Lets make up the future track- ideas to CV's

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Posted: 14 years ago
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As someone posted on the forum, it would be nice if we start giving ideas to the CV's. So here's a possible story line. (It isn't complete- I'll need your comments and feedback to know whether it sounds ok, and somewhat ethical as of now.)

Now, idea to Cv's from my side:

1.) Make Jay poison shravani's mind. Let her also reveal to Shravani that Manav was roaming with Archu on b'day.

2.) Make shravani give ultimatum to Manav that if you interfere in Archu's life, I will leave your house.

3.) Manav tries to convince Shravani- saying that it is his responsibility to save archu since he pushed her into marriage with jay. He might be momentarily swayed emotionally due to his attachment with archu but will never leave shravani and is fully committed to her.

4.) Shravani is not satisfied, and says give me proof.

5.) Manav says all the sins i have taken on my head till date- throwing out my wife, putting sindoor on u before marriage, and so on, and you still want proof? Till now I have always favoured my family and for their sake deprioritised archu, but not now. Else i'll fall in my eyes.

6.) Shravani takes sachu and goes to father's home. Savita abuses Manav and gives him guilt trips but Manav is firm. He sets about finding evidence against Jay with satish and Ajit's help- and all the Karanjkar's give him reality checks and taunts by saying it is you who brought Archu to this position, you used Archu- then how the hell are you any different from wht you are claiming jay to be? This sets Manav thinking and makes him feel guilty of unintentionally 'using' two women.

7.) Manav goes to shravani to manaofy her, but she is firm. "Come to me when you get archu out of ur system."

8.) Manav finds evidence against Jay and exposes him. Wedding is stopped. Jay reveals that he had already tricked Dharmu and Satish into signing the company on his name. Dharmu is taken aback, and remembers how he had tricked Archu in a similar manner. (Hee hee haa haa- what goes round comes round Dear Dharmu😈)

Satish goes back to working in the bank like before and all workers taunt Dharmu saying you tried to trap an innocent guy by sending him to jail, now look what you have got. Bappa sab dekhte hain. šŸ˜†

9.) Manav convinces workers to go on strike. Company fails to finish orders. Company runs into loss. Jay is now suffering from more debt. He sells off the company at a low cost and Dharmu buys it under a different company name that he had opened and all the workers return to work. He uses his business tactics to make the company work again. He asks forgiveness from Manav and asks him to return to the post of Supervisor. Manav decides to work for a short while so that he can get some finance to open his garage again. Satish decides not to go back to the company cos he sucks at business. šŸ˜†

10.) Sulo goes to ask forgiveness for Manav. She hears Savita abusing Manav that again bcos of him, she has lost Sachu. Manav looks at Sulo and says- "Now you understand why I had to take the decision to divorce ur daughter? My mother would have made life hell for ur daughter if I had let Sachu go with Shravani, I wouldn't have been able to do anything cos it was the grief of a mother who had lost her son, and it wouldn't have been possible for me to settle separately with Archu at that time. Hundreds of times I have thought of returning back, but I guess I just can't do anything now- cos I will be fair to one girl anyway. I just have to live and die with the guilt."

11.) Sulo understands. She goes to Shravani and tells her that Manav Archu will not meet each other ever and they themselves have promised this.

If this much is accepted by everyone, then we can move forward to the next plan on how to unite Manav Archu, and also Manav's introspection of the fact that he is keeping neither shravani nor archu happy and that he should take a stand quickly against Savita and confront Shravani.

Feel free to jump in with modifications or ideas of your own. Lets write this story together.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Nikki as you know,I always appreciate the intentions behind every actšŸ˜†And urs are good,so I will try to scratch mah head to extrapolate,but am not gud @script writing
Ur track lacks fireworks to compete with KBC -diwali time around da corner
Jay-Manav confrontation is the story fwd - just as Ajit was fultoo villain (I used to like that old ajit's performance) ,now Jay takes over.Jay is 666 and MAnav 007šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Edited by SaffyFlower - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hmm... Saffy how about CV's show Manav's introspection when everyone says that even has 'used' Archu and divorced her later- that is something people have been waiting to see.
Plus lots of drama on how Manav gets the evidence- maybe we can show Jay hurting Manav and the Karanjkar family finally apologizing to Manav in hospital?
Where else can we put the masala--- thinking thinking thinking.
Edited by nikitagmc - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I know,I was waiting for the Ks to remind manav abt dissing archu with the divorce - but they dint.
Am afraid Ks don think manav did anything wrong yaar with dat divorce😲😔
It will be great if Jay taunts manav abt the divorce - how he wud give archu 'status' that he took away,crappy izzat stuff like thatšŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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physical fight between manav and jay wud be cool na,NiksšŸ˜‰mud and allšŸ˜†šŸ˜†
bollywood stylešŸ˜›
anyway,am sure jay is gonna put supari on manav either ways in da current trackšŸ˜•
Maybe MAnav in hospital,archu comes crying blah,blahšŸ˜†jay on the other bed,she cracks numbers to him 2,blah,blahšŸ˜†archu double crossing both these duds wud be terrificšŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@saffy: Yup yaar! Even I want Jay to taunt Manav and say that you are not any better than me. That shud set Manav thinking.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I like archu double crossing both NikišŸ˜†oh,for some true masalašŸ˜†šŸ˜†both of them in plaster,@ur hospitalšŸ˜†
dont do all seva only for Mannu ok😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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two great CVs of the forum at work.....vry gud ideas....šŸ‘šŸ¼...I hav nonešŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@gauri: All right, then just point out flaws if any, in the above idea- like a review.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am very happy with the current track .
It has great potential for drama and turning Manav back into the hero that we all were waiting for .
I would like to see manav win Archu back . I want everything to go against him .All the Karanjkars going against him ...
Archu standing by her family and telling manav to go back to Shravani .
I would like it that she should tell him that all she has been doing is following his decisions and he cannot disrupt her life by saying one thing one day and another the next day .
I want manav and Archana to have a bad fight about how Archu feels that Manav's decisions have ruined her peace of mind ...
Then I want savita also asking Archu to back off totally as maav is hardly paying any attention to his forthcoming wedding ...
So now Archu , only to discourage Manav will start going out with jaywant . '
But all this should just infuriate manav and instead of quitting like always , he should become more and more determines to get her back ...
I want the whole world to go against manav , but he should come out of this test with flying colours , just like Archu did with his jail episode..
I want Manav failing in getting the proof against Jaywant and in his desperation , on th day of Archu's marriage , forcing her to marry him instead of jaywant and then go to Jaywant and the Karanjkars and tell them all to go to hell and never ever say again ' who is he to Archana ' .
Edited by Tanyaz - 14 years ago

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