What Happens After Divorce ???

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Posted: 15 years ago
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The Story of Pavitra Rishta is now twisted . The story lacks the reallity and viewers are very much disgusted.

Here is my NEW Story of PR after Divorce happens between the main lead ......

After Divorced Archana is in her parents house studing further and going for job.

Here Manav marries Sharavani and No first night as still sravani is pregnant, had a Baby boy (little Sachin) and everyone of the house is happy.

Manav remembers Archana in his thoughts . One day Archana is waiting for Bus/rickshaw. Both ARMAN WATCHES .. PAVITRA RISHTA.. TERE MERE MANN KA..

New Hero enters (Rohit) comes from the car nears to archana and closes her eyes. Rohit asks Archana tell the name. After opening eyes Archana says she doesn't know him and Rohit tells her the he is her childhood classmate and he has seen her in Satish office and with the help of satish he conformed that it is Archana his childhood friend. Archana remembers him and he offers to drop her at her home.ARMAN LOOK EACH OTHER, Archan quitely gets into the car. Manav is in shock.

Manav comes to his house and savita says something, he is recalling archu incident. He goes for there saying headache into his room and when sharavani asks what happened , he says nothing and goes from there.

After few days Manav and Sravani goes for buying new dresses for little sachin in a Mall. There Manav sees Archana in the 4th floor and asks sravani to pick the clothes for little sachin in 1st floor and goes to talk with Archana. When he comes close to Archana, then Rohit comes from the dressing room says this shirt is ok Archana. Archana smiles and says good and both go from there. Archana doesn't see Manav, but manav watching this silently.

At the billing Archana hears little sachin cry and sees back and to shock sravani is glances her in anger. Archana wants to go meet little sachin, but backs of seeing manav PAVITRA RISHTA.. TERE MERE MANN KA.. Rohit comes and takes her away.Sravani comes to the house and says everyone that today she has seen archana enjoying with a man. Manav gets anger and says to shut her mouth and goes into his room thinking about archana. Manav gets nightmares of Rohit and Archana and is helpless.

One day on sravani birthday both goes 5 star hotel as sravani likes going to costly hotels. There Archana is enjoying dinner with Rohit and his Bilnd sister Ragini. Manav again sees Archana and when archana goes for washing room Manav follows her. Arman talk about their family members and about rohit and leaves from there. Sravani watches this and while Archana is leaving she calls her aside and starts abusing her trying to take Manav from her again. Archana firmly says Stop sravani I don't want to argue with You. Eventhough you are educated your mind is narrow. Think twice before you talk and I AM JUST NOT INTERESTED IN YOUR MANAV. and leaves from there sitting in rohit car.

Sravani is in angry mood and wants to blash manav for talking to her. Manav says please leave me alone. Whatever Archana says is right and sravani is more more angry. Here sulochana wants Archana marriage and archana firmly says she is not interested and first get Vaishali marriage. Here Vaishali marriage happens and Deshmukh family comes. Sravani wants to insult Archana and finding the way and here Manav wants to talk with Archana.

ARMAN meet,Archana says please manav I DON'T WANT ANY MORE FURTHER INSULTS FOR BOTH OF US. IT IS IMPOSSIBLE FOR US TO BE AS FRIENDS. I AM REALLY NOT HURT FOR SRAVANI WORDS, BUT YOUR SILENCE WHEN SRAVANI IS ABUSING ME WHEN NO FAULT IS MINE HAS HURTED ME MORE.Then sravani bumps in and again starts bad wording before relatives and just then rohit comes and stop sravani SAYING THAT ARCHANA IS GOING TO BE HIS WIFE JUST LEAVE FROM THERE OTHERWISE CALL POLICE FOR CREATING NUISANCE. Deshmukh family leaves with all are shocked.

Later Rohit tells Archana he did this to save her Honour and knows Arman relationship very well.ROHIT TELL HIS PAST,HIS LOVING WIFE GETS KILLED IN CAR ACCIDENT AND HIS SISTER RAGINI LOSSING HER EYES. Sulochana wants Rohit and Archana marriage. Here Manav starts working hard till late nights, silent and doesn't respond to family members. sravani tries to talk to Manav, Manav gives money and tells her to brought what ever She wANTS.

Here Sulochana asks Rohit marrying Archana. Rohit talks with Archana says WE WILL BE FRIENDS AND LIVE OUR LIFES WITH (PREVIOUS MARRIAGE)MEMORIES. I want this marriage for taking care of my sister.Archana agrees for marriage. ARMAN meet and archana tells Manav about marrying Rohit and says I AM HELPLESS, JUST LIKE YOU R HELPLESS IN MARRYING SRAVANi. ARMAN have flashback and tears in their eyes, Archana leaves and Manav Shatterd. Sravani watches Manav crying and lost in thoughts of Archana. Savitha talks with Manav AND tells him to start new life with his wife Sravani.

