Yun hota to kaisa hota?

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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's a story on some IF- PR members, who have boarded a bus from goa to Mumbai. They have spent their vacation with respectrive friends and now returning back to Mumbai for personal work etc. They are not aware that they know each other so well. They behave like strangers to each other.

Ali comes and sits near aakash

Aakash- bhai saab aap zara kahin aur baithenge..itni saari ladkiyan hain..main soch raha tha koi ladki mere paas baithegi

Ali- bhaiya mujhe koi shauk nahin tha aap ke paas wali seat pe baithne ko..wo conductor ne idhar bitha diya

( inki baaten sunke pichhe baithi Piya aur Aarti has uthti hain.)

Piya- dekha na aapne yeh ladke kaise hote hain. Din raat bas ladki ladki

Ali- o madam aap ne kuch kaha kya hamare liye

Aarti- ji nahin hum ne bas yehi kaha ki aap dono ki Jodi kaafi achhi lag rahi hai

Aakash- hey bhagwan..bhai saab aap idhar se jaiye kahin aur baithiye..warna log hamen kuch aur samjhenge

(paas ki seat pe nishi aur sid baithi hain. Ek aur seat pe tass aur monica.)

Ali- ( Sid ko) madam ji aap idhar baith jaiye aur main aap ki seat pe baith jata hun

Sid- mujhe koi shauk nahin. Main yahin pe khush hun

Nishi- aap yahan baitho. Koi baat nahin. Par yeh mat kaho ki aap yahan pe khush ho. warna log hamen kuch aur samjhenge (LOL)

Ali- ( aakash ko) bhai main kuch nahin kar sakta. Aap khade ho jayen

Aakash- oh my god..maine socha tha yeh trip achhi rahegi. Inti saari ladkiyan is bus ko book kar rahe hain dekh ke maine bhi yehin booking kari. Par yeh kismat bhi na…

Monica- oh kitne bakar bakar kar rahe hain yeh do ladke..

Aakash- aapne kuch kaha..chaliye aap aur main paas paas baithte hain

Tass- aap dono chup rehne ka kya lenge..aap dono keliye hi yehi achha hoga ek doosre ko pasand kar len..aur journey ka maza uthayen (LOL)

Aarti-guys don't u think hum logon ko ek doosre se baat karna chahiye..

Nishi- mujhe jyada baat chit pasand nahi..main bas sunungi

Tass- achha kis bare mein baat karenge

Ali- oh bhuke pet kya baat..main bag mein se kuch nikalta hun..kukrkure ke packets honge..anybody interested

Sid- wow..I am interested…tum mujhe kurkure do main tumhe biriyani deti hun..ekdum homemade

Ali- tumne to meri badi behen ki yaad dila di..wo hamesha mujhe apne haathon ka khana khilane keliye bula rahi hai par main ja hi nahin pa raha hun

Piya- khane se mujhe yaad aaya..tum mein se kisi ko rajma chawal pasand hai…mere paas hai

Aakash- mujhe kuch khaas pasand to nahin..par pyar se dogi to kha lunga

Piya- mere bf ko pasand hai..isliye main bhi is khane ki aadat dal rahi hun..

Aarti- (LOL) waise mere unko bhi rajma chawal pasand hai

( baki saari ladkiyan)- are mere bf ko bhi

Ali- to sab ne wohi pack kar rakha hai kya…koi baat nahin bf na sahi chhota bhai samajh ke khila do

Aakash- mujhe kuch khilane ki zaroorat nahin par bhai mat samajhna plz

( sab haste hain)

Tass- tum bahut hasate ho yaar..waise hum sab ke bf ko ek hi item kaise pasand..wo bhi rajma chawal

Monica- itna dimaag mat lagao..kahin wo ek nikla to hum sab ka dill toot jayega ( LOL)

(everybody laughs)

Aakash- jinki pasand hai rajma chawal

Un keliye hain ladkiyan pagal

Nishi- kya pakau shayari hai…waise kai saari aisi shayari maine padhi hai

Monica- net pe log likhte rehte hain

Aarti- waise aap logon ka Mumbai mein kya plan hai. Wasie yeh bus pahunchte pahunchte 8:30 baj jayenge

