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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hope manav and archana reunite. and its their milan ki raat. i hope these kind of conversations would happen as they are a shy couple.

1.The bed has been decorated by some leaves in stead of flowers. Savita has done this for some cost cutting. archana awaits there for manav. Manav who was not all ready to come inside was literally pushed by vandita inside the room. door has been closed and manav finally sits on the bed. archana has a 1 meter long ghoonghat.

2. its 10 pm now. both are silent.
3. its 11 pm now. both are silent.
4. its 12. mid night. dogs start barking. suddenly Varsha's phone rings. Archu takes the phone inside her ghughat and talks.

Varsha: Taai kya kar rahi hai?
Archu: Tu chup bhi karegi?
Varsha: Tune phone kaise utha liya. kUch kar nahin rahi hai kya?
Archu: Tu chup bhi karegi?
Varsha:mujhe pata tha tere sath aise hi hoga.tu ghoonghat ke anadr mere se baat kar rahi hai na? kuch kar le taai. shaadi ke 3 saal tak tum done bas roye. ab kuch masti ka time hai. kar lo kuch.
Archu: Tu chup bhi karegi?
Varsha: Jijju kya kar rahe hain? sarm ke maare kahin aur muh kar ke baithe hain na?
Archu: Tu chup bhi karegi?
Varsha: main to chup reh jaungi. par tera kya hoga taai. tu ek kaam kar jijju ko phone de. chal jaldi kar.

Archu to Manav- Ji....
Manav- Ji....
Archu - Ji....
Manav- ji...
Archu- Main keh rahi thi...
Manav- Ji kahiye na..
Archu- woh hai na...
Manav- Kaun?
Archu- Varsha..
manav. sab theek to hai na uske sath.
Archu- woh aap ke sath...
manav- mere sath??
Archu- ji
Manav- ji
Archu- aapke sath...aap ke sath baat karna chahti hai
manav- ( he thanks God. he thought Varsha wants to join them) haan phone dijiye

Manav- hello
Varsha- jijju kuch karoge ya nahin?
manav- haan varsha par...
Varsha- yaar aap ko pata hai ya nahin suhaag raat mein kya karte hain
Manav-haan varshu par..
Varsha- kya haan varsha..tai ka ghooghat uthao jijju...1 bajne ko hai
Manav- haan varsha par...
Varsha- ohhhh...jaldi karo..main phone rakhti hun

Manav to Archana- ji
Archu- ji
Manav- Woh Varsha ne
Archu- ji
Manav- (closes his eyes and ek saans mein bol dalta hai) aapka ghooghat utarne ko bola hai
Archu- ( silent)
Manav moves ahead aur ghooghat utar deta hai.

Manav- ji
Archu- ji
manav- woh..
Archu-ji..
manav- woh.. ( abhi 1: 30 baj gaye hain)
Archu- ( silent)
Manav haath badhake arhu ke face ko pakad leta hai. khud ki aankhen band hain sharm ke mare.

( Balaji Telefilms wale gaana bajane lagte hain. pavitra rishta tere mere mann ka)

archu ab manav ke haath pakad ke rone lagti hai bite hue dino ki baat yaad karke. manav ab archu ko halke se gale lagata hai aur rone lagta hai sab kuch yaad karke.

its 3: 30 now. phone rings. Archu picks. again its Varsha.

Varsha- Tai kuch hua?
Archu (still crying)- ummmmmmmmmmmm
Varsha- (kuch aur soch leti hai) Tai darr mat thoda sa dard to hoga hi
Archu- thoda sa..tu keh rahi hai yeh varshu...mere liye aai baba ko kitna dukh hua...sachin jo mera apne chhote bhai se bhi jyada tha woh nahin raha..aur tu keh rahi hai thoda sa dard...
varsha- ( gusse mein pagal) aaj hi ki raat thi tum dono ke paas yeh sab sochne keliye..main pagal ho jaungi. chal jijju ko ph de
Manav- ( crying ) haan varsha
varsha- Jijju aap bhi na hadd karte ho
Manav. maine kya kiya..shayad kismat mein yeh sab tha..mere aur archana ke beech mein galatfehmiyan paida hona aur sachin ka gujar jana. varsha tum ab bhi mujhe galat samajh rahi ho?
Varsha- aap galat nahin ..paapi ho..insaaniyat ke naam pe dhabba ho.
manav- maine aisa kiya...
varsha- aap ne kyun barbad ki meri tai ki life
manav- maine kya kiya ...maine to usse haath tak nahin lagaya...
Varsha- to mana kisne kiya..aap ko kuch pata nahin hai kya..
manav- mera yakin karo varsha archana aur mere beech mein jo darar tha aaj woh hat chuka hai..ab hum kabhi juda nahin honge
varsha- aise milan se to judaai achhi thi. chalo taai ko phone do aap.

Archu- Haan varshu-
Varsha- tai 5:30 bajne wale hain. kuch karegi ya nahin aaj..
Archu - ( ghadi dekh ke chaunk jati hai) sahi kiya tune time bata diya. hamare yahan paani 5:45 tak aata hai. main bharne jati hun. warna aai ko karna padega.
Varsha gusse mein phone kat ke so jati hai.

Archu- Ji main paani bharne jati hun.
Manav- main madad karun aap ki

(savita ki awaz aati hai)

Savita-(Archana ko suna suna ke) aaj kal ki bahu maze jyada leti hai..soti jyada hai..saas paani bharne jayegi

Archana suddenly opens the door takes the bucket and goes out for neer bharan.

manav dekhta reh jata hai.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww.. so cute ... ArMan convo was soo sweet 😳... but i hope that doesnt happen ... i hope they dont just sit there all night doin nothing ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good one 🤣
But i hope Varsha will not call during Arman reunion..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I would've enjoyed it...if it was in english 😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Cute...bt 1 thing 4 sure..ArMan r not dat shy anymoreee:P
Edited by GHT_ArMan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: aartifarty

aww.. so cute ... ArMan convo was soo sweet 😳... but i hope that doesnt happen ... i hope they dont just sit there all night doin nothing ...



@red ...😆😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sorry @cbnerd..those innocent shyness and romance can't be expressed in english, like the way they call each other ji before each interaction.
@aartifarty I would have loved to portray what they would actually do in their milan ki raat. But as this is a BT show. drama and imaginary things would win over romance. moreoever, in this forum I don't have scope to write the exact thing they will do. Thanks for enjoying.
Edited by satyamdas - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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satyamdas .. I was seriously ROFLing !! 🤣
it wd hv certainly happened this way if that happened the 1st day Archu came to his house .. rem'ber the towel scene ?😉
but they aren't anymore shy .. bt I'd lv to see a scene like this, it'd b so hilarious !! I can absolutely visualize this sequence with Manav and Archu ! but more than Varsha, Sachin wd hv been better .. unfortunately, he's no more 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ tasnime..I understand..Sachin was the one. But now Varsha has to volunteer in such dare devil activities. Moreover, these things would have happened on day one..thats true. But exaggerating things is writer's job. Thats what I am trying as BT's idiotic script has made me a writer at least for this forum. Thank you all for your love.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome yet again!

I love the little details like the leaves instead of flowers and the repetition. They actually used to have these "ji ji ji woh ji woh ji ji woh ji" conversations.

Sachin would have been funny too, you can definitely imagine him going "Kya aap bhi dada, andar apni Madhuri jaisi vahini aap ka intezaar kar rahi hai, aur aap yahaan? Main hota to kab ka..." and then Manav stops him with one of those looks. 😆

You should definitely continue with these, they are more than a joy to read.

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