For people who are crying buckets of water...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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pichli kavita zara jyaada hi sad ho gayi. maine apne aap se waada kiya hai aur kuch forum wasiyon se bhi ke mein likhti rahungi jab tak Siddhi hosh mein nahin aa jaati. shaayad meri taklif sunke hi bechari jaa jaaye. Cant see Kunal crying anymore...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. I know the above dialogue is like nach basanti nach...jab tak tu nachegi...iski saas chalegi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ. what to do...I have lost it, so please bare with me..

Meri aankhon ke yeh labs...tu samaj nahin paayi..
jo kaha karti hai yeh tujhse...tu sunn nahin paayi.
Khaamosh ehsaas aur bheegi tanhaai hai inmein..
teri yaad mein barasti in aankhon ko, tu padh nahin paayi.
Yun to abb khamosh rehne ki aadat hai inhe..
Samaj sakho to fir bhi bahut kuch kehti hai yeh..
Kaun kehta hai ki roti hai yeh...
rota to mera dil hai...buss kehti hai yeh...
Panabta hai dard mera inmein, sadiyon se abb
aur veeran dil ki tamannaein ..
chalkati hain yeh aankhein...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

For all you lovely people out there...mere gum mein shaamil hona zaroori na samajhna
Zinda hoon mein abb bhi, mujhe mara hua mat samajhna..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Thankyou all for reading it.
๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
oyee jaan tumhe kaun mara hua samjh raha hain kavita toh speechless bas thoda ek do tears aaye and kuch kehne ki jarurat hee nahi asussual fab. ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am amazed ...falling short of words...dear ...love you for this poem thanks a ton dear...really a wonder ful heart felt lines...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jab takk Siddhi hosh mein nahi aati Purvi likhti rahegi...itni tapasya toh puraane zumaane mein rishi munion ne heee ki hogi๐Ÿ˜†...
jaante hai hum zinda hai tu ... aur likhati hee rahegi jab takk hai dum...
nice kavita again Purvi...loved it...and thanks again...
Edited by Simi. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Originally posted by: purvimehta


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pichli kavita zara jyaada hi sad ho gayi. maine apne aap se waada kiya hai aur kuch forum wasiyon se bhi ke mein likhti rahungi jab tak Siddhi hosh mein nahin aa jaati. shaayad meri taklif sunke hi bechari jaa jaaye. Cant see Kunal crying anymore...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. I know the above dialogue is like nach basanti nach...jab tak tu nachegi...iski saas chalegi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ. what to do...I have lost it, so please bare with me..

Meri aankhon ke yeh labs...tu samaj nahin paayi..
jo kaha karti hai yeh tujhse...tu sunn nahin paayi.
Khaamosh ehsaas aur bheegi tanhaai hai inmein..
teri yaad mein barasti in aankhon ko, tu padh nahin paayi.
Yun to abb khamosh rehne ki aadat hai inhe..
Samaj sakho to fir bhi bahut kuch kehti hai yeh..
Kaun kehta hai ki roti hai yeh...
rota to mera dil hai...buss kehti hai yeh...
Panabta hai dard mera inmein, sadiyon se abb
aur veeran dil ki tamannaein ..
chalkati hain yeh aankhein...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

For all you lovely people out there...mere gum mein shaamil hona zaroori na samajhna
Zinda hoon mein abb bhi, mujhe mara hua mat samajhna..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Thankyou all for reading it.
๐Ÿ˜†


Hey are you a writer? if so you are suppose to be in entertainment industry where your talent can be properly utilized. Really Hats off to you poetry.๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Edited by Indomitable - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey purvi

wonderful poetry ๐Ÿ‘ keep writing ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

bachpan se likh rahi ho tum?...kyonki itne dard bhare sunhare kavitha likhna aasan nahi hai ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arre wah purvi, another one

nicely written๐Ÿ‘, keep writing ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: purvimehta


๐Ÿ˜†
pichli kavita zara jyaada hi sad ho gayi. maine apne aap se waada kiya hai aur kuch forum wasiyon se bhi ke mein likhti rahungi jab tak Siddhi hosh mein nahin aa jaati. shaayad meri taklif sunke hi bechari jaa jaaye. Cant see Kunal crying anymore...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. I know the above dialogue is like nach basanti nach...jab tak tu nachegi...iski saas chalegi๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ. what to do...I have lost it, so please bare with me..

Meri aankhon ke yeh labs...tu samaj nahin paayi..
jo kaha karti hai yeh tujhse...tu sunn nahin paayi.
Khaamosh ehsaas aur bheegi tanhaai hai inmein..
teri yaad mein barasti in aankhon ko, tu padh nahin paayi.
Yun to abb khamosh rehne ki aadat hai inhe..
Samaj sakho to fir bhi bahut kuch kehti hai yeh..
Kaun kehta hai ki roti hai yeh...
rota to mera dil hai...buss kehti hai yeh...
Panabta hai dard mera inmein, sadiyon se abb
aur veeran dil ki tamannaein ..
chalkati hain yeh aankhein...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

For all you lovely people out there...mere gum mein shaamil hona zaroori na samajhna
Zinda hoon mein abb bhi, mujhe mara hua mat samajhna..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Thankyou all for reading it.
๐Ÿ˜†


Well said - I know action speaks louder than words but it is important for the words to be spoken most of the times so that MU does not occur -
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey,Purvi... awesome poetry by you again...
Really loved reading it & as usual would again like to contribute a bit to your creativity..

Guess, I can't hide my inner shayar on reading your posts... ๐Ÿ˜†

Here are my lines on Kunal's present state:
"Geele kagaz ki tarah hai zindigi apni,
Koi likhta bhi nahi, koi jalata bhi nahi,
Is kdr akele ho gaye hai hum akjal,
Koi satata bhi nahi,koi manata bhi nahi.."
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sks18

Hey,Purvi... awesome poetry by you again...
Really loved reading it & as usual would again like to contribute a bit to your creativity..

Guess, I can't hide my inner shayar on reading your posts... ๐Ÿ˜†

Here are my lines on Kunal's present state:
"Geele kagaz ki tarah hai zindigi apni,
Koi likhta bhi nahi, koi jalata bhi nahi,
Is kdr akele ho gaye hai hum akjal,
Koi satata bhi nahi,koi manata bhi nahi.."



Haye Haye...maar hi daloge..๐Ÿ˜†.
shaayri sunke aapki...hum shaayri bhool gaye.
aise likha kuch aapne...
charcha hua buss aapka...aur log humein bhool gaye...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Sorry yaar...iskaa meter zara thik se baitha nahin...do minute mein buss yahi likh paayi๐Ÿ˜‰

Edited by purvimehta - 13 years ago

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