALEGA?(SHE SMILED)
MANAV: PAAS AAO..BATATA HOON..
(MANAV NE TINA KA HAATH PAKRA AUR APNE KAREEB LEKE AAYA AUSE...DONO KE FACE EK DAM KAREEB KAREEB THE AB...DONO EK DOSARE KI AANKHO MEIN DEKH RAHE THE..DONO KE DIL MEIN EK DOSARE K LIYE BEINTEHA MOHABBAT HAI...TINA SMILED AND SHARMA KE AUSNE APNI AANKHEN JHUKA LI...MANAV AHISTA AHISTA AUSKE BILKUL NAZDEEK GAYA...AUR AUSKE ROSY LIPS KO CHOOOM LIYA...THEY BOTH KISSED EACH OTHER WITH LOVE AND PASSION...KISSED..KISSED AND KISSED...THATS WAS A ADORABLE MOMENT FOR BOTH OF THEM...THEY KISSED FOR 1 MINUTE...DONO NE AAKHIR KISS FINISH KI AUR APNI APNI AANKHEN KHOLI..TINA SHARMA KE PALAT GAI...AUSNE APNA MUU CHUPA DIYA...BECAUSE SHE COULDN'T FACE MANAV...AS SHE IS VERY SHY..)
(MANAV AUSKE KAREEB GAYA...MANAV NE PEECHEY SE AUSKE SHOULDER PE HAATH RAKHA...TINA NE APNI AANKHEN BAND KARLI...MANAV NE PEECHEY SE AUSKE SHOULDER PE KISS KIYA...TINA WAS ENJOYING THIS..BUT...)
TINA: MANAV PLEASE....( SHE SUDDENT TOLD...)
MANAV: KYA HUA?
TINA: KUCH NAHIN BAS..VO MAIN...(SHE WAS SMILING AND BLUSHING..)
MANAV: AGAR MAINE KUCH GALAT KIYA..TO I AM REALLY SORRY...(HE WAS AFRAID K KAHIN TINA KO BURA TO NAHIN LAGA)
TINA: NAHIN MANAV...AESA KUCH NAI..(SHE WAS HAPPY BY THAT KISS)
MANAV: ACHA CHALO AB CAKE KAAT LO...
TINA: HMMM...
(TINA NE CAKE KAATA AUR MANAV KO KHILAYA...DONO NE EK DOSARE KO HUG KIYA)
(BUHAT DEER TAK DONO NE BAATEIN KI...PHIR SUBHA HONE LAGI THI...)
TINA: MANAV...6AM BAJ GAYE...MUJHE GHAR JANA HAI AB..PLEASE
MANAV: HAAN SURE..CHALO..
(MANAV NE GAARI START KI AUR TINA KO GHAR DROP KIYA..)
TINA: BYE..AND THANKS FOR THIS LOVELY SURPRISE...YE BIRTHDAY MERI LIFE KA SABSE BEST BIRTHDAY THA..
MANAV: :) LOVE YOU..
TINA: ME TOO...BYE
MANAV: BYE
END OF PART 1
THANKS ALOT FOR READING....THIS IS MY FIRST FF, SO PLEASE DO COMMENT..PLEASE... NEGATIVE/POSITIVE ALL COMMENTS ARE WELCOME...SO THAT I CAN IMPROVE IN MY WRITINGS...SILIENT READER PLZZZ COMMENT...AS IT MAKES ME FEEL ON TOP OF THE WORLD...PLEASE DONT FORGET TO COMMENT....DO TELL ME WHICH SCENE U LIKED AND DISLIKED...THANKU SO MUCH...THOSE WHO WANT THE PARTS BY EMAIL OR ANYTHING, DO LET ME KNOW...FROM, MERMAID
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SHE'S MY LIFE
PART 2
TINA AND HER MOM SHOPPING IN THE MALL 4:30
TINA: Maa...ab chaley??? Main thak gayi hoon...ghar jana hai mujhe...(SHE WAS TIRED)
MAA (KAJAL VERMA)
MAA: Beta...bas hogaya...
TINA: Itni shopping ki kya zaroorat hai maa...main nahin chahti k aap itna kharcha karo sagai pe...simple sa bhi kar saktey hain hum...apni haisiyat k mutabik??