Piya- oye tab to jald hi cousin ke ghar pahunchna padega 9 baje se pehle

Sid- haan mere ko bhi..serial dekhna hai Pavitra Rishta

Baki sab- are haan hum ko bhi dekhna hai

Ali- ab samjha kahin PR ka jo hero Manav usi ko aap log apna bf to nahin keh rahe? Us ghonchu ko bhi rajma chawal pasand hai

Piya- aye bachhe..manav ko ghonchu kaha to teri jubaan kat ke haath mein rakh dungi. Wo wake hi mera bf hai.

Aarti- nahin tumhe shayad galafehmi hai . uska mere sath pichhle 5 saal se affair chal raha hai…affair bole to soild affair..samjhi na

Tass- are nahin…manav se to meri shaadi tak ho gayi hai, jab main school mein thi..u know child marriage

Sid- huuhhhh..badi aayi shaadi karne wali..manav se mera hi lafda chal raha hai..

Monica- yeh lo…mera dilwar hai wo..aur tum log jhagad rahe ho..khair jhagdo..mumbai aane mein abhi kaafi samay hai..time pass ho jayega

Nishi- main kuch keh nahin rahi iska matlab yeh nahi ki manav se maera koi nata nahin

Sid- naata kyun nahi hoga..bhai behen ka naata hoga

Nishi- aye…

( 30 min tak jhagda chalta hai. Sab log ek doosre se jhagdate hain)

Aakash- girls aisa jhagada hum ne kai baar padha tha net pe par pehli baar real mein dekh rahe hain..please carry on

Ali- aap sab ko mera sawal hai..manav keliye aap kis had tak ja sakti hain

Piya- had…teri jaan le lungi main pehle to…tu kaun hota hai hadd puchhne wala

Aarti- ohhh hum dono ne saari haddein paar kar li hai..ab kya had paar karna

Tass- school time se shaadi ho gayi thi meri usse..aur aap sab ko pata hai shaadi ke baad kya kya hota hai..i need not clarify..

Sid- oye….jhooth bolne ki bhi hadd hai..waise bhaiya tum hamen yeh puch kyun rahe ho

Ali- jhagda lagane ko aur kya (LOL)

Nishi- tum aise puchhte ho na…mujhe kisi ki yaad aati hai

Monica- haan mujhe bhi

Aakash- mujhe bhi aap logon ka jawab sunke aisa lag raha hai ki yeh sawal jawab mere liye naya nahi hai

( sab log soch rahe hain..aisi kya baat hai hum sab mein jo baar baar yeh sochne pe majboor kar raha hai ki yeh sab baat suni hui hai…aise sochte sochte Mumbai aa jati hai…sab utarte hain. Apna apna saman utha ke chalne se pehle baat karte hain)

Ali- to doston hum logon ne kuch achha samay bitaya..chalo..ab apne apne raste chalte hain..phir milenge chalte chalte

Sid- tum to mere bhai Ali ke jaise baat karte ho

Ali- mera naam bhi Ali hai waise

Sid- really..kahin tum IF wale Ali to nahin?

Ali- haan

Sid – main sid…

( sab log ek doosre ka naam puchh lete hain aur story saaf ho jati hai…par kaafi samay ho chuka hai..sab ko apne apne raste jana hai ab. Sab log dukhi ho gaye ki ab juda hona hai)

Another person comes to them. He was also travelling in the bus, but he was silent.

Man- zindegi aisi hi hai…ek bus hi to hai..aisi bus jiske kai saare stoppages..kab kis ko kahan pe utar jana hai….aap ke paas jo aadmi baitha hai shayad aap usse baat bhi Karen ..apna dost bhi man le..lekin uske sath aapka sath bas tab tak hai jab aap dono mein se kisi ek ka stoppage aa jaye..uske baad wo alag aap alag…hum yeh nahin samajh pate ki yeh sab temporary hai…bas aise hi dil laga baithte hain..nothing is permanent..so be happy that ek baar hi sahi aap log ek doosre se mile to..aage kabhi nahin miloge yeh soch ke dukhi kyun hona

Ali - aap kahin SD bhai to nahin

SD- are haan ..tumne mujhe pehchan liya Ali…

( all of them decide to go to a restaurant and enjoy a dinner aur uske baad sab apne apne raste)

p.s. while talking to sid and ali, this idea came to my mind. Even if we talk to each other so much, know each other very well, but can we ever meet each other..kya hum log ek doosre se milna nahin chahte?