MANAV BURSTS TELLS SAVITHA, I LOVED TO STUDY AS SACHIN, BUT SACRIFICED FOR FAMILY. LOVED ARCHANA AND SACRIFIED HER FOR FAMILY AND SRAVANI. BUT NOW I UNDERSTOOD I CAN NEVER BE A HUSBAND TO ANYONE. I NEVER SUPPORTED ARCHANA, NOR I PROTECTED HER FROM YOUR AND SRAVANI ABUSES. ARCHANA ALLWAYS HELPED ME AND I AM THE BIGGEST FOOL TO LOOSE HER AND GO AFTER SACRIFICING. BUT NOW I AM LOSSING HER AND SHE IS GETTING MARRIED WITH SOMEONE, WHO WILL SURELY TAKE CARE OF HER MORE THAN ME. I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT HER and falls down. Savita also cries and realises,the biggest mistake she has committed for ignoring Manav Happyness over sachin child. Sravani hears this conv and cries.

Here Archu Engagement and Manav comes gift her and tells her best wishes. Manav is weak and very much sick condition and archu can't anything just stares at him crying ... PAVITRA RISHTA.. TERE MERE MANN KA.. Here Manav takes LIC Policy and comes for Sravani Signature and tells her if anything happens to him she have to take care of his parents and little sachin. Sravani unable to bear the burden of MANAV Goodness.On Marriage day of Manav falls down, hospitalised, serious condition.Sravani and Girishji stops Archana marriage asks to help manav dying as he is not responding to doctors . Archana is silent and crying. Rohit tells her TO GO AND GET HER LOVE. ARCHANA BRINGS BACK MANAV TO CONSCIOUS and PAVITRA RISHTA.. TITLE SONGS PLAYS... Sravani gives little sachin to Archana and Manav wishes them happy life and leaves with Girish to US.

Archana Character raises living with Self -respect and keeping Manav aside and showing that she can live life without Manav.
Manav Character realises You should respect, be with you love in thick and thin . One should think of his happyness also.
Sravani Realises that YOU CAN'T SNATCH OTHERS LOVE. IT WILL NEVER BE YOURS.
Hope You Guys enjoyed my New PR..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I'm pretty sure this is what they are going to show after the divorce 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh my God!!! wht a story line... I want exactly this to be happend after divorce....... Good Job.. 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great piece of writing....had some funny parts but really sad...i hope they never go this way...would be unbearable to watch manav....
The way u wrote how he sacrificed for studies .....was a wowwwwww moment for me....it sounded so real..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice story ,I loved reading it ....
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I liked it .precisely my thoughts
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Originally posted by: davidms

The Story of Pavitra Rishta is now twisted . The story lacks the reallity and viewers are very much disgusted.

Here is my NEW Story of PR after Divorce happens between the main lead ......

After Divorced Archana is in her parents house studing further and going for job.

Here Manav marries Sharavani and No first night as still sravani is pregnant, had a Baby boy (little Sachin) and everyone of the house is happy.

Manav remembers Archana in his thoughts . One day Archana is waiting for Bus/rickshaw. Both ARMAN WATCHES .. PAVITRA RISHTA.. TERE MERE MANN KA..

New Hero enters (Rohit) comes from the car nears to archana and closes her eyes. Rohit asks Archana tell the name. After opening eyes Archana says she doesn't know him and Rohit tells her the he is her childhood classmate and he has seen her in Satish office and with the help of satish he conformed that it is Archana his childhood friend. Archana remembers him and he offers to drop her at her home.ARMAN LOOK EACH OTHER, Archan quitely gets into the car. Manav is in shock.

Manav comes to his house and savita says something, he is recalling archu incident. He goes for there saying headache into his room and when sharavani asks what happened , he says nothing and goes from there.

After few days Manav and Sravani goes for buying new dresses for little sachin in a Mall. There Manav sees Archana in the 4th floor and asks sravani to pick the clothes for little sachin in 1st floor and goes to talk with Archana. When he comes close to Archana, then Rohit comes from the dressing room says this shirt is ok Archana. Archana smiles and says good and both go from there. Archana doesn't see Manav, but manav watching this silently.

At the billing Archana hears little sachin cry and sees back and to shock sravani is glances her in anger. Archana wants to go meet little sachin, but backs of seeing manav PAVITRA RISHTA.. TERE MERE MANN KA.. Rohit comes and takes her away.Sravani comes to the house and says everyone that today she has seen archana enjoying with a man. Manav gets anger and says to shut her mouth and goes into his room thinking about archana. Manav gets nightmares of Rohit and Archana and is helpless.

One day on sravani birthday both goes 5 star hotel as sravani likes going to costly hotels. There Archana is enjoying dinner with Rohit and his Bilnd sister Ragini. Manav again sees Archana and when archana goes for washing room Manav follows her. Arman talk about their family members and about rohit and leaves from there. Sravani watches this and while Archana is leaving she calls her aside and starts abusing her trying to take Manav from her again. Archana firmly says Stop sravani I don't want to argue with You. Eventhough you are educated your mind is narrow. Think twice before you talk and I AM JUST NOT INTERESTED IN YOUR MANAV. and leaves from there sitting in rohit car.