MAA: Beta....Mere buhat arMANAV hai k main tumhari saigai aur shaadi khub dhoom dhaam se karu..koi kami na choru...ek dam princess ki tarah vidaa karu tumhe..tumhare papa ko bhi tumhari shadi k kitney arMANAV the....lekin...yahin samjh lo k main aunke arMANAV poore kar rahi hoon.....
TINA: Hmmm...aap ko pata hai aap dunya ki sabse achi mom ho...(SHE GAVE HER A TIGHT HUG WITH A BIG SMILE)
MAA: Aur tu dunya ki sabse achi beti !!!
TINA: :)
(TINA MOBILE RANG...IT WAS HER MA'M, WHERE SHE WORKS AS ASSISTANT(FASHION DESIGHNING)
TINA: YES MA'M....haan ma'm vo maine sab taiyaar kar diya hai...jee ma'am...i will be there in 15mins..
TINA: Maa...kuch zaroori kaam hai..main chalti hoon..aap taxi mein ajana ghar...ok?
Maa: haan beta...main ajau gi..dont worry..tum jao..
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TINA REACHED AT HER OFFICE (A FASHION DESIGNER BOTIQUE )
(SHE WORKS WITH FAMOUS DESIGNER WHO LAUNCHES HER COLLECTION EVRY WEEK ON RAMP)
TINA: GOOD EVENING MA'AM
MA'AM (MAYA)
MAYA: Hey...thank god tum aagayi shweety...
(MAYA BUHAT HI ACHI LADY HAI. TINA KO BUHAT HI ACHI, MATURE, AND SENSIBLE BOSS MILI, JO HAMESHA TINA KI BUREY VAQT MEIN MADAD BHI KARTI HAI)
TINA: Ma'am..ye leejiye...sab taiyaar hai...maine organizers se bhi baat karli hai, aur projects bhi aaj khud dekh k aayi hu main, sab set hai...next week hamara show top hoga...aap dekhiyega...
MAYA: I hope so TINA..hey..main to bhool hi gayi..kal to tumhari sagai haina...OMG...aur maine tumhe aaj office bula liya
TINA: No problem ma'am, vaise bhi sab taiyaari ho chuki hai... :)
MAYA: So you nervous?excited?
TINA: BOTH !! HAHA !! (giggled)
MAYA: Seriously, i am so happy for you !! Arey haan...ek cheez aur bhool gayi main..
TINA: Kya Ma'am ?
MAYA: Happy birthday !!! This is for you !!
(MAYA NE EK GIFT DIYA AUSE)
TINA: Thank you so much ma'am !!
(ACHANAK BAHAR HORN KI AWAAZ AANE LAGI..KOI ZOR ZOR SE HORN MAAR RAHA THA...MAYA AND TINA DONO BAHAR GAYI DEKHNE, IT WAS MANAV !!! )
MAYA: AWWW...!!! TINA i think u should go !!! jao jao !! kal tumhari sagai hai..go and have some fun today with your boyfriend !!! phir to vo fiance ban jaye ga !! haha
(TINA SMILED AND SAID " MA'AM AAP BHI NA.."
MAYA: Now dont waste time and go !!
TINA: Thank you ma'am !!
(TINA NE DOOR SE MANAV KO ISHAARA KIYA "AARAHI HOON WAIT !! "
(TINA BAHAR NIKLI AUR GAARI MEIN BETH GAYI...MANAV START DRIVING)
TINA: So....
MANAV: So....
TINA: MANAV !! (SAWAALIYA ANDAAZ SE KEHNE LAGI)
MANAV: TINA !! (TRYING TO COPY HER...WITH A ROMANTIC WAY )
TINA: STOP IT NAA..(CHIR KE BOLI)
MANAV: ok..ok...(smiled with a naughty way)
TINA: Kahan leke jarahe ho mujhe?
MANAV: bas 2mins ruko..khud hi pata chal jayega !!
TINA: Tumhari yahi aadat mujhe buhat buri lagti hai...
MANAV: Konsi aadat?
TINA: Suspence rakhne vali !!!
