Sinal FF: Second Chance (see pg1) - Page 13

Originally posted by: ashnotrai

wow...I just saw this today and read all 15 pages: Wow... the entire FF in one go! 👏 Good Job Ash and thank you for taking the time out... to read this longgg FF...😊

it is really good...: Thank you Ash..

loved the dialogues the ones between seema-kunal after he finds out about raveena-rohit and the ones between kunal-siddhi during the dance: Oh.. those are my favorites too... esp the Seema Kunal one... took almost 30 minutes to come up with that dialogue.. but now I do see it was well worth the effort...Thank you...

You have really captured all the characters well in your FF...I could imagine all the scenes with all the detail you have written.: Thank you... though I fear that sometimes maybe I did deviate a bit from the originial akdoo Kunal Chopra's character... but then again... my only reasoning for doing so... ppl in love can change..

Really good job- keep writing. Thank you Ash... very nice of you to say this!

My favourite bit has to be the scene where kunal gives siddhi his dairies...awww😊: Same here... I hope in the serial he does that...would be awesome...

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Mmmuaaah

You made my day darling:- Really! Awesome ! Happy my FF made your day!

tharas rahe the hum ki kuch Sinal scenes mil jaye...

humari armaan puri hogai:- 😃... Happy to be of some help!

thanks sooo much 🤗: You are welcome!!!!

Thank you for being such awesome audience...

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

Loved the last part, superbly written!

Originally posted by: arunima_luvdsky

nice ...u have done a gud Job :)

Originally posted by: NaGeSwArI

wow...amazing dear🤗🤗🤗

i loved it 😳: Thank you...Am very happy you like it...

sinal's second marriage😍🥳: Good idea na? I would like this to happen in serial too... par pata nahin... cvs kya khichdi pakayenge aage!

dumbeena escaped from rohit: Totally hope that happens in serial too.. abhi toh she is acting like an idiot!😡

witcha caught red-handed 👏🤪: Pata nahin yeh kab hoga... serial mein...

dear please come back soon with your new ff😳😃: Will try to.. right now creative burn-out...😆

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

Superb update, loved it immensely: Happy you like it!

please do continue writing more stories on SiNal: will try my best to do so... no promises though..😉

and thanks for the pm: You are welcome... and thanks for being such great audience!

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Originally posted by: shumi.

me again : ⭐️ again for being first...

Mehndi & Sangeet Night

woo hoo...my sweetu came...: aap na... kya kahoon ab main... apka aapke sweetu ke prati pyaar dekh ke main hairaan hoon!

Raveena main sach mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon... please meri baat mano.. mat karo yeh shaadi.." aw...how sweet my sweetu na! muah! muah! ...😛 😆😆😆

"Main tumhe lene aaya hoon Raveena, tum chalo mere saath!"...wow...i liked his attitude...😃 Attitude toh koot koot ke bhara hua hai aapke Sweetu mein!

yo...ritcha came !😲...i hate to see ritcha interfering in my sweetu's affire...😡 Ab kya karen! Kuch aur kaam nahin hai Ritcha ke paas jab dekho har ek ke kaam mein interfere karte hai...😊

my god...kunal came? ab mera sweetu ka ya?😭

argh! ritcha turned the plate!😡: Aisa hi hai.. waise Serial mein bhi madam ne yehi kiya!

kunal slaped ritcha! hahaha best part of your ff...👏: 🤣I hope serial mein bhi Kunal usse slap kare...

hahaha...finaly ritcgha ka parda faash...: Phew...If only Kunal serial mein bhi thoda dimaag lagaye...toh Ritcha ka parda faash wahan bhi ho jaye!

hooo...ritcha went to jail...🥳...my sweetu bhi...! 😭... Sorry par thodi saza toh milegi na...

aw sinal marriage again!😛...much needed one as kunal said first marriage was just a formality...😃: Happy you liked this idea...

great and happy ending...except my sweetu went to jail...😭

Second Chance...!lovely and opt name for your ff...waise har ekko seciond chance mitha hai...but not to my sweetu...y?😭...y?😭,...Y?😭: Arey woh maine socha ki next FF mein aapko Sweetu ki lawyer bana ke bhejo aur phir aapki aur Sweetu ki lovestory... bolo manjoor hai? Tab hoga Sweetu ka second chance...

nothing can be more romantic than marrying your husband/wife again very true...😳...

Shumi and Rani do such a good job at writing Romance based FFs...thanks nancy...yeh tho aap ka badappan hai😃

yep i enjoy reading and commenting ur ff...in fact it was my pleasure to do so...😃 ...i wish u write more and more ff and entertain us...😃: Ohhh... aap bahut aache ho...🤗

A round of applause for you... for giving us a wonderful ff.😃: Thank you...and sorry for delay... last week itna busy thi masti marne mein... kya khaoon!😊

and you deserve a

Thank you for the Golden smiley star!😊

You are welcome... and thank you for being such great audience!

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Awww so balm leg pe lagayenga ya kahin aur ???: Of course leg pe aur kahan.. kya ... itna imagination wild nahin jaana chaihiye...😆

Loved Sinal's little romantic moments:- Aww... am glad... tried to show a very nice and caring Kunal... hope serial mein aisa hi ho!

I would like to see more romance in the next chapter pls...pls...pls...: Could give it a try in next FF... dekhte hain!😊

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

Superb update!