Sravani is in angry mood and wants to blash manav for talking to her. Manav says please leave me alone. Whatever Archana says is right and sravani is more more angry. Here sulochana wants Archana marriage and archana firmly says she is not interested and first get Vaishali marriage. Here Vaishali marriage happens and Deshmukh family comes. Sravani wants to insult Archana and finding the way and here Manav wants to talk with Archana.

ARMAN meet,Archana says please manav I DON'T WANT ANY MORE FURTHER INSULTS FOR BOTH OF US. IT IS IMPOSSIBLE FOR US TO BE AS FRIENDS. I AM REALLY NOT HURT FOR SRAVANI WORDS, BUT YOUR SILENCE WHEN SRAVANI IS ABUSING ME WHEN NO FAULT IS MINE HAS HURTED ME MORE.Then sravani bumps in and again starts bad wording before relatives and just then rohit comes and stop sravani SAYING THAT ARCHANA IS GOING TO BE HIS WIFE JUST LEAVE FROM THERE OTHERWISE CALL POLICE FOR CREATING NUISANCE. Deshmukh family leaves with all are shocked.

Later Rohit tells Archana he did this to save her Honour and knows Arman relationship very well.ROHIT TELL HIS PAST,HIS LOVING WIFE GETS KILLED IN CAR ACCIDENT AND HIS SISTER RAGINI LOSSING HER EYES. Sulochana wants Rohit and Archana marriage. Here Manav starts working hard till late nights, silent and doesn't respond to family members. sravani tries to talk to Manav, Manav gives money and tells her to brought what ever She wANTS.

Here Sulochana asks Rohit marrying Archana. Rohit talks with Archana says WE WILL BE FRIENDS AND LIVE OUR LIFES WITH (PREVIOUS MARRIAGE)MEMORIES. I want this marriage for taking care of my sister.Archana agrees for marriage. ARMAN meet and archana tells Manav about marrying Rohit and says I AM HELPLESS, JUST LIKE YOU R HELPLESS IN MARRYING SRAVANi. ARMAN have flashback and tears in their eyes, Archana leaves and Manav Shatterd. Sravani watches Manav crying and lost in thoughts of Archana. Savitha talks with Manav AND tells him to start new life with his wife Sravani.

MANAV BURSTS TELLS SAVITHA, I LOVED TO STUDY AS SACHIN, BUT SACRIFICED FOR FAMILY. LOVED ARCHANA AND SACRIFIED HER FOR FAMILY AND SRAVANI. BUT NOW I UNDERSTOOD I CAN NEVER BE A HUSBAND TO ANYONE. I NEVER SUPPORTED ARCHANA, NOR I PROTECTED HER FROM YOUR AND SRAVANI ABUSES. ARCHANA ALLWAYS HELPED ME AND I AM THE BIGGEST FOOL TO LOOSE HER AND GO AFTER SACRIFICING. BUT NOW I AM LOSSING HER AND SHE IS GETTING MARRIED WITH SOMEONE, WHO WILL SURELY TAKE CARE OF HER MORE THAN ME. I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT HER and falls down. Savita also cries and realises,the biggest mistake she has committed for ignoring Manav Happyness over sachin child. Sravani hears this conv and cries.

Here Archu Engagement and Manav comes gift her and tells her best wishes. Manav is weak and very much sick condition and archu can't anything just stares at him crying ... PAVITRA RISHTA.. TERE MERE MANN KA.. Here Manav takes LIC Policy and comes for Sravani Signature and tells her if anything happens to him she have to take care of his parents and little sachin. Sravani unable to bear the burden of MANAV Goodness.On Marriage day of Manav falls down, hospitalised, serious condition.Sravani and Girishji stops Archana marriage asks to help manav dying as he is not responding to doctors . Archana is silent and crying. Rohit tells her TO GO AND GET HER LOVE. ARCHANA BRINGS BACK MANAV TO CONSCIOUS and PAVITRA RISHTA.. TITLE SONGS PLAYS... Sravani gives little sachin to Archana and Manav wishes them happy life and leaves with Girish to US.

Archana Character raises living with Self -respect and keeping Manav aside and showing that she can live life without Manav.
Manav Character realises You should respect, be with you love in thick and thin . One should think of his happyness also.
Sravani Realises that YOU CAN'T SNATCH OTHERS LOVE. IT WILL NEVER BE YOURS.
Hope You Guys enjoyed my New PR..

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too good story this actually PR
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Your story is like a typical Ekta Kapoor script (except the tragic ending though). Nice story, loved reading it. I too feel Manav should have protected archana if he truely loved her. This reminds of Anurag & prerna of kasauti. But I just hope the divorce doesnt take place atall.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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good job...hope the future storyline flows this way..much better than the crap they've been dishing out for us 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good job. now it is absolute bullshit and i even wonder why i watch it though not regularly. guess i have nothing better to do.

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