MANAV: hmmm...(VO EK DAM KHAMOSH RAHA..BAS HMMM KARKE RESPONSE DIYA....HE LOVES TEASING TINA)
TINA: Kya hmmm....kya hogaya hai tumhe?? (SHE WAS CONFUSE..)
MANAV: Ye lo..agai hamari manzil !!!
(MANAV NE EK JEWELLERY SHOWROOM K BAHAR GAARI PARK KI)
MANAV: Chaley ander??
TINA: HMMMM.....
(MANAV TINA KO SAGAI KI RING PASAND KARAANE LAYA THA)
MANAV: Excuse me !! hamein kuch diamond rings dikhaye !! (SAID TO SALEMAN)
(TINA WAS VERY TOUCHED AND HAPPY...SHE DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS IN WORDS, SO SHE WAS QUIET )
MANAV: Kya hua? Aese kyun dekh rahi ho mujhe? (TINA WAS STARING AT HIM)
TINA: Kuch nahin...(Said with a big smile)
(MANAV WAS CONFUSE...)
TINA APNE DIL MEIN KEHNE LAGI, " THANK U GOD !! AAPNE MUJHE MANAV JAISA PYAAR KARNE VALA DIYA...MAIN SACH MEIN BUHAT KHUSH KISMAT HOON JO MANAV MERI ZINDAGI MEIN AYA"
MANAV: Kuch kaha tumne??
TINA: Nahin to...
MANAV: Ye dekho...kitni achi hai ye ring?? u liked this??
TINA: Yeah ..thats good...but....ummm...vo dekho...vo zada achi hai..
MANAV: Konsi?
TINA: Ye dekho...ek dam simple and lovely !!
MANAV: mujhe bhi yahi pasand aayi thi... :)
TINA: Acha jee...(said with a smile)
SALESMAN: SIR, HAMARE PAAS KUCH LATEST DESIGNS BHI AAYI HAI...
MANAV: YEAH, SHOW ME...
(MANAV AUR TINA KAFI DEER TAK AUS SHOP PE THE...AAKHIR KAAR RING PASAND HUI...AUR MANAV NE VO RING KHAREEDI TINA K LIYE...)
MANAV: Ek min zara haath dikhaana..
(TINA NE APNA HAATH AAGE KIYA...MANAV NE PEHLE AUSKE HAATH KO CHUMA AUR PHIR SAGAI KI UGLI MEIN RING PEHNAI..)
MANAV: UMMM...fit hai...(smiled)
TINA: HMMM...(SHE WAS HAPPY AND SHY)
(MANAV AGAIN KISSED ON HER HANDS....WITH SO MUCH OF LOVE AND PASSION....TINA FELT LIKE SOMETHING CURRENT IN HER BODY, WHENEVER MANAV KISSES HER..EK AJEEB SI FEELING HOTI HAI TINA KO)
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MANAV AT HOME DINNER TIME 10PM
(MANAV'S MOTHER AS NAINA DESHMUKH, FATHER AS NITIN DESHMUKH)
(MANAV,HIS MOTHER AND FATHER WAS HAVING DINNER)
MOM: Did u bought ring?
MANAV: Yeah mom...i did...
(MANAV's mother is a mordern lady,she owns an charity organization)
(MANAV,MOM AND DAD HAD SOME CONVERSTION ON DINNER TIME AS USUAL)
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HOTEL SHERETON 7:30 PM
(ENGAGEMENT CEREMONY OF MANAV AND TINA)
(EVERYONE HAD ARRIVED, MANAV AND HIS FAMILY, TINA AND HER MOTHER AND THEIR CLOSE FRIENDS AND RELATVIES....TINA WAS WEARING A PINK GOWN,IT WAS KIND OF MAXI...WITH SILVER WORK DONE ON IT...WITH STONES SHINING...SHE WAS LOOKING LIKE A CUTEE PRINCESS !!! AND MANAV WAS WEARING A SUIT...OFCOURSE BLACK...HE WAS LOOKING A GENTLEMAN...VERY VERY HANDSOME AND SMART !! MANAV AND TINA WERE A PERFECT JODI...THEY BOTH COMPLIMENT EACHOTHER..BEAUTIFUL COUPLE..ALL THE FRIENDS AND RELATIVES WERE SO HAPPY TO SEE THEM..EACH AND EVERY GUEST SAID,"THEY LOOK GORGEOUS TOGETHER")
MANAV SAW TINA, WHEN HE ENTERED THE HALL, TINA NE APNI AANKHEN JHUKA LI SHARMA KEY...HE CAME NEAR TO HER...ON THER OTHER HAND, TINA'S MOTHER GREETED MANAV'S FAMILY....MANAV CAME CLOSER TO TINA..AND WHISPERED "HEY PRINCESS"
TINA: Princess?? ahaan...
