Shivi os- the tough journey part 1 - Page 3

Very niceee

Please continue sooon

This was absolutely beautiful. How I wish it would be like this in the show...

Waiting for the next part eagerly...update soon.

I absolutely loved itttttt🥺❤️

Also can you pls share the link of your index!?I wanna read more of your stories🥰

Love love love❤❤❤ for this chapter

Kya likh diya man🥰🥰

Everything which I want to be highlighted in Show u cover all those in an amazing way 😍😍😍

This seems so real . What they are showing in Show is somewhat feels to be unreal bcoz shiva will not go against gaura so easily

I AM so frustrated when the gombi said tu apne bhai se jalta hai 😡😡like srsly is dora mahanta ki jhoothi murat ke peticoat chaap pati me akal nhi hai kya

Everything from raavi's insecurity, shiva's realisation raavi ka outburst reality check to gaura & susuma everything was so beautifully written & seems suitable to their character

Really looking forward for raavi's insecurity to Explore this is so easily Ignored in Show.

Aisa lag rha tha ye chap kbhi khatam hi na ho har chhoti chhoti cheez har chhota dialogue jo Show me ignore kiya gaya u covered it so nicely

U have explained pov on batwara very nicely👍👍👍

Even that bank a/c wala kand jo Show me easily ignore kr diya gaya tha use bhi achche se closure diya gaya isme.

I AM already fan of ur writing fro ur very 1st story on shivi but this made me more in love with ur writing🥰🥰

Is this is an OS or u r planning to continue it???

Plz plz plz continue this I really want this to be a ff or atleast ss. Want raavi ko give back to rishita on whatever she has said in store want shiva's education to Explore plzzz continue this

Just to let you know maine ye comment 2nd time likha hai 1st time jb likha tb pata nhi post nhi ho paaya I got so irritated but really want to show my love for ur writing hence written this again🥰🥰🥰

Pixie, only one word for this story, outstanding! How do you write so very well? This is everything I ever wanted to see in the show. As you said, we have seen enough times Raavi standing up for Shiva, trying to voice out her opinion but repeatedly being rejected or ridiculed. A relationship is only balanced only if there is give and take from both sides equally else becomes one-sided and we have seen the kind of imbalance in this show.

I am so glad you wrote this to show how a well balanced relationship should be and what are the ways to make it a success. This in itself is a redemption for all that Shiva did to Raavi for the past several months on the show. But unfortunately we won’t get any of it in the show.
Now can’t wait to read the next part.

WOW....that was one superb OS😍

We got all that we have been wishing for🔥

This is one of the best ffs that dealt with all these incidents♥️

Just loved it🤗

This was beautiful Pixie and this is what I would want to happen in the show with the current track. Thank you for this as we will not get to see this in TV.

I am not sure of what my reaction when Shiva corrected Suman, Raavi, Raavi naam heh uska 😆

Shocked or happy

Awesome. Well done 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻. Please update the next part soon. Do continue the story.☺️☺️☺️