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Posted: 5 years ago
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OK guys... We have one silent reader in forum... Who requested me to write a story on her concept... So here it is.... . Sou-miya here it is....


Sukoon...


Neil was feeling like he is the most luckiest person in the world who have Minni beside him, while walking in to the kitchen holding hands in hand with Minni.... He couldn't believe how Minni warned isha and took him with her..... The reached the kitchen but Minni was not in a mood to leave his hand... Simpy and geetha have witnessed everything and then got the idea about them till now.... Neil tried to get his hand out of hers but she gripped it more tighter.... Simpy was blushing seeing them like this....


G. Simpy chup kar... Ah.. Sir saare guest tho chale Gaye hum bhi lunch karke aate hai...

N. OK Geetha ji....

G. Chal ab...


Geeta literally dragged the blushing simpy.... Neil rolled his eyes in simpy antics.... Minni was still staring him... He thought of breaking the silence...


N. Kuch khaogi tum... Subah se kuch nahi khaya na...

M. Hmm....

N. Kya khaogi...

M. Jo tum banao...

N. Thik hai... Fried rice khaogi...

M. OK...


Neil was struggling to cook by only one hand as the other hand was with Minni.... Wherever he was going Minni was just going with him m blindly.... neil stopped and asked her....


N. Minni kya hua tumhe... Why are you behaving as of you are hypnotized....

M. Pata nahi Neil was tumhara haath aise pakde rehne ka Mann kar raha hai...

N. I am fine Minni.... Bas kal purani baaton ki wajah se thoda emotional ho gaya tha... Ab mein thik hun... Aur jo tumne isha se kaha usse to bilkul thik Ho gaya mean... Relax... Come on now sit here... Let me prepare food for u....


He made her sit on the table and started cooking.... Soon get fried rice was ready... He served in plate and got to her...


N. Now eat...


Minni nodded in a no...


N. Why... Abhi to bola bhook hai...

M. Wo kya haina kisika haath pakadke mera haath dukh raha hai.. To kaise khaun...


Neil understood what's going on in her mind... He took some fried rice by spoon and fed her.... She had it happily... And she also fed him some.... The both enjoyed their lunch feeding each other and chatting....


Just then Preeti came in search of Minni...


P. Minni...


Which brought them out of their world...


M. Preet kaure...


Neil distanced himself from Minni and helped her to get down the table...


N. U guys carry on... Mujhe evening ka menu bhi banana hai....

M. OK... Chal preet kaure...


Both of them went to mini cabin....


M. Tune lunch kiya...

P. Maine to kiya but tere jitna romantic nahi...

M. Shut up preet kaure...

P. Bolna sirf lunch kiya ki kuch aur bhi kiya...

M. Bas haa... Aur wo hum dono ke beech ki baat hai... Tu na Mickey be dhyan de...

P. Haa haa Mickey ke liye to aayi hun...

M. Kya.. Mickey yaha kaha hai...

P. Chup kar.. Mujhe uske loye gift lena hai... Chalna mall..

M. Abhi nahi nahi.... Mujhe na bohut kaam hai...

P. Tera kaam mujhe pata hai... Chup chap chal... Neil ghar pe mil jayega... Chal...

M. Ha thik hai....


Minni went with Preeti sulking.... But before leaving the restaurant she ran to Neil and whispered something in his ears and left... Neil was just smiling at Minni while seeing her going with preet forcefully....


Preet was being choosy... She was not at all buying anything it's been 4 hrs they are shopping... There Neil was busy in serving the guests.... He remembers what Minni said before leaving with preet...


M. Mein preet ke saath shopping ja rahi hoon but will be back soon... Hum dono saath me ghar jayenge... Don't u dare going home without me Neil oberoi...


He was amused by her small antics which make him smile and go more crazy for her...


The rest of the evening was a busy affair for both Minni and Neil... The guest were almost gone when Minni arrived from the mall....


M. Oh wow.. Chef Neil oberoi is still serving the guest....

N. Of course Minni madam ka order jo tha....

M. Hmm.... Good...

N. Ab chale... I was Waiting for u...

M. Yes chalo...


The both sat on his bike...


N. Tumari bike ka kya karogi...

M. Kal ayenge na tab le chalenge...

N. OK... Let's go...

M. Wait kaha ja rahe Ho...

N. Ghar aur kaha...

M. No ways... I wanna go for a drive...

N. What now... Arya humara intazar kar rahi hogi.... Akeli hogi..

M. Arya ke saath Rani di hai aaj... So no worries...

N. U sure...

M. Koi shak...

N. OK then let's go....


The just roamed whole patiala... Had some good tea in middle of their ride... Finally after a good ride the reached haveli....


N. Bohut din Ho gaye aise ride pe jaake... Thanks... I feeling good...

M. I know.. Isiliye bola....

N. OK... Then... Let's get some sleep...

M. Yeah... Good.... Night...

N. Yeah...


Both of them said good night but none of them were leaving.... The were just staring each other...


N. OK then I will. Leave...


Saying that Neil started moving towards his room but he was stopped midway as Minni hugged him tight from back.... He was shocked.....


N. Minni...

M. Please Neil don't turn...

N. Kya hua...

M. Kuch nahi... I just want to hold J like this for sometime... Sukoon milta hai....


Neil just obeyed her and even he closed his eyes and both of them were standing like Donno foe how much time.... The really had Sukoon in that hug.... Finally after sometime Minni broke the hug and wished him a final good night for the night and left for her room.... Even Neil wished her and went to his room.... Both off them had one thing in their heart that was Sukoon....


That's it guys hope u all like it...


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Mujhe Sharm aarahi hai

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Posted: 5 years ago
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@sou-miya great concept

@lata you wrote it very well. Every emotion every gesture of miniel was well written

And beautifully named.....i really got sukoon after reading it

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awwww soo cute yr lata

Pta nhi kyu ye padhkar I'm having happy tears🥺🥺

Shoot jaldi start ho mujhe ye scene chahiye 🤩😍

Sach mein sukoon milgya ye padhkar ❤️❤️❤️


Thankyou yrr it was soo cute saachiiii❤️❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Mujhe Sharm aarahi hai


Sharm kyun... 🤔

Edited by Srilata.Mineil - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjali0111

@sou-miya great concept

@lata you wrote it very well. Every emotion every gesture of miniel was well written

And beautifully named.....i really got sukoon after reading it


Thanks Anjali... 🤗


I just wrote which came to my heart.... Glad u liked it...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Awwww soo cute yr lata

Pta nhi kyu ye padhkar I'm having happy tears🥺🥺

Shoot jaldi start ho mujhe ye scene chahiye 🤩😍

Sach mein sukoon milgya ye padhkar ❤️❤️❤️


Thankyou yrr it was soo cute saachiiii❤️❤️


Aww Sakshi... Thank you... 🤗


Shoot start hoga jald hi...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This was very beautiful. Did get Sukoon reading this 😳 and even concept was good MiNeil way.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

This was very beautiful. Did get Sukoon reading this 😳 and even concept was good MiNeil way.


Thanks sharma... 🤗


Likhte waqt mujhe bhi Sukoon Mila.....

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Mini was holding his hand throughout, uske baad the hug the bike ride all were so cute

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