MANAV: Uff...tum buhat khubsoorat lag rahi ho...(said slowly)
TINA: Lekin tum achey nahin lag rahe...(trying to tease him)
MANAV: Kya??(asked in a shocking way)
TINA: Maine kaha k tum achey nahin lag rahe...behrey hogaye ho kya?
(MANAV MAKED AN SAD FACE LIKE A SMALL CHILD....WHILE TINA TRYING TO CONTROL HER LAUGH...VO BAAR BAAR APNE LIPS KO PRESS KAR RAHI THI...)
TINA: Tum achey nahin..buhat achey lag rahe ho... :)
(TINA COULDN'T TEASE HER ANYMORE...AS SHE CANT SEE HIM SAD....MANAV AND TINA HAD A BIG DAY TODAY AND THEY BOTH WERE REALLY VERY HAPPY AND EXCITED)
MANAV: Acha jee...Mere saath reh reh k tumhara sence of humour acha hogaya hai...(said with a lil smile)
TINA: Jee janab !!
MANAV: hmmm... ab to mera dil kar raha hai aaj sagai nahin...direct shadi hi kar lete hain...
TINA: Arey....itni jaldy hai tumhe...abhi shadi ko 1 month bacha hai..sabar rakho bachuu..
MANAV: Hayee ye ek month kaise guzreyga...kambhakt pandit ne agley week ki date kyun nahin nikaali...
TINA: haha !!
MANAV: Kahin tumne pandit ko pese to nahin khilaye...(bare hi pyaar aur sataane vale andaaz se poocha)
TINA: Shayad !! (apne lips ko press karte kartey kaha)
MANAV: Ahaan...to kyun na main pese deke agley week hi date fix karwa lu...
TINA: Ufff...tum kabhi nahin sudhroge...
(TINA'S MOM AND MANAV'S PARENTS CAME THERE)
MANAV DAD: Beta...chalo sagai ki rasam kar ley..
TINA'S MOM: Haan chalo...
(AFTER SO MUCH OF INTAZAAR..AAKHIR KAAR VO TIME AAGAYA JISKA DONO KO BESABRI SE INTAZAAR THA...MANAV NE TINA KO RING PEHNAI...AUR CHUPKE SEY AUSKO EK HALKI SE AANKH MAARI...EK DAM SHARAARTI ANDAAZ MEIN...NEXT TINA NE AUSSE RING PEHNAI...AND THEY BOTH GOT ENGAGED...)
(SAB GUESTS NE DINNER KIYA...PARTY WAS ALMOST FINISH...SIRF MANAV KI FAMILY AND TINA KI MOM BACHEY THE)
(MANAV NE TINA KI MOM SE AUSSE BAHAR LONG DRIVE PE LEKE JANE KI PERMISSION LI...AUR MANAV AUR TINA DONO GAARI MEIN BETHEY...RAAT KE 12 BAJE THE...)
NEXT SCENE
(MANAV AND TINA IN THE CAR..MANAV WAS DRIVING)
MANAV: Ek baat poochu?
TINA: hmm...poocho..
MANAV: Jab hum first time mile the...at the friends party....what did u really thought abt me?
TINA: Sach kahu?
MANAV: Ofcourse !
TINA: You were so cute..and honest ..i mean varna ek ladka tryies to impress a girl with fake things like..u knw what i mean...lekin tumse jab main first time mili, tab bhi tum same the aur aaj bhi...i mean you are urself...koi dikhaava ya naatak nahin...you are honest and no fake dikhava...and thats why..
MANAV: Thats why what?
TINA: Thats why i love you so much !!! tum mere dream boy ho..maine hamesha god se tum jaisa pyaar karne vala MANAVga tha..tum jaisa life partner MANAVga....