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geethika thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Excellent SD...😆😊 🤣
Edited by geethika - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣 Ali and Akash bhai ??? hello these two are .. well, haven't u seen their siggy ? 🤣
OMG ??? Main aur Manav .. child marriage ???? 🤣
nd hey child marriage ok .. bt not to clarify wht happens aftr .. isn't this too mch ? wht will children do ? well aaj kal k bachche bhi naa 🤣 .. v cnt tell anything LOL
I loved how u put LOL aftr or b4 sum lines, evn I was LOLling 😆
loved each nd every line !!!!!!
bt my fav part is the last part !! I loved how we did realize tht we were the idiots from IF 😳
Kash, I wish ths really happens .. I so wanna meet yall .. I'm sure tht'll sthg unforgettable, a forever cherished memory, nd wht not .. I hope we all always keep in touch !! 😍😳🤗
thts it .. now yu made me emotional once again 😛
bt seriously, I really love ths one more thn all of your other stories 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ah well me and Ali are bhai bhai, i wonder who gave the Dostana award,
I wanted to know when this category was posted and how come i missed voting in it....🤣

Taz oh god child marriage i never knew that, since its ban in India and when did u do it, since Manav is a school drop out🤣

Nisha only few lines why SD such a mini role for Nisha~!🥳
Piya the ultimate Don in the bus
Sid and Monica are awesome......
Excellent SD, superb
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akashspartan

Ah well me and Ali are bhai bhai, i wonder who gave the Dostana award,

I wanted to know when this category was posted and how come i missed voting in it....🤣

🤣 it was a critic/jury award 🤣 .. nd we were observing silently everyone in the forum .. nd since v dnt have many boys, v didn't have enough choice 😛

Taz oh god child marriage i never knew that, since its ban in India and when did u do it, since Manav is a school drop out🤣

Arrey yes yaar ! but he went to school naa .. he couldn't go to high school, tht's it 😆 ..well I think he had .. if he stopped his education at 16, tht means he atleast went till 11th ( or +1 ) naa 😕😳 anyways the marriage happened whn v were born itslf .. actually my grand grand grand parents nd his grand grand grand parents were besties .. thy wanted to bcum samanth for ages .. bt either both the generation gt boy boy or grl grl .. aftr many generations, thy succeeeded in getting a boy nd a grl .. so whn I was born, thy gt us married 🤣 ( ahemm, engeyo ketta maathiri illa if you watch Vijay's movies I think 😆 )
😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I remember this Vijay's joke which he tells to Nayan tara,
That yenka appa odo appa oda appppa aapppppa appppaon,
the girls appa odo appa oda appa appa apppa apppaaon,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akashspartan

I remember this Vijay's joke which he tells to Nayan tara,
That yenka appa odo appa oda appppa aapppppa appppaon,
the girls appa odo appa oda appa appa apppa apppaaon,



excatly !! I hate Vijay nd 9 .. bt I love Prabhu Deva, isliye I watched tht movie, nd ths joke really cracked me up 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😆😆😆😆 Very nice . Would love to see all of you guys in one place like this ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Well how cool that would be but its close to impossible!😭

Mean while we have so fun at the forum that it makes upto it.....🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow SD bhai. How quickly you wrote this story. Excellent writing. Very well written. I wish this comes true. But me and aakash are just friends lol. Nothing more than that. Dekha, maine apko pehchan liya na. Hehe. @ aakash : nothing is impossible buddy. World is very small. You might be sitting besides me in actual some day and we might not even recognise each other. By the way i am coming to bangalore next month. Who knows !!

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