MANAV: Bas bas..ab itni zada tareef na karo meri...channey k jhaar pe char jauga..
TINA: HAHA !! (SHE HUGEG HIM...WHILE HE WAS DRIVING..)
(MANAV STOPED THE CAR ON ONE SIDE...VAHAN AAS PAAS BUHAT SANNATA THA)
TINA: Kya hua..gaari kyun rok di...
MANAV: Arey bhai...mera mind divert horaha hai..kahin accident na hojaye...(she was still in his arms..)
(THEY BOTH HUGED EACH OTHER TIGHTLY...MANAV KISSED HER ON HER FOREHEAD !!)
MANAV: I LOVE YOU !!!
TINA: I LOVE YOU TOO !!!
(MANAV WAS ABOUT TO KISS HER ON HER LIPS....BUT SUDDENLY SOMEONE KNOCKED AT THE CAR'S WINDOW...THEY BOTH GOT ON THEIR POSITIONS BACK...HE OPENED THE WINDOW...THERE WERE 5 GUYS STANDING OUTSIDE WITH KNIFE AND GUNS)
GUY 1: COME OUT OF CAR !! OTHERWISE I WILL SHOOT YOU
(TINA GOT REALLY SCARED...!!)
TINA: OMG !! MANAV...(SHE WAS ABOUT TO CRY ANYTIME)
MANAV: Relax TINA...dont worry...kuch nahin hoga...tum car ke ander hi bethi raho...let me handle this...
(MANAV GAARI SE BAHAR UTRA...BUT TINA WAS STILL IN THE CAR...)
GUY 2: TAKE OUT THE MONEY...JEWELLERY,PHONE OR WHATEVER U HAVE...
MANAV: Ok..ok...(MANAV thought that by giving all those things to them, can get both of them safe...as they had knifes and guns...he cannot take any risks by messing up with them..)
(MANAV NE APNE SAARE PESE, MOBILE AND EVRYTHNG DE DIYA AUSKO...)
GUY 3: LADKI KO BAHAR NIKALO...TAKE OUT HER JEWELLERY...
(MANAV WAS GOING TO TINA..LEKIN AUSSE PEHLE EK GUY NE TINA KA HAATH PAKAR K AUSSE GAARI SE BAHAR NIKAALA...MANAV WAS SCARED NOW...TINA MANAV K PAAS AAKE KHAARI HOGAYI...)
GUY 4: Jaldy nikalo sab jewellery fast !!!
(TINA K HAATH KAANP RAHE THE...SHE WAS TAKING OUT THE JEWELLERY..MANAV WAS FEELING USELESS THAT TIME...HE COULDN'T DO ANYTHING, BECOZ HE DONT WANTED TO TAKE ANY RISKS...AS THEY WERE HAVING WEAPONS.. )
GUY 5: Ahaan...aaj to khoob maal haath laga hai..aisse 6months guzar jayenge apne...
MANAV: Le liya jo tum logo ko chahye tha...ab jane do hamein...(he was worried for TINA...not for himself...TINA ne ausko tightly pakar rakha tha...as she was very very scared !! vo buri tarah se kaanp rahi thi...MANAV can easily feel that...MANAV was telling her again and again "relax..kuch nai hoga"
GUY 1: Aese kaise jaane dey...abhi ek cheez baki hai...
MANAV: kya? (MANAV was confuse that what are they talking about?)
(3 GUYS AIN DONO KE KAREEB GAYE...TINA MANAV KE PEECHEY CHUPNE KI KOSHISH KAR RAHI THI...AS SHE WAS AFRAID OF THEM...3 LARKEY AAYE AUR MANAV KO ZOR KA DHAKKA DIYA...MANAV ZAMEEN PE GIRR GAYA...AUR EK LADKE NE TINA KO PAKAR LIYA...TINA ZOR SE CHEEKHI..."MANAV" !!! MANAV ZAMEEN SE UTHTA AUSSE SE PEHLE 4 LADKO NE AUSKI PITAI SHURU KAR DI...JAISE TAISE MANAV KHARA HUA AUR TINA TAK JAANE LAGA..TINA KO EK LADKE NE PAKAR RAKHA THA...MANAV NE AUN 4 LARKO SE REQUEST KI K TUMHE JO CHAHYE LELO..JITNA PESA CHAYE...LEKIN TINA KO CHORR DO...LEKIN VO LADKEY BUHAT ZAALIM THE...PHIRSE MANAV KO MAARNA SHURU KAR DIYA...LEKIN AB AIS BAAR BAAT HAADH SE AAGE BAR CHUKI THI, MANAV NE AUNKA BAHADURI SE SAAMNA KIYA..AUR VO BHI ACHA KHASA AUNKE SAATH FIGHT KARNE LAGA...AUSSE KISI BHI HAAL MEIN TINA KO AUN LADKO SE BACHANA THA...HE START FIGHTING WITH THEM...LEKIN AFSOOS..ACHANAK EK LADKEY NE MANAV KE PEET (STOMACH) MEIN CHAAKU MAAR DIYA...AND HE START BLEEDING VERY BADLY...)
TINA: MANAV !!! (Vo zor se chillai...apne aap ko aus aadmi se churaane ki buhat koshish ki...lekin vo churaa na payi...auske aankh mein aansuu the)
(MANAV WAS IN PAIN AND BLEEDING...VO ZAMEEN PE GIR PARA...AUSNE APNE EK HAATH SE APNE STOMACH KO PAKRA..JAHAN SE KHOON NIKAL RAHA THA..LEKIN ABHI BHI AUSNE HAAR NAHIN MANAVI THI...VO JAISE TAISE KARKE PHIRSE KHARA HUA TINA KO BACHAANE K LIYE...VO KHARA HUA AUR BUHAT KOSHISH KI...LEKIN AUSKE RIGHT SHOULDER PE EK LADKEY NE SHOOT KAR DIYA...VO PHIRSE ZAMEEN PE GIRR PARA AUR BEHOSH HOGAYA..)
(MANAV BURI TARAH SE ZAKHMI THA..EK SHOULDER PE GOLI LAGI THI AUR STOMACH MEIN CHAKUU KA ZAKHAM...)
TINA: MANAV !!!! MANAV !!! (Vo chillati rahi lekin MANAV behosh ho chuka tha)
(TINA KO VO 5 LARKEY GHASEET K LEKE GAYE...VO KEHNE LAGI "PLEASE MUJHE CHOR DO PLEASE" AUNHO NE AUSKI EK NA SUNI...AUSE JHAARIYO (TREE) K PEECHEY LEKE GAYE..AUR EK EK KARKE AUSKA RAPE KIYA...VO CHEEKHTI RAHI CHILLATI RAHI..LEKIN AUN LADKO NE AUSKI NAHIN SUNI...AUR AUSKI IZZAT LOOT LI...AUSKA BURA HAAL KAR DIYA...BURI TAREEQE SE AUSKA RAPE KIYA...AUR VAHAN SE BHAAG GAYE...TINA ROO RAHI THI...AUSKI ZINDAGI JAISE EK PAL MEIN KHATAM HO GAI HO...AUSSE SAMJH NAHIN ARAHA THA K VO KYA KARE ...BARI MUSHKIL SE VO GAARI TAK POHNCHI...AUSNE MANAV KO DEKHA...ZOR ZOR SE ROONE LAGI..AUSKE PAAS GAYI..)
TINA: MANAV !!! MANAV !! UTHO MANAV...(AUSSE UTHANE KI KOSHISH KARNE LAGI, APNE HAATHO SE AUSE HILAANE LAGI)
(MANAV BEHOSH THA, AUSKI SAANS CHAL RAHI THI...TINA NE AUSE JAISE TAISE KARKE GAARI MEIN BETHAYA AUR HOSPITAL LEKE GAYI...AUSSE HOPITAL MEIN ADMIT KARWAYA...)
1 HOUR LATER...HOSPITAL 3:30AM
TINA: DOCTOR...MANAV KAISA HAI AB...
DOCTOR: OPERATION KAMYAAB RAHA..AB VO KHATREY SE BAHAR HAI...
(TINA NE RAAHAT KI SAANS LI...LEKIN JO KUCH BHI AAJ AUSKE SAATH HUA..AUSKE BAAD VO AIS DUNYA MEIN NAHIN JEENA CHAHTI THI...AUSSE APNE AAP SE NAFRAT HONE LAGI THI..VO EK DAM TOOT CHUKI THI..JEENE KI KHUWAHISH HI NAHIN BACHI THI AUS MEIN..AIS LIYE AUSNE EK KHAT LIKHA AUR VAHAN EK NURSE THI, AUSE VO KHAT DE DIYA AUR KAHA,"YE LETTER TUM MANAV KO DE DENA, JAB AUNHE HOSH AAJAYE..AUR YE AINKE GHAR KA NUMBER HAI..PLZ PHONE KARKE AINKE GHAR WALO KO BATA DENA.."
NURSE: OKAY...
(TINA NE LETTER AUR NUMBER NURSE KO DE DIYA...AUR MANAV K ROOM K BAHAR KHARI HO KE ROONE LAGI...MANAV ICU MEIN THA..AUSSE OXYGEN MASK LAGA THA...ANDER JANA MANA THA..AISI LIYE TINA NE AUSSE BAHAR SE HI DEKHA AUR APNE DIL MEIN KEHNE LAGI,"mujhe maaf kardena MANAV..mujhe maaf kardena.." YE KEH K VO VAHAN SE CHALI GAYI...
NEXT SCENE
AFTER 1 DAY....AT HOSPITAL 11AM
(MANAV KA HATH DHEERE SE HILA HALKA SA...AUSNE DHEERE DHEERE SE APNI AANKHEIN KHOLI...AAKHIR KAAR AUSKO HOSH AGAYA...JAISE HI AUSNE APNI AANKHEN KHOLI, AUS KE SAAMNE AUSKI MOM AND DAD THE..AUR TINA KI MAA..JO PHOOT PHOOT K ROO RAHI THI..)
(MANAV KO JAISE HI HOSH AYA, AUSNE APNE AAS PAAS TINA KO DHOODNE KI KOSHISH KI...AUSKI HAALAT UTH KE BETHNE JAISI BHI NAHIN THI...PHIR BHI AUSNE KOSHISH KI BED PE BETHNEY KI)
MOM: Beta...leetey raho..doctor ne mana kiya hai..
MANAV: Mom..dad..TINA kahan hai? (auski awaaz nai nikal rahi thi, phir bhi ek dam halki halki awaaz mein ausne poocha..)
(MANAV K MOM AND DAD KO SAB PATA LAG CHUKA THA...KYUNKI NURSE NE VO LETTER AUNKO DIYA THA)
DAD: Beta..tum araam karo..doctor ne abhi batein karne ko mana kiya hai tumhe..
MANAV: Nahin..mujhe araam nahin karna..mujhe TINA se milna hai abhi..aunty..aap roo kyun rahi hai..TINA kahan hai...
(KISI K PAAS JAVAAB NAHIN THA..SAB CHUP THE)
MANAV: Koi mujhe batata kyun nahin TINA kahan hai...theek hai..main khud hi dhoond looga ausse..
(VO GUSSE MEIN APNE BED SE UTHNE KI KOSHISH KI..LEKIN AUSKE ZAKHAM EK DAM TAAZA HAIN...JIS VAJA SE VO UTH NAHIN PAYA...AUR AUSSE BUHAT ZADA PAIN HONE LAGA)
MANAV: AAAAHHHHHH.....(VO ZOR SE CHILLAYA..DUE TO PAIN)
(SAB LOGO NE AUSSE PHIRSE BED PE LEETAYA AUR DOC KO BULA LIYA..)
MOM: Beta please...aese mat karo...abhi tumhara zakham taaza hai..kuch bhi hosakta hai..
MANAV: To phir aap log mujhe kuch baataate kyun nahin TINA k barey mein..
(TINA KI MAA SE BARDAAST NAHIN HUI MANAV KI HAALAT..AISI LIYE AUNE MANAV KO VO LETTER DIYA AUR KAHA," Ye lo...aisse parho.." vo phoot phoot k roone lagi
(MANAV K DIMAAG MEIN KASHMAKASH(CONFUSION) THI..AUSSE KUCH SAMJH NAHIN ARAHA THA...AUSNE VO LETTER KHOLA AUR PARHA..!!!!!!
End of PART 2
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